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A long time coming. Chapter 6
Sam-“ im moving out”
Carmen just looks at sam with a confused look on her face.
Sam-“ you were bound to find out who I really was, I live life for myself. I have no desire to be held down. Just like Shane”
Carmen-“ you don’t know shit about shane” finishing her sentence before she even realized what she was saying.
Sam-“ im not here to fight with you, I am just here to get my stuff and go. You will never change, you are weak, you will go back to shane and she will keep doing the same shit to you. So I feel no need to keep trying to save you. I hope for your sake she works out her shit and can start treating you right. But like I said to her I know who she is and what she does. So I doubt she will ever shane, I know I have no desire to”
At that sam walks out with all of her stuff. Leaving Carmen to sit by herself, with nothing but her own thoughts.
Next thing Carmen knows her phone is ringing. She picks it up without even realizing it.
Shane-“ Carm, you there?”
Carmen-“hmm, yeah. I didn’t expect to hear from you until later tonight.”
Shane-“ well I got done early, so I figured if it was ok with you we could maybe go out to lunch before Bette’s gallery opening?”
Carmen-“yeah I guess that works with me”
Shane-“okay, say I pick you up in about a half an hour?”
Carmen-“that sounds perfect to me, ill see you then”
Just like clock word Shane is knocking on Carmen’s apartment door in a half an hour.
When Carmen opens the door Shane is so take back that she has nothing to say. Carmen is wearing a silky red dress that clings to her and falls off in all the right places.
Shane in a very nervous tone “hey”
Carmen-“ hey yourself”
Shane-“you look beautiful”
Carmen-“ you don’t look half bad yourself”
Shane knows if she stands there any longer they wont be making it anywhere tonight but to carmen’s bedroom.
Shane-“ you ready to go?”
Thinking to herself ‘ man she looks so fucking hot, I would love to just pull her into the house and reconnect with her. But whatever she has planned must be big if she has been holding in in and not telling anyone for the past week’
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(43 votes, average: 3.42 out of 5)
😱 holy sheet Jane! Mama ain’t gonna be happy. Sam has been bumped from tropical storm to cat 5 Hurricane Sam 😨 we should brace ourselves for the shit storm, should we? Great job girl, you really want that drama queen crown. Sam is either going to die or serve back to back life sentences. Either way, it makes for a great story. Thank you😘
freaking brilliant, awesome chap!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
YAY! I am so happy that Sharmen is back!! I know Shane will do better this time. Hopefully Carmen’s mother will leave this decision to her and stay out. But hispanic mothers meddle, I know from experience. lol. Great update! PPS!
i just read 6 chaps in like a 1/2 hour..so luving this fic! wish shane beat the piss outa sam..she’s kinda creepy..anyway can’t wait for more!!
Way to go Shane! If B & T can have second chances no sense that the others can’t have them as well. Sometimes couples get together before they’re ready to, so things happen and they split up, they mature a little and then they come back together when the time is right. It can happen!
Carmen think about.Shane means trouble.PPS
Wow I wonder how Carmens mom will react, not well I think. As for Sam, she is a bully and Shane was never a bully a player yes, but never a bully. She would never beat up a woman she proclaimed to have feelings for. So hopefully Sam is out of the picture for good. But I have a feeling we haven’t heard the last of Sam. Great story.