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A New World, part 2
Its about time you two made it in, I was getting worried, said Jake. Bette, I thought you were a little rich girl, what are you doing living in the ghetto?
Yeah, well, I barely get paid as a T.A., and Iowa Citys rental costs are outrageous. Im paying $1,000 a month for this ***** hole.
Tina and Jake just stared, mouth a gap.
Besides, when my dad found out I was a ***** he totally flipped and cut me off, Bette said with a shrug. Its alright though; I wouldnt want it any other way.
So, welcome to my humble abode, said Bette as she walked into the kitchen.
Tina just stood there and took in her surroundings. It looked like a club. Humble didnt even begin to describe it. It was like nothing she had ever seen before. The walls and windows were covered in black duvatine to block out the light from the street. All the furniture had been pushed into the living room which had been sectioned off by a black curtain There was a disco light and fog machine mounted from the ceiling casting hazy red and blue dots on the floor. There was nothing in the room, save a massive professional looking stereo system which pounded out the beat to Ambers Sexual that made the dots on the floor dance.
Bette noticed Tina looking around at the club she had created.
Sorry about all this, its usually not this crazy here. Were having a party in a few weeks and my friends went a little overboard.
No, I like it, replied Tina, we dont even have to go to the club now.
Ok, well the kitchen is in there, why dont you fix yourself a drink and join me on the dance floor, said Bette as she led Tina into the kitchen, grabbed her drink and left the room.
It was then that Tina began to think that she was in way over her head. Being here was like stepping into another universe. I dont know if Im ready for this, thought Tina.
Bette stood on the dance floor for a few minutes before she realized that maybe leaving Tina in the kitchen alone wasnt such a good idea. As Bette entered the kitchen, she noticed how uncomfortable Tina looked as Megan tried to hit on her.
Hey Tina, why dont we all go upstairs and get to know each other, the dancing can wait.
Tina looked relieved as she grabbed her drink and followed Jake and Bette upstairs. The upstairs was much quieter and Bette led Tina and Jake into a room with a computer desk, two chairs, and a bed.
Sorry, this is my brothers room, theres more seating in here, said Bette as she motioned for Tina and Jake to sit on the bed.
How is Gabe? Asked Jake. Isnt he *****?
Bette stifled a laugh. Oh hes good, he decided to take time off from school to work, but hes doing great for the most part, said Bette. And Yep. My father is never going to have any grandchildren.
Bette looked at Tina who was quickly downing her drink.
I thought you said there was going to be a lot of people here? asked Jake
There are, its just this house is so big it feels like no ones here, said Bette.
Will I get to meet your imaginary friends sometime soon? Tina quipped with a newfound confidence inspired by her disappearing drink.
Theyll all come out of the woodwork eventually Im sure. What is that youre drinking? Bette asked getting up out of her chair and sitting beside Tina on the bed.
Effervescent menstratution.
What? Bette asked, nearly choking on her drink
Cranberry juice, absolute currant and sprite, Tina offered.
Interesting name, Bette replied as she reached over and took the drink from Tinas hand, but not before she let her fingers linger over Tinas. Tina looked up and met Bettes gaze. Tina was having a hard time being in such close proximity to Bette. Both had to remind themselves to breathe. They probably would have stayed like, just staring at each other if Jake hadnt cleared his throat. Bette took a sip of the drink.
Not bad, Ill have to make that some time, said Bette as she handed the drink back to Tina and reclaimed her seat at the desk.
Jake noticed that Tinas drink was gone and asked if she wanted another. She nodded her head and Jake disappeared down the stairs. Now that they were in the light, Tina could see how incredibly beautiful Bette really was. She had tan skin with wavy black hair which was pulled back into a loose pony tail. She had enormous brown eyes and delicate features. She was dressed in a tight black tank top and jeans that complemented her lean, tall figure. Tina couldnt help but stare at Bettes lips wondering what it would be like to press her lips against them. Jake was right, Bette was amazing.
So, how was your drive? asked Bette. The conversation was light and Jake returned quickly with Tinas drink as well as the ingredients to make another couple of rounds. Tina looked at Jake with a cocked eye.
Since youre downing those so quick, I figured Id bring everything with me and save myself the trip, said Jake as he sat down on the bed. Tina quickly downed her drink and handed the cup to Jake for a refill. See what I mean? he said looking at Bette.
But Bette was too busy looking at Tina to notice that Jake had said anything. Its like Tina and Bette were in their own little bubble, completely oblivious to anything going on around them. That bubble was quickly burst as a drunken Alice, Dana and Gabe stumbled into the room.
