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A Shot To The Future Ch.8
Alice glared at Shane as she pushed past the women to close the door of the guest room. "Come here!" Alice gritted through her teeth. Once they were out of Dana’s earshot Alice said "Look, I know what happened last night. I remember everything that happened with truth or dare, skinny dipping, and Dana. She doesn’t remember and I’m not going to tell her."
"Al, I think she knows. I mean you two were in there naked, with the screaming…"
"We didn’t fuck. We were wrestling."
"Naked wrestling. Is that what the kids are calling it these days?"
"You know what fuck you Shane." Alice sighed. "Look guys, I can’t have her know what happened until she’s ready. Things were done last night and really important things were said that change everything but I need her to remember on her own time table."
"If you feel that strongly then my lips are sealed." Bette assured her.
"Yeah Alice I’m not going to say anything."
"Whatever."
"Shane please promise me."
"I’ll respect what you want but that doesn’t mean that I like it. What I saw, what we all saw, last night when both your guards were down was a lot of lust but a lot more of something else. I won’t be part of you smothering it."
"Shane, you know it’s complicated. Her career, her image, her entire life. She’s my best friend. I won’t risk it. She’s gotta take the step."
"Dana is too afraid to ever do that Alice. Even if she did remember. She’s terrified of rejection."
"Shane…"
"Fine. I promise but I don’t like it."
Alice kissed Shane’s forehead "Thank you." Shane saw the tears welling up in Alice’s eyes as she walked toward the bathroom. Once inside she locked the door and looked at the mirror. "I love Dana…I’m in love with Dana." Alice frowned at her predicament as she sank to the bathroom floor quietly sobbing.
Dana emerged from the bedroom and found Bette, Tina, and Shane in the living room.
"Hey guys!"
"Hey Dana." They replied in unison.
"Where’s Al at?"
"She’s still in the bathroom."
"She’s been in there a while. Is everything okay?"
"I think she was planning on taking a bath."
"Okay. Good. I think I fucked up."
"What are you talking about Dana?"
"Um…me and Alice last night. Do you all not remember?"
"We remember. We just didn’t think that you did."
"It was a mistake. She’s my best friend and there was a lot of alcohol and she has a boyfriend."
"Dana, you know she’s not serious about that guy. He fucking left with Harrison last night."
"I guess I blocked that part out…Either way it doesn’t matter. We can’t be together."
"Why the fuck not?" Shane was getting agitated at her oblivious friends.
"Having her as my best friend means more to me than any doomed romance. Incredible sex isn’t worth my best friend."
"Did you ever stop to think that maybe you can have both? Maybe fate brought you together and it was meant to happen?"
"It can’t be that simple. Too much is riding on me staying in the closet. I’m asking you guys to keep quiet."
"Look Dana…Now that this has happened you two need to talk about it. It’s going to be harder now than ever to keep that friend line drawn. It’s not something that’s easy to keep from crossing."
"I’ve been in the closet since I can remember. I think I can keep it in my pants."
"What about your fucking heart Dana?"
"That’s not going to be a problem," Dana stopped and looked to the bathroom door "she already has it."
"You need to tell her. Actually you’ve got to tell her Dana."
"I love her but I can’t be with her. Please respect me enough to do what I need. Please for my sake leave it alone. I’m begging you guys."
"If she ever finds out it won’t be from us." Bette told her touching her shoulder to calm her down.
"Thank you. All of you." Dana headed to the kitchen wiping her cheeks.
Tina sighed "They belong together."
"Yeah, well they’re both fucking idiots." Shane groaned.
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(42 votes, average: 3.40 out of 5)
I think you need to continue this. This isn’t really an ending.
wonderwoman34, I second Christy. This is a cliffhanger. For crying out loud, A was still crying in the bathroom. You cannot leave it like that. According to Shane, they both were “f*cking idiots. Being idiots and unhappy would not be a proper Danish ending. lol. So please continue. Thank you very much.
What a great day for Danish! So many new chapters! And yours is another wonderful one!! I agree with everyone else and hope that you decide to continue and maybe bring this to a more definitive ending. You did a great job here. Alice and Dana’s reactions seem so genuine — that they would sacrifice what that could have to try and keep the friendship. I have to say that I laughed out loud that Harrison left with Alice’s date. You also did a great job with the reactions of the rest of the gang. The whole chapter flowed really well. You have crafted a very interesting and unique story. I don’t think any of us want to see it end. However, if you do decide to not continue this one, I hope you keep writing. Thanks, wonderwoman34!!
I’m sorry I haven’t commented before, but you can’t leave us hanging like this. The way I see it is that this story still has potential to develop. So pretty, pretty, pretty please continue :D.
what!!! you can’t leave it there – you must continue and bring this to a satisfactory Danish ending …..please
I’ve definitely decided to continue this story I’ve just got to figure out which direction I want to take it.
Oh No , there is no way you are leaving that story there. Come on,
hey yeah i agreed with them…you cannot leave it…pls continue….
those above me have said it and i agree, so i have one word for you…CONTINUE!!!
Hey, I’m with the others, you have to continue this great story, please???
I am sorry I have not commented b4,but this chapter was well written! I really enjoy reading this story! Thanks- PPS
ohh like Dana and Alice can be JUST friends no way, it’s not going to work. Love the story please keepp writing…