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A Slow Dance – Chapter 4
Tina unlocked the door to her apartment and stepped inside. Her heels clicked on the wooden floor, ringing throughout the silent loft. She set down her bag and keys on the table next to the entrance and walked silently into the kitchen. She pulled open a cabinet and took out a shot glass, then opened her freezer and pulled out a bottle of Jose Cuervo. After pouring two fingers, Tina threw back the shot and took the hit all in one go. A loud grunt was the only sound in the apartment as Tina felt the hot liquid run down her throat and settle into the pit of her stomach. She set down the now empty glass and let out a long sigh.
Why had she kissed her back?
Tina walked into her bedroom and stripped off the white top, throwing it carelessly across her bed. She unbuttoned her jeans and sat down on a chair to remove her boots. Looking at the time, Tina noticed it was past eight o’clock. Had she really been driving around that long?
The clock told her so, but she found it hard to believe. In Tina’s head, nothing was right today. She got up and pulled off her jeans, then searched for a tank top to wear. After stopping by Bette’s, Tina made a few other stops in order to pay some bills and mail a package overnight. She really didn’t remember doing those things, but when she pulled the receipts out of her jeans’ pocket, she convinced herself it must be true.
What happened today? She asked herself, pulling the tank top over her head and stepping into a pair of lounge pants. What had made her so deliriously scatterbrained? And why did she kiss her back?
Tina sat down on the couch and tried to clear her thoughts with mindless television, failing miserably when the first thing that came up was "Bound," playing on one of the movie channels. She had just come in on Violet’s initial attempt at seducing Corky.
"*****! God damnit! I can’t ***** win for losing, can I?" She yelled out to no one in particular. Tina threw down the remote and stormed into her bedroom, stripping – all but ripping – off her tank top and lounge pants. She threw open her closet and grabbed the first thing her fingers landed on. She pulled on the jeans she’d just removed and slipped her feet into a pair of black flip flops. Tina threw on the black wifebeater and strode to the entrance, and, after grabbing her purse and keys, she flew out the door.
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(25 votes, average: 4.32 out of 5)
“Who are you?”
“Would you like to find out?”
I am exquisitely rendered speachless…
Post again soon
Really loved that chapter so very well written cant wait for more i like the way Tina didnt fight her feelings when she confronted Bette, lovin it
very good chapter. i just love B&T beginnings i love how different each persons story is and urs is really good!! please continue, its very interesting!! POST SOON!!!
Good chapter. First I thought something is wrong with Tina and is she gonna kick Bette or what but then its turn out good and they have lunch together tomorrow and let see what’s next. Post soon please, thanks!
I just spent at least 40 minutes trying to explain to you how wonderful I thought your writing is, and with one inadvertent flick of a finger I lost every thought I’d typed. I’ll try to remember the gist of what I said…OMG! OMFG! You are sooooooo good!!! I’m amazed at your wisdom, since you are so young (compared to me). You could teach me a few things!!
Bestous of luck at school…but you won’t need it if you’re studying lit, or English, or anything to do with writing.
And you really are a goddess!
You totally had me fooled with your name. I’m not sure if Marianne Williamson would hold any interest for you. She wrote a book called “Illuminata” as well as one called “A Woman’s Worth”, in which she referred throughout to women as goddesses. At any rate, I will be checking out more about the “Illuminati.” Thanks.
Is Swim a mentor of yours? If so, or if not, you should know she has my deepest respect.
I hope you post more soon, because I really appreciate your talent.
Be well, be good, have fun.
his was an excellent take on the beginning. i love to read each authors thoughts on that. i love the way you write btw. and tinas, who are you, was awesome. who indeed. this story has caught my attention. looking forward to the next. thanks.
this is soo great, just keep going on. i really like the sensual tone.
“IC. I’ve come up with a plot to steal her away and clone a duplicate, then stealthily implant myself into its brain and live her life.” You’ll take over running the show?…You’ve got my vote!
I have just caught up on your story and really like it. I love beginning stories. I look forward to your next post…
Love the question Tina asked “who are you”…very nice update goddess and keep them comming.
K
Excellent story, just love it.
great!!!!!!!!!!!! had me scared their for a min tina was ready to kill somebody