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A Slow Dance – Chapter 3
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Tina quickly shaved her legs and rinsed off. She turned off the shower and stepped out, drying herself and wrapping up in the plush towel. She stepped into her room and decided then that this whole charade had to end. She walked over to her closet and opened it, pulling out a pair of dark jeans and a sheer white top. Tina was going casual today, seeing as she was only working a half day.
She looked over at Eric and saw him stir. A few moments later, he sat up and rested on his elbows, staring back at her.
Tina put on a fake smile and said, “Morning. Come on and get dressed. I’ll fix us breakfast.”
Eric nodded and ran a hand through already messy hair. He swung his legs over the side of the bed and revealed himself in all his glory. Tina turned walked out of the room to leave him to gather his things.
She stared at the eggs scrambling in front of her, occasionally poking at them with the spatula. When Tina felt a pair of strong arms wrap around her, she immediately tensed.
“Whoa, babe, it’s just me.” Eric hugged his girlfriend and kissed her lightly on the neck. “So what’s for breakfast?”
“Well nothing if you keep trying to distract me. There are bagels in the toaster, and the eggs are almost done. Go sit. I’ll be in there in a minute.
Eric released Tina and turned to fix himself a cup of coffee. He felt like something was up, but he didn’t want to say anything until he had woken up enough to have coherent thought.
Tina finished the eggs and spread cream cheese on her bagel. She left Eric’s plain because he was trying to watch his weight. She made her way to the dining table and set down the food. Eric’s stomach growled audibly, causing both of them to chuckle.
“Eat up, Starvin’ Marvin.”
Eric grinned. “I think I will.” He put the eggs on the bagel and bit down, savoring the flavor. Tina really did have a way with food, he thought. She had a way with everything, actually. He took another sip of his coffee and looked up at Tina, studying the woman in front of him.
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Can’t wait to see where you take B&T from here… you’re doing a fabulous job! Post again soon!
Just reliving the whole scene again but through you story is just great so romantic and because we have seen a version its so easy to imagine mmmm lovin it!
I’ve never been able to completely wrap my brain around Bette’s unabashed boldness in claiming this kiss. This telling of the story is helping me to understand. Absolutely marvelous writing. And just so you’ll know, I don’t give out compliments liberally.
Oh, one question. Your name, illuminatigoddess? Do you read Marianne Williamson?
Good story, very cute, but I have to say poor Eric. There he is thinkin he loves her and wants to marry her and shes just like no chance hombre.
Still, good hes out of the way now.
just finished all the chapters. I am enjoying your beginning and please continue with our girls
This is beautiful chapter and the 2 of them is so cute and perfect couple. Ok post soon please, thanks!
so lovely beginning! i love it and so excited to read more about the two of them falling each other, so cute…
That was fantastic, really enjoyable….write again soon x
A Slow Dance indeed…I am really enjoying this B&T beginning.
I’m also intrigued by the fact that you had our Tina break up with Eric before getting involved with Bette….kudos to you for that.
Post again soon
So wonderful indeed..we love new beginnings…great update..keep it up and post soon
Beautifully written. I’m enjoying the more thoughtful and detailed BnT beginning – same general story with the details we’ve missed and craved.
Thanks for sharing this with us.
wow…intense! love.it!
Like this very much! post soon!!!!!!
Awesome. I enjoy the way you’re approaching this story and look forward to the part we didn’t get to see…