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A Thin Line – Chpt 12
“Whatever you’d like to order. I’m not particular,” I answered indecisively.
Other matters were weighing on my mind.
Bette phoned in the order, placed the phone back in its cradle, and walked towards me.
My back was leaning against the counter. Bette wrapped her arms around my neck and kissed me. I moaned and sighed.
When she pulled her lips away, I said, “Bette, something happened today that I need to tell you about.”
Bette adopted a quizzical expression. She stared into my eyes.
“What is it?” Bette asked, concerned.
“Well, it’s nothing earth shattering, but I feel as though it’s something we need to talk about,” I replied. “It’s about Tina.”
“Tina? What about Tina?” Bette shook her head slightly, trying to apprehend the significance.
“Well, just as…” I started to explain.
Suddenly there was a loud, violent rapping on Bette’s sliding glass door. The unexpected noise startled the both of us.
We quickly turned to see who was outside knocking so wildly.
As Bette approached the door, she groaned, “Oh, fuck, it’s Alice.” She turned to look at me helplessly, as if seeking advice.
All I could manage to say was, “It’ll be alright, darling.”
When Bette unlocked the latch, Alice came bursting through the door, exclaiming, “Fuck! Don’t you ever answer your fricking phone anymore?”
Coming to a dead stop, Alice took a long look, first at Bette, and then at me. She was obviously determining the implication inherent in our casual attire.
“Oh, my fucking God! You’ve been fucking!” Alice shouted. “This is so cool!”
Bette glanced at me across the room, and we smiled at each other before Bette walked over to me and took my hand and kissed me.
Alice stood staring at us with her eyes as big as saucers and her mouth agape.
“Oh, you two are so fucking hot together!” she cheered.
“Have a seat, Alice,” Bette offered. “We just ordered Cantonese. Have you eaten?”
“Well, no, I haven’t, as a matter of fact. But I don’t want to impose,” Alice said, pulling a chair from the table.
“Yes, I’m sure you don’t, Alice,” Bette replied, throwing me a knowing grin.
Bette let go of my hand and walked to the refrigerator, opening the door.
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Muy caliente, Z!! Okay, how did you manage to accidentally get 3 days off? Anyway, go on now, get typing. Thanks for the caliente update.
muy caliente, verdad. z, excellent chapter…can we get another, like soon…. you’ve created great chemistry between the helena and bette, as always…loved it!!
Still very, very hot! Now really, how long can Alice keep a secret like this? Can’t wait till your next chapter.
and I will add my ….. **** muy caliente ! ***** Very nicely done, zheese! Thank you.
I’m glad to see they’re building a solid foundation of their new-emerged relationship.
Hot hot hot!! Excellent chapter, love the chemistry between the two!! now seeing as you’ve got three days off that would mean at least a couple posts a day right?…right??
still reading and loving it….thankyou!!!
Hot, hot, hot and loving as well.
Caliente! Very very well done! You’re amazing, rewarding us with 2 fics within so short a time. -touched- I LOVE your story! Love love love!
hey z: the sexscences with belena are HOT but everyone know that they would be with bette anyone with bette is HOT but i cant see them together for “REAL”the only one i see is “TIBETTE” this is my thought.its great story but the wrong ladies is only thing that is wrong with it.TIBETTE FOREVER!
HOT HOT HOT thanks
yes, very hot and nicely written, zheese. i don’t know what’s wrong with taking each other in the front entryway, though..
Possibly not the best reading material I could have chosen right before bed… though it is sure to instill sweet dreams! Looking forward to your next post!
whoa, nice one Zheese! really looking forward to the next one..
yes very HOT! thank u! (‘ ‘,)
Damn,I’m not sure that even muy caliente is hot enough. As much as I want B&T back together, I could so live with Bette and Helena. Looking forward to more. Poor Alice how long can she hold out.
Well, hell yeah, hot. Thanks for one of the better renditions of Alice. You let her have a little restraint and maturity. She’s so much easier to have around that way.
Ohhhhh my!! This was well worth the wait!! I love these two together. Alice is such a pain the ass..lol..but I love her! Thanks for writing…Tina’s gonna freak out when she hears….
“you two are so fucking hot together” Aren’t they just? Alice hit that nail on the head…they are just so…what she said! Thanks for sharing your vision of this pairing.
mmmm caliente is right. Another great chapter and just in time. i was dying to find out if Tina had learned the truth about bette and helena. pls. post soon. 3 days off-lucky gal!
Holy @#$*! I just caught up with this story. This is soo Hot!! My God, more please.
Muy caliente es lo de menos! This is one HOT story Z!
WOW this is HOT HOT HOT but please let Alice keep her mouth shut for once huhI need MORE PLEASE
Tina WHO??????? Seriously though, I just happened upon your story and EVERY fricking chapter has been off da heezy! Your 17’s truly require a mad rush to a cold shower. I loooooooooooooooove Bette & Helena together. I hope S4 puts them together like this, and if it doesnt, allow me to say THANK U because you did!
hot hot hot I so love Alice she’s sooo cute:D
Great update, zheese. Caliente indeed! ^_^