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A long time coming. Chapter 6
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Shane turns around in front of a huge white screen suspended into the air. Just as she turns around the white sheet falls behind her and the crowd cheers in excitement.
Carmen is so shocked she doesn’t know what to do. Right in front of her is another huge showing of pictures. All of these pictures are shane’s work. Some are of Carmen and their friends. The rest are of couples on their wedding day, playing with children. This huge piece of work makes out the image of shane on one knee with a ring in hand in front of Carmen. The title at the top of the board reads “ life would have never started without you”
Walking up to Carmen shane gets down on one knee.
Carmen-“ shane what are you doing?”
Shane-“ it isn’t what you think, just let me get through this please. Carmen I love you more than anything in this world. I know we have been through rough times. But life without you has no meaning to me at all. I am asking you not to marry me, but to take me back and see how I have changed. And if you can do that I promise one day you will see me in this same position with a ring in hand. You are my life Carmen, my soul, my everything. I want nothing more in this world than for you to be happy.”
Carmen cuts her off by pulling her up and kissing her passionately.
Carmen nor shane realize it but there is still a huge crowd behind them and all are cheering.
Carmen breaking from the kiss-“ are you serious?”
Shane-“ I have never been more serious about anything in my life Carmen. I know I can do this. I want to make you a promise right here is you will have me back.”
Carmen-“Shane I have never wanted anything but to be yours from the first time we laid eyes on one another.”
Shane-“ I promise I will be faithful to you, completely honest, and never run if times get hard.”
Carmen-“ what more could I ask for” pulling shane in for another kiss.
Carmen-“ shane…..”
Worried by the way Carmen just said her name
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😱 holy sheet Jane! Mama ain’t gonna be happy. Sam has been bumped from tropical storm to cat 5 Hurricane Sam 😨 we should brace ourselves for the shit storm, should we? Great job girl, you really want that drama queen crown. Sam is either going to die or serve back to back life sentences. Either way, it makes for a great story. Thank you😘
freaking brilliant, awesome chap!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
YAY! I am so happy that Sharmen is back!! I know Shane will do better this time. Hopefully Carmen’s mother will leave this decision to her and stay out. But hispanic mothers meddle, I know from experience. lol. Great update! PPS!
i just read 6 chaps in like a 1/2 hour..so luving this fic! wish shane beat the piss outa sam..she’s kinda creepy..anyway can’t wait for more!!
Way to go Shane! If B & T can have second chances no sense that the others can’t have them as well. Sometimes couples get together before they’re ready to, so things happen and they split up, they mature a little and then they come back together when the time is right. It can happen!
Carmen think about.Shane means trouble.PPS
Wow I wonder how Carmens mom will react, not well I think. As for Sam, she is a bully and Shane was never a bully a player yes, but never a bully. She would never beat up a woman she proclaimed to have feelings for. So hopefully Sam is out of the picture for good. But I have a feeling we haven’t heard the last of Sam. Great story.