So heres the party, said Alice as she sat on Bettes lap. Bette just looked at Tina with an apologetic look. Whos this?
Get off me, Bette said, knocking Alice off her balance. Alice stumbled to the floor and sat Indian style. This is Tina and Jake, Bette answered. Guys, I apologize, this is my soon to be deceased friend Alice.
Porter, you need to loosen up, here drink this, Alice said shoving her cup at Bette.
Bette smelled it and looked at Alice. What did you put in there? Gasoline?
Yeah gasoline, youre so funny, Alice said patting her knee in mock glee. Honestly, Im not sure, but I think theres te-kill-ya, vodka, orange juice and everclear, Alice laughed. Te-kill-ya, get it Porter? Ha ha ha, alice said bursting into laughter.
Bette pretended to take a drink and handed the concoction back to Alice. Yum, its good, Bette said patting her stomach and handing the drink back to Alice.
Bette looked over at Tina who was now lying on the bed trying to take a drink of her effervescent menstruation. This was not working quite as Tina had planned and pretty soon the drink ended up all over Gabes bed and Tinas shirt.
Damn it Bette, why cant everybody ever hang out in your room, Gabe complained.
Its ok, Ill get it, Alice said jumping up with a towel and moving towards Tina to clean up the mess. Bette jumped up and grabbed the towel from Alice looking her in the eye as if to say, Back off, shes mine. Alice immediately understood, and nodded as if to say, Go Porter, its all you as she plopped down next to Dana and rested her head on her shoulder.
Bette took the towel and proceeded to clean Tina up lingering unnecessarily long on her leather clad thigh. Tina looked up to see Bettes intense expression, which she reflected in her own eyes.
By this time Natalie, Megan, Kevin, Josh, Chris made their way to the room. Cody followed bounding into the room inadvertently knocking Bette into Tina
So are we going to the club tonight? Kevin asked.
*****, what time is it? Alice answered, jumping up, pulling Dana up in the process. Its almost one. We need to get going unless we want to stand in line all night.
Bette and Tina were still pressed together on the bed. The room emptied quickly, everyone hurrying to get ready for the club, leaving a confused Bette, Tina and Jake who slowly made their way up off the bed. The effects of the alcohol were obvious by this time. As Bette and Tina made her way out the door, a group of people leaving the bathroom caused Bette and Tina to be pushed together into the wall. Tina who was momentarily knocked off balance, grabbed onto Bette to avoid falling down. Caught up in the moment, both stared at the others lips. Just as they were about to bring their lips together, another group of people rushed by, breaking the moment afforded by the close proximity. With that Tina pulled her keys out of her pocket and ran down the stairs shouting, Ill drive. Bette followed quickly behind, desperate to make any kind of contact and playfully grabbed at Tinas hands, intentionally missing, and instead grabbing Tinas hand, which she continued to hold.
Why dont we all ride with Rob? He hasnt been drinking tonight, said Bette hoping Tina would agree. Looking at Bette, Tina nodded as they followed Rob out to his car. For some reason, Jake, Tina and Bette all piled into the backseat of the tiny car, leaving Rob to play chauffeur. Jake complained that he was squished, so Bette volunteered her lap, which Tina quickly hopped on. The car sped off and quickly turned a corner forcing Tina to grab on to Bette. With that little push, and the close contact, Bette and Tina ravaged each others mouths. The sudden silence caused Jake to look over at the couple, who by now, were going at it hot and heavy. Oblivious to the other occupants of the car, Bette and Tina continued their make-out session. The car stopped and Rob and Jake quietly exited leaving the breathless pair behind.
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(45 votes, average: 3.49 out of 5)
great continue
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I love this story. Please continue.
Great update. Just could not stop laughing when the gang came into the picture. Alice that wonderfull girl.
I agree with Karen – you need to leave some for the imagination. To keep the weels turning in our heads. And don´t forget the cliffhangers – we jus LOVE them. Keep up the good work. Post soon
nicely done
alice had me cracking up, bette and tinas desire for each other(oh my,my,my,my)well done i cant wait to read some more,
Great chapter. Keep them going like this and let see what’s they doing. Post soon.
WOW THATS HOT!
well this is abit different bu i do like it and for what works etc from a readers pov is i think you just have to capture peoples imaginations..let them feel they can feel the characters involved.. does that make any sense to you,i hope so . keep going ok? thanks. hey.