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A Means To An End 6
“I found you….”
“I called you….”
“Is Carmen ok?”
“Yeah she is beat up bad….and ….she is good though……. Carmen is tough….she told me not kill him….it’s the only reason why he is alive….”
“Shane….I have to bring you in maybe A.D Porter can help….”
“How? Did she tell you how much she helped Carmen when her girlfriend died….she tell you how she helped me when she thought Carmen was dead? How about you…she tell in you bed how much she wants to help us…..she likes that…I thought when I called her and asked for help that she would…instead she writes us up as conspirators in our sons kidnapping, in John and Miriam’s murder what cause they left us all their stuff and it happened that they had a huge chunk of money….fuck her….I bet she never told you how she fucked Carmen at the academy….she likes her meals fresh….”
“Are you telling me that A.D Porter had an affair with Carmen?”
‘Yeah way before any of us and any of this….Carmen pleaded with her for help in getting the guy who killed Helena….all she got was one foot out the door and a official reprimand for how she went about it…..I don’t even know why I asked her to help us….I thought she ……well she sent you…and you helped….”
“I….I didn’t know…..”
“I can see that….look Bette she is a suit. It’s all about the bottom line you know? Right now….I see a lot of Carmen in you….back when she was an agent. So you have a choice let me go…..I need to get to our baby….I need to get this stuff to Carm to take care of her injuries….I need to go…choose…Carmen had to choose….and so do you…..your too nice for this job Agent Kennard….you know I am not a criminal….this is the address…tell them we are there….”
“You are wrong about Bette…..she really wants to help you……and don’t tell me your not a criminal….you rob, you steal….you will kill if it’s necessary….your way to charming for your own good….get out of here…….”
Shane did something very unexpected. She kissed me. It took my breath away, she stroked my cheek with her fingertips. She smirked a shit eating grin.
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(10 votes, average: 3.70 out of 5)
I love how supportive Carmen is being but I am anxious to find out why! Love the update and ca’t wait for them to find their boy!
Wow, this is where the action begins right? Not that there hasn’t been enough of things going on in your story, never!! But bring it on! I also like how you give those hints of what is going to happen, makes me feel like I’m sitting on needels here! And I feel VERY honored by your dedication….thank you SO much!! Just letting you know my opinion =)
Very well written, that phone call conversation was very realistic.
Sooo happy Carmen didn’t freak out & blame Shane. Great chap.
I love how you surprise me with your twists…Conrad was Dana’s husbnad, Carmen not blaming Shane….and your foreshadowing, all the things that keep me yearning for more updates!!
I really like this story. Very intense and well-written. Great imagery and symbolism. The dialog is awesome too. Great update! PPS!
damn.. is all i can say.. this story just keeps getting better and better… great update and please continue soon.. oh and i liked the phone call very realistic..:P
the dramaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
I never want this story to end!