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A New World Part I
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I cant believe you talked me into this, Tina said to Jake as they circled the block for the fourth time. Tina and Jake, both sophomores at Iowa State, had just driven from Ames to Iowa City to meet this girl that Jake had gone to high school with named Bette.
Seriously Tina, once you meet her, you will understand what Ive been telling you all week. Jake said as he focused on the big white house on the corner. Okay, were going in now, Im starting to run out of gas and were already an hour and a half late, Jake said as he put the car into park and took off his seat belt
Tina just sat there, glued to the seat.
Maybe it was fear; maybe it was the combination of the old leather interior of the car and the backless shirt her roommate Michelle had talked her into wearing. Most likely, it was a mixture of the two. Reluctantly Tina took off her seat belt and pried herself out of the car. As they made their way to the rickety looking door Tina thought about that first conversation shed had with Bette.
IAGradgrrl80: Come to my St. Patricks Day party, typed Bette.
Teeny98: But I dont even know you, for all I know you could be a serial killer, Tina typed.
IAGradgrrl: Yeah, but how many graduate students are serial killers, I barely have time to eat, let alone murder beautiful girls.
Teeny98: Wasnt Ted Kozinsky in graduate school at one time?” Tina shot back. Anyway, How do you know Im beautiful, weve never even seen each other?
IAGradgrrl80: Let me guess, youre blonde, about 52, have blue eyes, amazing lips, and wear glasses. You have seven brothers and sisters, youre not out to your family, and really want to come to my party, typed Bette.
Teeny89: How do you know that? Tina asked.
IAGradgrrl80:Didnt I tell you? Im psychic. Right now youre timing how long it would take to get from Ames to Iowa City, and thinking about what you should wear. Id go with the backless shirt, she paused for a minute. Tina, you dont have to see someone to know theyre beautiful. Bette ended with a smiley face.
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It doesn’t need anything…except for the next chapter! Very well done!
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Thanks for your comments! If anyone, writer or reader would be willing to talk to me about this subject sometime please email me at annieb728@msn.com. I haven’t started my thesis yet, but at some point I would like to do interviews and such. Either way I’d like to get in contact with some people that share my interests or would at least be interested in helping me out. Thanks!
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Good job, please continue. Anything to help a fellow student.
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I miss Iowa! As a graduate of ISU, I’ll forgive you for being at Iowa since you deigned to include Ames in your story. Keep at it, and good luck with your paper.
This moves along smartly, with lots of character detail and backstory easily incorporated.
You write well and you should definitely continue this story!
I look forward to the next chapter.
Thank you!
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Very nice work.