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    A Thin Line – Chpt 18

    Story written on June 7, 2006 by zheese.
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    Helebette – Alice meddles

    “And you haven’t talked to Bette?” I continued with my questioning.

    “No. Well, not since lunch. Alice, will you please start from the beginning and tell me what’s occurred to have you acting in such an unsettled manner?” Helena replied.

    I took another deep breath and spilled the story. I recited every word Tina had said and every word I had said. I told her about how Tina had witnessed she and Bette in the parking lot holding hands, and how Tina was confused and jealous, and how Tina said she still loved Bette. I told Helena everything. And Helena listened intently. When I came to the end, the part where Tina left my apartment not knowing what she was going to do, Helena remained silent.

    “Helena? Are you still there?” I asked.

    “Yes, Alice. I’m still here,” Helena answered.

    “Well?” I said.

    “Well, I’m thinking,” Helena replied softly.

    “Helena, I’m not trying to be a busybody. Really, I’m not,” I tried to assure her.

    “Oh, Sweetie, I know you’re not,” Helena said, comfortingly.

    “I did strongly suggest to Tina that she leave you and Bette alone. I want you guys to have a chance to make it. I think you’d be so good for one another. You just seem so right together,” I gushed.

    “Thank you, Alice,” she said quietly.

    “I know how long you’ve waited for this opportunity with Bette,” I continued.

    There was a pregnant pause.

    “Yes. Yes, indeed, I have Alice.” Helena’s tone had taken on an air of solemnity.

    “Oh, no, now I’ve upset you. I can tell by the sound of your voice. You’re worried Tina’s gonna try to reconcile with Bette,” I observed. “God, I’m so sorry I called, Helena. I shouldn‘t have told you.”

    “It’s alright, Alice,” Helena replied, but not without a hint of dejection slipping through with her words.

    More quietness followed. I was scared to open my big mouth and say the wrong thing.

    Finally, I found the courage to slit the veil of awkward silence with another question.

    “Helena, what’s going on in your head right now?” I inquired.

    Helena sighed heavily. Her voice was unsteady. “Alice, if Tina wants Bette back, and Bette wants Tina, I don’t know if I’ll be able to bare it. The thought of losing Bette now, especially when we’ve only just begun, well, I simply don’t know what I’ll do.”

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    2. I have faith in these two (Bette and Helena) and you for continuing to bring them together. Tina may try as she much as she can, but those days of Tibette are over, I hope (in this story).

    3. I’m not worried. Your not gonna break up the girls because of Tina. Don’t get me wrong I love B&T, but if everything has transpired like were led to believe, then she doesn’t derserve Bette. NO Cake, No frosting.

    5. Now, see, what I don’t understand is, if you’re Bette and/or Helena and you’ve got this really hot, really happy thing going, why would you care if Tina knows? She years removed from being a source of joy.

    7. Waving to my BeLena family……..heyyyyyyy girls!!……….I’m in total agreement with Funny1. I mean really, what does it really matter what Tina knows? She only made up her mind last chapter that she wanted B back ONLY B/c she “discovered” someone new taking hold of B’s heart. I have a funny feeling that neither meeting tonight is going to go well for our girls (B&H) B/c their minds are going to B on each other…..Post again sQQn!!

    9. That was good. Caught up on the last three chapters and it was really like watching an afternoon soap opera. You totally captured the voice of each character… I’m a B&H fan, so please…Let Love Rule…

    10. Deep in my heart I’m a Tibette person. Tina has treated Bette like dog mess.She cant control Bette anymore and thinking that she has lost Bette forever I think she is angry. Helena did some pretty bad things to Bette and everyone else,but if Bette can be happy with someone else then so be it.If it Tina good if its Helena good,Let Bette be happy. thanks

    11. YAY!! I always get so excited when a new chapter gets posted ’cause this fic is freakin’ awesome! Sucks that Helena is so upset, though, but Bette’s gonna make it all better, right? I certainly hope so. I also hope that Tina minds her own damn business, but it’ll make for good drama if she doesn’t. Just so long as B&H live happily ever after (with each other, of coarse). Anyway, can’t wait for the next update.

    13. I think just the fact that Bette is more interested in finding Helena and is worrying about her rather than tina is a good indication of where her heart now lies. I have every faith B & H will get through this! I do so love this fic! Thank you!!

    14. You write brillantly! I think it’s time for Bette to confess her love for Helena, and a romantic scene between them. :D Also to resolve issues with Tina! So glad to read your fanfic, it made my day! Thanks so much.

    19. Tina needs to follow Alice’s advice and leave Bette and Helena alone. And anyway, how can Bette know if she can trust Tina after all that has gone on? Tina’s being jealous may have more to do with not being able to control Bette than really loving her at this point. Just my perspective. . .

    21. Zheese, another insightful addition to this fabulous fan fiction. I felt all of Alice’s frentic energy and panic as she tried, unsuccessfully, to placate both Helena and Bette as she tells them that Tina has discovered their blossoming relationship. Now Bette needs to tell both Helena then Tina how she feels. I am sure Helena’s feelings are fully reciprocated by Bette. Now might just be the best time to admit to them. Thank you so much for this terrific tale. Your Loyal Fan.

    23. I am so hooked on this story!! I have read a few Helena/Bette stories and yours is right up there at the top of the pile!! Please let them be happy together!

    24. I do so love Bette and Helena together! Great story, and who cares what Tina thinks..again it’s all about her, and what she wants..Bette would need to be insane too to even think of going back to her..I think Tina doesn’t want Bette but doesn’t want anyone else to have her either. A means to control was mentioned, I agree.

    25. Awesome chapter. You write each character so well. I hope Bette stays strong about her feelings for Helena. She’s finally happy and deserves to be.

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