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    A Fresh Start/Hidden Desires Ch 30

    Story written on April 26, 2006 by 1namillion.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=60601
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    The killer is revealed.

    Nylan let out the air she had been holding in for what seemed like an eternity. She watched in slow motion as Tina ran towards them as they kneeled in the parking lot and prayed for their lives. She touched her chest to make sure she was still breathing. Nylan could hear Shane coughing next to her so she knew she was still alive.
    "No wait please…don’t hurt them" Tina said nearly out of breathe from running, " I know who killed Ambrosia".
    "Tina no" Shane said in between coughs.
    "Quiet bitch" Neil yelled, "if you know who killed my little girl tell me and maybe i’ll spare the lives of these two worthless pieces of shit". Areale stepped closer to Tina and regarded her with suspicion ‘did this woman really know who killed her sister or was she bluffing’ she really didn’t have time for games.
    "That night I was at home waiting for Nylan, i had planned a special dinner for the both of us but she was late…then i got a phone call…."
    Flashback
    Ambrosia answered the door distraught, she stared back at Tina with fake fear in her eyes. Tina quickly noticed the red marks around her neck and lunged forward in concern for the woman.
    "Oh my god what happened to you" Tina asked frightened for the young woman standing in front of her eyes. Ambrosia choked up and formed fake tears to make her story more convincing.
    "She came over and she was mad, she was so angry and i didn’t know what to do" she cried more, "she hit and she hurt me and i just can’t take it anymore".
    "Who" Tina asked unable to fully understand what was really going on with Ambrosia.
    "Nylan" Tina’s air was caught in her chest, "we’ve been sleeping together behind your and Shane’s back, it was voluntary the first few times but after i broke it off she became angry and said if i didn’t have sex with her she would not work with me anymore". Tina was shocked by the revelation, she wanted to cry but she was too angry to show her emotions. All she could manage was an inaudible "What".
    "So when she came over tonight i told her i was telling Shane and she got mad and started hitting me and choking me, she was just so strong i couldn’t stop her" Ambrosia began sobbing uncontrollably and fell to the ground. Tina immediately kneeled down and comforted the woman. Her mind was in a million places, she couldn’t believe Nylan had done this it was just not in her nature but Ambrosia couldn’t be lying. Tina picked up Ambrosia and guided her towards the bed.
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    2. Hey stranger, Fabulous to see you back on the site. I loved this story for all of the intrigue and mystery but now after all this time you reveal the killer and end with another cliffhanger. Please don’t wait so long before post the next chapter. Please, Your Loyal FAn.

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