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A long time coming. Chapter 3
Everyone just sits back. They all know what this mean. Shane will not take this well, and it looks like it is going to become a very bumpy ride again.
Dana-“poor Shane”
Tina-“As much as I love her, what she did to Carmen was horrible. I can’t say I blame Carmen for trying to move on and get her life back together without the one person that send it off the tracks like a freight train.”
With a pained look on her face Bette just sits back. She knows exactly how shane is going to feel. She and Tina had been through the exact same thing when Bette cheated on Tina with Candice.
Tina grabs Bettes hand and kisses it.
Tina-“But I found my way back home, if Carmen really loves Shane she will come back to her. I think Shane has a lot of work to do before that but she is strong enough.”
The group sighs at this show of affection.
Max stands up and starts pacing.
Max-“someone is going to have to be near her, just to keep an eye and see how she is doing. Alice it would probably be best if it were you or jenny.”
Before Alice even gets a chance to say anything Jenny has made the decision who will be shadowing shane.
Jenny-“Ill do it. It probably would be best if I do it. I am working on a new screen play so I am home a lot. I don’t have to go into the office. And it wouldn’t be abnormal for me to be around her all the time. We are roommates you know.”
Alice-“Yes we know Jenny, if that is what you want go right ahead. Right now making sure Shane makes it through this is our top priority.”
Back at wax Shane is just finishing up a clients hair when her cell phone starts to buzz on the table.
Shane looks at the collar id and see’s carmen’s face.
Shane-“do you mind if I take this? It is kind of important.”
Client-“No go right ahead.”
Shane walks into the back for some privacy. Her heart is beating a mile a minute as she flips her phone open.
Shane-“hello”
Carmen-“hey, are you working?”
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Great job. I like the slow build up and I’m impressed with Shane the most. For holding it together after the Carmen let down. Now we need a flaw in Sam that Carmen is blind to and Shane can see. Maybe Shane can save her from Sam. That is if you want to put a negative light on Sam. If you like Sam, then maybe an accident resulting in a sudden loss of Sam would show Carmen how short life is, and perhaps reconsider her view of Shane. Thanks for listening and for posting an awesome story 😃👍
Stay with Sam Carmen,Shane will never change.PPS