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    A long time coming. Chapter 6

    Shane-“hmm?”

    Carmen-“ take me home”

    With a devilish smile

    Shane-“ are you sure that is what you want?”

    Carmen-“ the only thing I have ever been more sure of in this world is you.”

    At that shane thanks everyone again for coming and they are off to carmen’s apartment.

    When They get to the door Carmen can barely get the key in the lock due to how nervous she is. Finally the key turns and the door swings open.

    Shane can tell how nervous Carmen is and trys to slow down to comfort her.

    Shane-“ I never thought I would say this, but if you aren’t ready we can just curl up and talk, or watch a movie. I wouldn’t mind”

    Carmen doesn’t react the way shane though she would to this. Carmen is hurt.

    Carmen-“ you don’t want to?”

    Shane lifting carmen’s chin to make her look her in the eye

    Shane-“ I didn’t say that, I want to. More than you could imagine, I just want to take all of this at your pace baby”

    The sound of Shane calling her baby again makes Carmen smile so vibrantly you would think her cheeks are about to burst.

    Carmen starts to make out with shane and pulling her to the bedroom.  Their hands are all over one another. Finding new places that they never knew existed on one another.

    Shane slowly starts to make love to Carmen. Carmen cant help it and starts to cry again.

    Stopping

    Shane-“ whats wrong?” with a very concerned tone

    Carmen-“ nothing, everything is perfect”

    After saying this Carmen rolls on top of shane and slowly starts to go down on her. Shanes breath catches when Carmen hits her hips. Carmen knows how much this drives shane crazy so she prolongs going any further. Sucking on her hip bones and licking her way down her thigh. Shane can barely talk as of this point but she manages to get out a breathless “please” at that Carmen bites her lip and makes her way to shane’s center, teasing her and sucking on her clit. Carmen knows that shane is getting close so she slowly inserts two fingers inside of her and starts to pump in and out. It doesn’t take long to push shane over the edge. Carmen feels as shane finds her release and makes her way back up to shanes face. They share a passionate kiss.

    Comments

    1. 😱 holy sheet Jane! Mama ain’t gonna be happy. Sam has been bumped from tropical storm to cat 5 Hurricane Sam 😨 we should brace ourselves for the shit storm, should we? Great job girl, you really want that drama queen crown. Sam is either going to die or serve back to back life sentences. Either way, it makes for a great story. Thank you😘

    2. YAY! I am so happy that Sharmen is back!! I know Shane will do better this time. Hopefully Carmen’s mother will leave this decision to her and stay out. But hispanic mothers meddle, I know from experience. lol. Great update! PPS!

    3. Way to go Shane! If B & T can have second chances no sense that the others can’t have them as well. Sometimes couples get together before they’re ready to, so things happen and they split up, they mature a little and then they come back together when the time is right. It can happen!

    4. Wow I wonder how Carmens mom will react, not well I think. As for Sam, she is a bully and Shane was never a bully a player yes, but never a bully. She would never beat up a woman she proclaimed to have feelings for. So hopefully Sam is out of the picture for good. But I have a feeling we haven’t heard the last of Sam. Great story.

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