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A Night in the D — Chapter 6
“Don’t hate me because I’m beautiful,” she could hear
She frowned at herself again, this time with a tinge of actual concern. God, Ego, get outta the mirror. But she couldn’t help looking at herself once more, focusing carefully on her eyes, staring into them like she remembered doing once when she was tripping on acid with
Bette saw those two in her head that night and smiled at the memory. Really, they were so ***** cute, both of them. But she had wanted an equal in that moment, and they hadn’t felt equal to her, in the same way she hadn’t felt equal to them. She had different needs and desires and was at a different place in her life. She wanted something so incredibly serious and couldn’t get serious with either of them at the time-not even with Shane when
But hey, I don’t want to ***** them either, she thought to herself. I’ll save the vulnerability for the chick I’m doing. God, Bette thought suddenly, straightening her shoulders and looking ahead with something not unlike alarm. Why am I replaying my entire freaking love life? I’m not doing anything tonight but getting laid-for the first time in a while, I might add. And god is that going to feel good.
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(40 votes, average: 3.53 out of 5)
Now I see where you are going with this, so I take back calling you a tease. Bette’s feelings for Tina are coming into play. Maybe she’ll ask Tina to go to LA with her.
Bette’s a bit narcissistic, heehee. But she’ll find her soul mate soon and the soul mate will change her in some good way.
I just read all of the chapters and I can’t wait for more. Thank you.
This is SUCH A FUKING GRT strie!!!LUUURRV IT..thnx lot..post soon I hope?
okay, bring on the phone call…what does tina have in mind? me thinks bette totally met her match in tina
Great… I have absolutely no idea where you are going with this story… none! I love it! Well I thank you so deeply because you managed to make my recovery weekend pass even slower… don’t we love the wait… the anxiety… i speak for myself and I do! I know you havemore chapter already finished… please post them. I need more prespective
I love this story. I am totally hooked. Where have you been? Your analysis of Bette’s psyche in this chapter was insightful and very interesting. IMO, you compare on a par with the best writers on this site.
I just started reading and I was so dispointed that I could no longer push the next post button! I am really liking this.
This is really getting off to a great start can’t wait for more!!!!
ya hoo !! – GREAT STUFF – not wanting to sound like alice but can they get together soon ?
I think your writing is exceptional, really love it. And if Detroit was this “promising,” I swear I’d have never left.
Having finished reading the sixth chapter and now all caught up…looking forward to reading the next one. Thank you.
Just found your story last night and went back and read all of this portion and love it. Will Bette take Tina to LA with her because she so does not want the tryst to end the next morning. Great story. Post soon pease. Thanks.
Oh…the phone call. Both have the same feelings of not wanting it to end and it’s only just begun. Bette has met her match in Tina. Hmmm…wonder what Tina’s first words are going to be? Please continue.
I love the internal dialogue – of both Bette and Tina. Keep up the good work!
your killing me here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is good!