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A new and different B & T beginning CH. 18
Tina: Yourre right…….Im kind of hungry…….I guess you worked up my appatitet miss Porter
Bette got of the bed and helped Tina on to her feet. They walked hand in hand into the kitchen, where Tina sat down at the table and Bette made them some sandwiches and Te.
Bette found some plates and set the table. Tina was just sitting there, starring at the newspaper from this morning. Bette went over to her, sat on her own knees, taking Tinas hand into hers.
Bette: Tee…..maybe we should talk about this……..I mean, what happend at the cafe in New York
Tina: Only if you want to, Bette
Bette: I think its time………you see Tina……..Lara and I had a meeting at Cypros with a miss Candace Juwel
Tina: You met Candace at Cypros?
Bette: Yes……we had an appointment with her………you know Candace Juwel, Tee?
Tina: Yes, I met her several times at meetings, dinners you know
Bette: Ohhhh…………..what did you think of her?
Tina: Do I detect a bit of jealousy, Bette
Bette: Maybe………..did you go out with her?
Tina: What makes you say that, Bette?
Bette: I dont know……..just a feeling I have
Tina: Ok maybe youre right……..Candace did ask me out a couple of times, but I turned her down………are you happy now?
Bette: I dont know if Im happy about it, but definitely pleased you didnt go out with her…….otherwise you and I, may never have met, Tee
Tina: Youre right…….maybe its ment to be
Bette: Tee………..about the incident at the cafe……..I was having lunch with John, when my phone rang…….I reached down for it, because I thought it was you…..but it was Kit……that reminds me, I have to pay her a visit, to say thank you
Tina: Say thank you for what?, Bette
Bette: For saving my life……Tee, if Kit hadnt called me at that time…….I would be dead right now……..the bullet was meant for me
Tina: WHAT……………..what do you mean by that?
Bette: Someone wantet me dead and they were close to pulling it off…….but the question is who……..Peter was still in LA and only the guys at work, knew where Lara and I were……..I should call Lara to check in and see if she has some news
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(39 votes, average: 3.36 out of 5)
Trolle, as I just discovered your story recently, I preferred to comment after having read all the chapters from the beginning.
Well… read them ? Savour them would be better to say ! You made a really excellent work and it was a great journey to do, discovering all the former chapters I missed until now. Detective stories with psychology are a genre I always liked a lot in literature !
So, from now I will not stay a “silent reader” anymore : I’m caught and happy to be – and will be delighted to wait and comment your next chapters !
By the way, please don’t be afraid of this good old writersblock : every authors know it, from time to time. So don’t worry, enjoy your break week and let inspiration comes back slowly, sweetly… Your story is great, both a thriller and an engaging romance : a wonderful and original mix !
Cheer up !! *wink*
Awww….. you’re going back to the sea, and you didn’t email me? And what’s wrong, honey? What’s going on with life, that has you upset? (I sent you two emails eariler, today….. so, email me, when you get back.) Again, Happy Birthday!! :)
Hope you have a wonderful birthday! Enjoy the sea and I hope that whatever is bothering you get better and you come back refreshed. Take care and of course, love the story
Hope you have a wonderful birthday! Enjoy the sea and I hope that whatever is bothering you get better and you come back refreshed. Take care and of course, love the story
K
wonderful chap, love this story, don’t stay away too long.
Happy belated birthday!!! Great chapter! Hope the writers block doesn’t keep you down for too long!
Do continue this story, love the line that your taking…Happy B-day, how OLD are you now???? tks
HAPPY BIRTHDAY :) And this chapter was great to, doesn’t seem like you have a writersblock to me :) Take your time, I’ll be waiting.
Happy Birthday :-)
Hej Trolle tillykke med fødselsdagen;-)Jeg synes nu ikke dette kapitel bar præ af at du skulle have skrive problemer. Det var en rigtig god dialog du har fÃ¥et skrevet… Have a nice week by the sea and hopefully you will come back refreshed and ready to give us a new chapter of your great story
awesome story..you are a GREAT writer, and happy Birthday! Enjoy the ocean, relax, and have fun! Will patiently wait for next update….
Happy Brirthday. Can’t wait for you to continue withe this story but for now enjoy your special day.
Hi! Your story is great. Keep it up. I am looking forward to the next chapter. Have a Happy Birthday!
HAPPY Birthday, I know that your age is your own business, but how long have you been in business? (ha, ha). I hope you enjoy your stay at the ocean. I love the ocean in fact I was scheduled to go he Cali. for a week at the end of this month. I love the drive up and down the PCH. As I said before, I am loving you story and your mamagement of it. Big step for Bette to introduce Tina and charlot to Kit (love it). If you had a writers block,it looks like you have unblocked it rather well. In reference to Kit’s statement, is there some underlining reason that Bette left the Art Gallery and went into police work? Maybe there is an avenue for her to return to the gallery. I agree with B&TForever, I think that the candy kane is involved in all of this. Maybe she is the type that can’t take no for an answer. To bad, so sad, Candy because Tina is officially off the market. She is now TAKEN and Bette will not be sharing. It would be fun to see Bette and Tina out clubing and Tina letting all the chicks know that Bette is taken. Please continue and welcome back.
oh boy i love it..Bette finally open up to Tina i think they are great together and Charlot is so cute..great chapter post soon thanks
I hope you had a nice birthday!!!!!! great update and nothing wrong with the story except you don’t post enough lol
This chapter is wonderful and please post soon, thanks! HAPPY BIRTHDAY!