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A new and different B & T beginning CH. 18
Tina: (smiling) and you dont talk about feelings Bette
Bette: I know, but you make me a better person, and I want to open myself up to you, because I love you, Tee
Tina: So where do we go from here?
Bette: Well take it slowly…..one step at a time…..and as long as you need me here, Ill stay with you and Charlot…..here in the apartment and then well see, where we are going…….now is there anything else you want to know?
Tina: Well….!!!!!!!!
Bette: Tee, please dont ask me, to give a description or report on my past relationships
Tina: (smiling) Ok, Bette……..Ill have to except, that you have been with a lot of other woman
Bette: TINA……dont go there
Tina: But, youre with me now and you are staying that way……..now get over here and give me a kiss
Bette: Do you always get, what you want miss Kennard?
Tina: Always………even you, miss Porter
They both leaned in and shared the most wonderful kiss. The door opened in the hall and Charlot came running.
Maria: Anyone home?……..halloo
Tina: Were in the kitchen, Maria
Charlot came running in to the kitchen, hopping on to Bettes lap. Giving her mother a big hug and a kiss. Turning around to Bette, hugging her too.
Tina: So did you have a good day, sweety?
Charlot: The best…….we made Dennis act like a monky, while feeding them with bananas. The zookeeper was there, to give them their lunch, mommy
Bette was laughing out loud, she could only picture Dennis like a monkey and she laughed even harder
Bette: (laughing) I guess you three had a great time then
Charlot: The best
Bettes phone startet ringing. Bette put Charlot down and went into the guestroom to answer it.
Bette: Hallo
Kit: Hey, baby sis……..how are you?………you didnt return my call…….are you ok?
Bette: Yes, Im fine Kit……..and you dont have to worry about me…….what are you doing for lunch tomorrow?
Kit: A lot of work……..since youre not here to help out………why dont you quit you job and come work here……..this is where you are meant to be sis……you know that
Bette: Ok………why dont I come by tomorrow with lunch and help you out…….and Kit, Im bringing someone, I want you to meet ok
Kit: This sound serious………shall we say at 1 oclock
Bette: Perfect……….Kit, what about daddy
Kit: Hes not here this week, so you are safe. See you tomorrow. Bye sis
Bette: Bye Kit
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(39 votes, average: 3.36 out of 5)
Trolle, as I just discovered your story recently, I preferred to comment after having read all the chapters from the beginning.
Well… read them ? Savour them would be better to say ! You made a really excellent work and it was a great journey to do, discovering all the former chapters I missed until now. Detective stories with psychology are a genre I always liked a lot in literature !
So, from now I will not stay a “silent reader” anymore : I’m caught and happy to be – and will be delighted to wait and comment your next chapters !
By the way, please don’t be afraid of this good old writersblock : every authors know it, from time to time. So don’t worry, enjoy your break week and let inspiration comes back slowly, sweetly… Your story is great, both a thriller and an engaging romance : a wonderful and original mix !
Cheer up !! *wink*
Awww….. you’re going back to the sea, and you didn’t email me? And what’s wrong, honey? What’s going on with life, that has you upset? (I sent you two emails eariler, today….. so, email me, when you get back.) Again, Happy Birthday!! :)
Hope you have a wonderful birthday! Enjoy the sea and I hope that whatever is bothering you get better and you come back refreshed. Take care and of course, love the story
Hope you have a wonderful birthday! Enjoy the sea and I hope that whatever is bothering you get better and you come back refreshed. Take care and of course, love the story
K
wonderful chap, love this story, don’t stay away too long.
Happy belated birthday!!! Great chapter! Hope the writers block doesn’t keep you down for too long!
Do continue this story, love the line that your taking…Happy B-day, how OLD are you now???? tks
HAPPY BIRTHDAY :) And this chapter was great to, doesn’t seem like you have a writersblock to me :) Take your time, I’ll be waiting.
Happy Birthday :-)
Hej Trolle tillykke med fødselsdagen;-)Jeg synes nu ikke dette kapitel bar præ af at du skulle have skrive problemer. Det var en rigtig god dialog du har fÃ¥et skrevet… Have a nice week by the sea and hopefully you will come back refreshed and ready to give us a new chapter of your great story
awesome story..you are a GREAT writer, and happy Birthday! Enjoy the ocean, relax, and have fun! Will patiently wait for next update….
Happy Brirthday. Can’t wait for you to continue withe this story but for now enjoy your special day.
Hi! Your story is great. Keep it up. I am looking forward to the next chapter. Have a Happy Birthday!
HAPPY Birthday, I know that your age is your own business, but how long have you been in business? (ha, ha). I hope you enjoy your stay at the ocean. I love the ocean in fact I was scheduled to go he Cali. for a week at the end of this month. I love the drive up and down the PCH. As I said before, I am loving you story and your mamagement of it. Big step for Bette to introduce Tina and charlot to Kit (love it). If you had a writers block,it looks like you have unblocked it rather well. In reference to Kit’s statement, is there some underlining reason that Bette left the Art Gallery and went into police work? Maybe there is an avenue for her to return to the gallery. I agree with B&TForever, I think that the candy kane is involved in all of this. Maybe she is the type that can’t take no for an answer. To bad, so sad, Candy because Tina is officially off the market. She is now TAKEN and Bette will not be sharing. It would be fun to see Bette and Tina out clubing and Tina letting all the chicks know that Bette is taken. Please continue and welcome back.
oh boy i love it..Bette finally open up to Tina i think they are great together and Charlot is so cute..great chapter post soon thanks
I hope you had a nice birthday!!!!!! great update and nothing wrong with the story except you don’t post enough lol
This chapter is wonderful and please post soon, thanks! HAPPY BIRTHDAY!