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A Thin Line – Chpt 12
“What have you been fantasizing?” I asked in a husky tone.
“Our tongues pleasuring each other at the same time,” Helena whispered.
“Oh, fuck,” I murmured.
“And what has your mind been portraying for you?” she asked.
“The same,” I answered without hesitation.
“Turn around,” she said softly.
Quite contrary to my controlling nature, I was having no problem taking orders, such as ‘lay down’ and ‘turn around,’ from Helena.
With every simultaneous stroke and flick of our tongues against each other’s sensitive pink flesh, I was driven further into ecstasy. I could not only hear, but also feel Helena’s moans vibrating against me. Listening to the utterance of her delectation excited me even more.
When we’d driven each other to heights that surpass delight, we lay holding one another and gently kissing with our open mouths and tongues.
Helena stroked her fingers against my cheek.
“Bette, are we not meant to eat together?” Helena asked.
I laughed. “Excuse me? What did we just do?”
Helena gently nudged my shoulder with her palm.
“No, silly. I mean, each time we’ve planned to have a meal together, we wind up like this,” Helena said.
“Are you complaining?” I asked, smiling.
“Of course not,” she said kissing my lips. “I just feel quite apologetic that I asked you for dinner last night, and I didn’t feed you.”
“You fed me,” I said playfully.
“Food! Bette, you are so mischievous,” she said, tapping her index finger against my nose. “And now, tonight, well, we’ve missed the reservation I made at the restaurant,” Helena explained.
“Helena, some things just take priority over crabmeat and steamed asparagus,” I joked.
“How did you know I wanted to take you for seafood?” she asked, surprised.
“I didn’t,” I said laughing.
“So, you’re not disappointed?” Helena inquired.
“Not in the least. How could I be? Why don’t I just order us some Cantonese for delivery, and we can lounge around and talk a bit?” I suggested.
“Sounds lovely,” Helena said, running her arm down my side and over my ass. “But, first, kiss me again.”
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Bette helped me to slip into a spare bathrobe. We held hands and walked to her kitchen dressed in similar garments.
“So what will you have, Helena?” Bette asked, picking up the phone and dialing. “Moo Goo Gai Pan, Chicken and Broccoli, Vegetable Stir Fry?”
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Muy caliente, Z!! Okay, how did you manage to accidentally get 3 days off? Anyway, go on now, get typing. Thanks for the caliente update.
muy caliente, verdad. z, excellent chapter…can we get another, like soon…. you’ve created great chemistry between the helena and bette, as always…loved it!!
Still very, very hot! Now really, how long can Alice keep a secret like this? Can’t wait till your next chapter.
and I will add my ….. **** muy caliente ! ***** Very nicely done, zheese! Thank you.
I’m glad to see they’re building a solid foundation of their new-emerged relationship.
Hot hot hot!! Excellent chapter, love the chemistry between the two!! now seeing as you’ve got three days off that would mean at least a couple posts a day right?…right??
still reading and loving it….thankyou!!!
Hot, hot, hot and loving as well.
Caliente! Very very well done! You’re amazing, rewarding us with 2 fics within so short a time. -touched- I LOVE your story! Love love love!
hey z: the sexscences with belena are HOT but everyone know that they would be with bette anyone with bette is HOT but i cant see them together for “REAL”the only one i see is “TIBETTE” this is my thought.its great story but the wrong ladies is only thing that is wrong with it.TIBETTE FOREVER!
HOT HOT HOT thanks
yes, very hot and nicely written, zheese. i don’t know what’s wrong with taking each other in the front entryway, though..
Possibly not the best reading material I could have chosen right before bed… though it is sure to instill sweet dreams! Looking forward to your next post!
whoa, nice one Zheese! really looking forward to the next one..
yes very HOT! thank u! (‘ ‘,)
Damn,I’m not sure that even muy caliente is hot enough. As much as I want B&T back together, I could so live with Bette and Helena. Looking forward to more. Poor Alice how long can she hold out.
Well, hell yeah, hot. Thanks for one of the better renditions of Alice. You let her have a little restraint and maturity. She’s so much easier to have around that way.
Ohhhhh my!! This was well worth the wait!! I love these two together. Alice is such a pain the ass..lol..but I love her! Thanks for writing…Tina’s gonna freak out when she hears….
“you two are so fucking hot together” Aren’t they just? Alice hit that nail on the head…they are just so…what she said! Thanks for sharing your vision of this pairing.
mmmm caliente is right. Another great chapter and just in time. i was dying to find out if Tina had learned the truth about bette and helena. pls. post soon. 3 days off-lucky gal!
Holy @#$*! I just caught up with this story. This is soo Hot!! My God, more please.
Muy caliente es lo de menos! This is one HOT story Z!
WOW this is HOT HOT HOT but please let Alice keep her mouth shut for once huhI need MORE PLEASE
Tina WHO??????? Seriously though, I just happened upon your story and EVERY fricking chapter has been off da heezy! Your 17’s truly require a mad rush to a cold shower. I loooooooooooooooove Bette & Helena together. I hope S4 puts them together like this, and if it doesnt, allow me to say THANK U because you did!
hot hot hot I so love Alice she’s sooo cute:D
Great update, zheese. Caliente indeed! ^_^