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    A Night in the D — Chapter 6

    Story written on December 11, 2005 by luvrgirl.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=58243
    Author Notes:

    Perspective.

    Bette stepped back again, and turned, trying to figure the exact distance from the bathroom mirror that would allow her to see herself, as much as possible, in full. She laughed derisively. I’m pretty ***** sure about these jeans, she thought, trying to laugh at herself and failing. But still, nice to get a good look. “Grrrrr,” she said out loud. This hotel sucks. Not even a full length mirror? She looked down at the bathtub, wondering if she should just stood up there. She rolled her eyes in vintage fashion. Um, no. You’ve already been graceless once tonight. And recovered.

     

    She grinned wickedly at the floor before looking up and smiling impulsively at the image in front of her. Boy did you recover, she thought. If she’d been the competitive athlete type, which she wasn’t, she would have high-fived herself right then. Her eyes were shining and she was taken  again by her reflection-something so strangely eager in her eyes, though she’d teased Tina about being the eager one. Alice‘s voice echoed in her ears suddenly, her snarky aside to Dana before they both collapsed into laughter. “Bette wants to ***** the desk clerk at the hotel.”

     

    Bette laughed. Yes, Bette does, she thought to herself. Though often too prideful, which she could admit (as another point of pride), she truly didn’t mind Alice taking small shots at her expense. That this would be a big shot Alice would keep on taking, if and when Bette provided the requested details, was not lost on her either. “Bette fucked the desk clerk in Detroit after her flight was cancelled.” “Bette called, beforehand, pretending to have an ethical conundrum on her hands.” “Bette couldn’t even give over to ***** behavior without calling in advance to assure herself it was somehow in good taste.”

     

    Bette is a big ***** joke we love to make because we all want that kind of power over women.

     

    “***** you, Alice,” Bette snarked back at the mirror, remembering how often she had done just that when they were dating. She didn’t recall much snarkiness then, until the end of course, when Bette’s feelings turned toward friendship and Alice‘s lagged behind. She turned her face to the side to check her profile, noting her long neck climbing out of the shirt collar, rising to a perfect line at her jaw. She frowned at herself suddenly, remembering with some exasperation how her last lover had called her “stunning” so many times it had lost its resonance. It had actually started to get on her nerves, though she didn’t dare tell that story to anyone, especially not Alice.

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    1. Now I see where you are going with this, so I take back calling you a tease. Bette’s feelings for Tina are coming into play. Maybe she’ll ask Tina to go to LA with her.

    6. Great… I have absolutely no idea where you are going with this story… none! I love it! Well I thank you so deeply because you managed to make my recovery weekend pass even slower… don’t we love the wait… the anxiety… i speak for myself and I do! I know you havemore chapter already finished… please post them. I need more prespective

    7. I love this story. I am totally hooked. Where have you been? Your analysis of Bette’s psyche in this chapter was insightful and very interesting. IMO, you compare on a par with the best writers on this site.

    13. Just found your story last night and went back and read all of this portion and love it. Will Bette take Tina to LA with her because she so does not want the tryst to end the next morning. Great story. Post soon pease. Thanks.

    14. Oh…the phone call. Both have the same feelings of not wanting it to end and it’s only just begun. Bette has met her match in Tina. Hmmm…wonder what Tina’s first words are going to be? Please continue.

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