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A long time coming. Chapter 3
Shane sits back in shock, she expected this to be bad, but she didn’t expect this.
Carmen continues. “About two months ago I met another girl. Her name is Sam, I have been really trying and I adore her. She is sweet, funny, athletic, and so much more. I want to give her a fair chance. That is why I don’t even want to be friends.. When I see you around ill be friendly, but all in all I don’t want to hang out and act like nothing ever happened. Because it did shane. I never had these feel”
Stopping herself
Carmen-“I had never felt for someone the way I felt for you.”
At that Carmen finished her food and walked out of the planet complete crushed by what she just did. But it had to be done she thought to herself. Still why did she feel like a piece of her just died?
Jenny walked into the Planet catching the last half of Carmen’s and Shane’s convo.
‘shit, here we go’ she thinks to herself.
Jenny-“Shane, what’s going on. I thought you were at work today, why are you here?” playing as if she knew nothing. Something Jenny has always done very well.
Shane replies with a shocked and broken look on her face. In a very quiet voice.“Carmen brought me here after work to completely break off all contact……..”
Jenny-“ oh no Shane!” throwing her arms around her.
Shane-“she is seeing someone else Jen! She is moving on, at least I know how she really feels now.”
Shane just gets up and walks away leaving jenny stunned.
Jenny gets on her phone and texts everyone in the gang. ‘guys it happened. Carmen left shane, she told her she is moving on and doesn’t even want friendship. Shane is already not looking good. I am surprised she was even able to keep her lunch down. She got up and just walked out. I am worried, we need to go get her’
Jenny thinks to herself ’where ever that is.’
For the next two days no one see Shane. They all have been calling, leaving voice mails, and texting but hear nothing. Everyone fears the worst. That she is in some slum hole and drowning away her pain in the three things that she loves the most.
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Great job. I like the slow build up and I’m impressed with Shane the most. For holding it together after the Carmen let down. Now we need a flaw in Sam that Carmen is blind to and Shane can see. Maybe Shane can save her from Sam. That is if you want to put a negative light on Sam. If you like Sam, then maybe an accident resulting in a sudden loss of Sam would show Carmen how short life is, and perhaps reconsider her view of Shane. Thanks for listening and for posting an awesome story 😃👍
Stay with Sam Carmen,Shane will never change.PPS