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    A Fresh Start/Hidden Desires Ch 30

    Story written on April 26, 2006 by 1namillion.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=60601
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    The killer is revealed.

    "Can you stay with me please" Ambrosia asked and Tina agreed. She and Ambrosia closed their eyes for a few moments. Tina had somehow fallen asleep conforting Ambrosia but only to be awoken by two women arguing. She was very sure one of the voices was Ambrosia unsure of who the other voice might be, Tina walked out into the living room of Ambrosia’s suite as one voice turned into a scream and then silence. She turned the corner and was shocked by who she saw…the initial shock of what she had seen caused Tina to faint and when she woke up she was lying next to a dead Ambrosia.
    "So who the fuck was this mystery woman blondie because i’m really not into guessing games and i’m running out patience" Neil scoffed unable to hide the anger in his voice. "As for you tough girl" he pointed at Nylan"you put your hands on my daughter and im gonna put my hands on you".
    "Neil please…i swear i never hit your daughter" Nylan plead.
    "Shut up okay…i wanna hear what she has to say" he turned to Tina, "im waiting blondie".
    "I saw two of them" Tina stated and it confused everyone including Neil at first she didn’t quite understand but now it all made sense to her, "I saw two Ambrosia’s".
    "Lady are you smoking rocks" Neil questioned.
    "No im not…it was her…it was your other daughter she killed her own sister and she tried to frame me for it" Tina yelled. Shane thought back to that night she remembered Tina telling her it was two Ambrosia’s in the suite that night but she thought Tina was in shock from possibly murdering Ambrosia herself now it all made sense. She had cleaned up a crime scene to protect Tina and it was Areale all along who had murdered her sister.
    "Daddy that bitch is lying…i swear i loved Amber i would have never hurt her" Areale screamed. Neil thought back to that night Areale had returned home that night with scratches on her face telling him some farfetched lie about a fight with her boyfriend, Carlo. But he remembered Carlo saying he hadn’t seen her in a week when questioned later by Neil’s thugs, they beat him severely almost to death.
    "You little lying bith you…why did you kill my little girl" Neil sobbed as her walked over to Areale and shook her fiercely. Areale immediately drew her gun on her father.
    "This is why Daddy…she was always your little girl…you made her up like a doll while you trained me to be a cold hearted killer and thats just what i am Daddy" Neil looked at his daughter as if she were an alien, he didn’t know at all anymore and now more than ever he did regret the way he raised his daughters. He backed away from his daughter’s pistol regarding her with suspicion.
    "Don’t do this pumpkin" Neil pleaded. Shane and Nylan looked at each other both knowing what they had to do but that didn’t mean they necessarily wanted to, being the hero sometimes backfired.
    "Now its pumpkin" Areale yelled as a shot fired and hit Neil in the knee sending him falling to the cement. She fired again and it hit him in the thigh. "No baby" he begged. She looked at him unfeeling and unfazed by his pleads "bye Daddy" she aimed for his skull and prepared to fire. Nylan and Shane crept up behind her both grabbing her to get control of both of the guns she was wielding. Shane elbowed her just as a shot went off and the three of them fell to the ground.
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    2. Hey stranger, Fabulous to see you back on the site. I loved this story for all of the intrigue and mystery but now after all this time you reveal the killer and end with another cliffhanger. Please don’t wait so long before post the next chapter. Please, Your Loyal FAn.

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