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    A long time coming. Chapter 6

    Carmen-“yeah, where are we going”

    Shane-“ just this little place I know”

    The drive wasn’t long but it felt like forever. They didn’t talk much on the way to the restaurant, you could cut their tension with a butter knife.  Finally they arrive and the only thing Carmen could think is ‘ she never fails to amaze me’

    Shane pulls into an empty parking lot of the most expensive restaurant in town.

    Carmen-“are they closed, tonight is normally their busiest night of the week”

    Shane-“ kind of. They are closed for everyone but us”

    Carmen doesn’t know what to say to this.

    Shane-“ well are we going to go in, or would you rather we just stand out here in the parking lot?”

    With a huge smile on her face “ lets go” grabbing shane’s arm and walking up to the front doors where they are greeted by a single waiter who takes them to their table.

     

    Carmen-“ what is all of this about?”

    Shane-“ I wanted to do something nice for you.”

    Carmen-“ so you had the nicest most expensive restaurant in town shut down for just us? How did you manage this”

    Shane-“ lets just say I know people who didn’t mind helping me surprise you.”

    Carmen-“ so was this you big plan you have been hiding all week?”

    Shane-“ not all of it, I think you will find a lot surprising tonight.” With a huge smile on her face.

     

    They sit in silence until their dinner comes.

    Shane-“ so how have you been?”

    Carmen-“ im doing well, my career is taking off at Hit. Which is very exciting”

    Shane-“ I am proud of you. You seem like you are doing really well”

    Carmen has no clue what to say, so she asks the first thing that she can think of.

    Carmen-“ so what have you been up to, I hear that you have been getting back into photography?”

    Shane-“ yeah I have been working on it, I finally feel inspired to start shooting again”

    Carmen-“ what did that?” speaking before she really thought about it.

    Shane not sure if she wanted to answer that question.

    Shane-“ umm well, you”

    Carmen-“ really?” not quite sure what to say to that.

    Comments

    1. 😱 holy sheet Jane! Mama ain’t gonna be happy. Sam has been bumped from tropical storm to cat 5 Hurricane Sam 😨 we should brace ourselves for the shit storm, should we? Great job girl, you really want that drama queen crown. Sam is either going to die or serve back to back life sentences. Either way, it makes for a great story. Thank you😘

    2. YAY! I am so happy that Sharmen is back!! I know Shane will do better this time. Hopefully Carmen’s mother will leave this decision to her and stay out. But hispanic mothers meddle, I know from experience. lol. Great update! PPS!

    3. Way to go Shane! If B & T can have second chances no sense that the others can’t have them as well. Sometimes couples get together before they’re ready to, so things happen and they split up, they mature a little and then they come back together when the time is right. It can happen!

    4. Wow I wonder how Carmens mom will react, not well I think. As for Sam, she is a bully and Shane was never a bully a player yes, but never a bully. She would never beat up a woman she proclaimed to have feelings for. So hopefully Sam is out of the picture for good. But I have a feeling we haven’t heard the last of Sam. Great story.

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