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    A helping hand and a push in the right direction-CH. 31

    Story written on October 29, 2006 by toribio.
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    B&T reconnect after some time apart: Melvin and Tina talk

    A helping hand and a push in the right direction-CH. 31

     

     

    The baby question had thrown them for a bit of a loop as far as Bette was concerned another baby was definitely a topic she’d be interested in discussing further. She would have loved to have been around when Eli was a baby she knew that circumstances had prevented her from helping Tina raise Eli but if they had another baby she would be there with Tina…they would raise their baby together the way they had planned. She’d have a chance to be there every step of the way and Eli didn’t seem to have a problem with having another baby he was the one that suggested it in the first place, but was having another baby a realistic goal for them. They were a bit older now not too old to have a baby but it certainly meant that they’d technically have to start over from scratch. Eli was going to be ten soon but since he was two years ahead of schedule in school it meant that in six more years he’d be graduating from high school and would probably move away to college. If they were seriously going to consider having a baby it meant that they’d have to start trying right away would a new baby fit into their plans for this coming year. Who would carry the baby…sure Tina was younger but this coming year she’d be fairly busy at work and wouldn’t be able to take very good care of herself. Plus she had a difficult birth and almost bleed out did they want to take that chance again…she really hadn’t thought about being the birth mother before, this next year she’d be looking for their new house and finding a new school for Eli although it would mean that later in her pregnancy she wouldn’t be able to fly which would keep her from checking in at her galleries. She really needed to talk to Tina. An inquiry that was suggested innocently enough by Eli would have major impact on their future together they had not discussed it before going to bed because to be honest they weren’t sure what their own thoughts on the subject were.

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    1. love this story… and i know all about wanting to comment to the comments… love how eli now calls bette ma… that was so cute… and i could just picture bette’s face when he said ma… can’t wait for the opening… please post as soon as you can

    2. Comments are great but the story is the main reason that I am here. It also does not matter how long you take between post. Both of your stories are master pieces and most enjoyable. It would be fun to see Bette have the baby and use the same donor as Eli’s.

    9. Torbio – thank you for another wonderful chapter in this awesome story we would rather have chapters than comments… Hope you post another chapter SOOONNNNNNNNN!!!! Hope things are going well.

    10. Don’t worry about the comments and not having time to thank us individually. Everyone sees everything from a different perspective so opinions and comments will vary. Do know that we all thoroughly enjoy your writing and can’t wait until you post again.

    11. Me again, Kids are so funny and you never know what will come out of their mouth, My 19 mos old grandson had to go to the ear Dr, this past week. as the Dr was looling in his ears, he told the dr. Hey,This is not worth a damn. Where it came from we will never know. thanks

    13. Okay, I usually don’t go for stories with B&T sap-fest but this was well-written; with good dialog that didn’t digress on wild, emotional tangents, lol. The emotions too are well written and thus help to connect the characters. The part where Bette cries on Tina’s shoulder is a well-disguised cliché(I know I’m being a devil’s advocate) but you made it work in context of the situation. This chapter read like a classic Bette and Tina plot line(i.e with hope for the future, lmao). The only difference is that it didn’t leave a bad taste in my mouth *weg* So yeah, keep the mush factor to a minimum (or at least don’t type out the emotions, use imagery and gestures instead, lol) and you’ll have a winner;) Great post, keep writing!

    14. I had rather you write than comment to us. we should all be thank you for you time and energy,and effort to make us happy. Not to worry,just keep writing these beautiful chapter, I LOVE ELI. thanks

    16. I agree with Christy..Its great to see comments expressing the readers take on the story…I just enjoy your story because they are so happy and it’s their boy who brought them back 2gether..that’s so nice that a kid would love his mom so much that he would go get her lost love back…a lot of single parent kids get real jealous of a new partner for their parent…please post when you can…

    19. Thanks for the post, I love this wonderful story. Please don’t worry about personal comments or when you can post next, I’m hooked so when ever you have the time to post I’ll definitely read. I loved the talk between Tina and Melvin, he sounded sincere to me…..and of course the little ‘thing’ on the couch with B&T was great :o)) Have a great Sunday…..oh BTW you just gotta love Eli, so sweet :o))

    21. your writing talents are endless, you never cease to amaze me. awesome post, and thank you thank you thank you for the long post……please feel free to post again reallll soon….i have missed this fic……

    22. Of course we like it when you respond to our comments, but that is a added bonus. We know you appreciate our comments in the fact that you continue to write for us. I love this story so much. It is well written and well thought out, it’s amazing. Thank you for 6 pages that was a treat, you covered so much. It’s about quality not quanity. Granted we would love to see you post everyday but sometime it’s not possible. We can say that when you do post it is well worth it, we can tell you give it your all. We’ll be eagerly awaiting your next post.

    23. Ditto w/Dainty. Truely awesome. Love that u let Eli call Bette “Ma”. Don’t like the MaB or MaT bit. PLEASE choose Bette to carry their second BABY sharing the same donor as Eli!!!!!! PPS

    24. Tori, you do us a great service by sharing your AWESOME talent with us. We all seek and crave acknowledgement but we also understand about not having enough time to do all the thngs one wants to do. All we ask is that you continue to write this wonderful and loving story for us. You treat the characters so well and let them find and show the love they still have for each other even after all the years apart. That is something everyone wants whether they are gay or straight. Love, acceptance, grace and forgiveness are the all consuming passions for us all and you continue to show us how we can have that by showing it in the girls lives. And WE ALL LOVE ELI, he is just a wonder. All I’m trying to say is, WE LOVE THIS STORY, and love you for giving it to us. Please continue when you can, we do understand time constraints. Thanks for sharing your talent.

    25. Yeah…what they all said since I fell asleep (exhaustion, not boredom) before finishing your latest chapter! Continuing this story is thanks enough for me. It’s so sweet and believable. Love how you handled the Melvin situation and fitted in a “quickie” for our girls! Eli, as always, is such a charmer! You see how we jump on this story as soon as it posts–you’ve got many of us seriously hooked! Post when you can!

    26. Sure evyone loves to read response to their comments, BUT you writing this beautiful story is thanks enough for me :o). Since Tina’s family has turned their backs on them, I think that it is important for Melvin to reconcile with B&T and their family. Eli needs another grand parent, and grand children are well known for melting old farts hearts LOL. I am looking foward to the bonding of this family. Please check your PM’s.

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