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A Thin Line – Chpt 18
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Helena’s fear and anguish were palpable.
“You’re crazy mad in love with her, aren’t you, Helena?” I asked quietly.
Silence.
“Helena?” I tried again for a response.
“Yes. Insanely. Truly and deeply,” Helena finally replied, her voice cracking. “Alice, what am I going to do?”
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Just as I flipped my phone closed, after finishing my strained conversation with Tina, the cell vibrated in my hand. Looking at the Caller I.D., I debated whether to answer. I was in a rush to get to my meeting with key faculty members. But I decided to quickly take the call and find out what was so important.
I spoke hurriedly. “Alice. Hi. I saw that you called several times this afternoon. I haven’t had time to get back to you. I had a class. And I just now got off the phone with Tina. I was just about to…”
“Oh, shit you talked to Tina! God, Bette, I didn’t tell her! I swear I didn’t!” Alice interrupted, rapidly defending herself against I knew not what.
“Alice, what are you talking about?” I asked, perplexed.
“Tina didn’t tell you? She didn’t say anything?” Alice inquired.
“Alice. I’m really pressed for time here. All I talked to Tina about was Angelica’s immunizations today and how she reacted. I wanted to speak with her, but Tina said she was napping. She did act colder and more distant than usual though. I could barely get her to speak to me. What’s going on?” I insisted. Suddenly, I had a flash of insight. “Are you going to tell me what I think you’re going to, Alice? That Tina’s somehow found out about Helena and I?”
“Yeah, Bette. That’s what I was about to tell you,” Alice affirmed with a sigh.
Damn! I really needed to get to that meeting. But this was important. I tried to maintain my composure.
Quietly, steadily, I asked, “How? How does Tina know, Alice? And if you can, please tell me quickly, because I really have very little time right now.”
Alice’s mouth began racing. She sped around every curve of her story, with facility and ease, like a seasoned driver takes his turns at the Indy 500. No detail was neglected. And I could tell she’d told this story before. When she crossed the finish line, I only had one question for her.
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Please let Helena and Bette stay together they are great. Tina needs to step off and let Bette be happy. Please Psot Soon
I have faith in these two (Bette and Helena) and you for continuing to bring them together. Tina may try as she much as she can, but those days of Tibette are over, I hope (in this story).
I’m not worried. Your not gonna break up the girls because of Tina. Don’t get me wrong I love B&T, but if everything has transpired like were led to believe, then she doesn’t derserve Bette. NO Cake, No frosting.
I really like the FUCK attack! Lol..I guess I might be the only one that find it funny.. Awesome chapter, continue please :)
Now, see, what I don’t understand is, if you’re Bette and/or Helena and you’ve got this really hot, really happy thing going, why would you care if Tina knows? She years removed from being a source of joy.
Great chapter!
Waving to my BeLena family……..heyyyyyyy girls!!……….I’m in total agreement with Funny1. I mean really, what does it really matter what Tina knows? She only made up her mind last chapter that she wanted B back ONLY B/c she “discovered” someone new taking hold of B’s heart. I have a funny feeling that neither meeting tonight is going to go well for our girls (B&H) B/c their minds are going to B on each other…..Post again sQQn!!
Ooooh Great Drama! Intrested to see how this trio turns out.
That was good. Caught up on the last three chapters and it was really like watching an afternoon soap opera. You totally captured the voice of each character… I’m a B&H fan, so please…Let Love Rule…
Deep in my heart I’m a Tibette person. Tina has treated Bette like dog mess.She cant control Bette anymore and thinking that she has lost Bette forever I think she is angry. Helena did some pretty bad things to Bette and everyone else,but if Bette can be happy with someone else then so be it.If it Tina good if its Helena good,Let Bette be happy. thanks
YAY!! I always get so excited when a new chapter gets posted ’cause this fic is freakin’ awesome! Sucks that Helena is so upset, though, but Bette’s gonna make it all better, right? I certainly hope so. I also hope that Tina minds her own damn business, but it’ll make for good drama if she doesn’t. Just so long as B&H live happily ever after (with each other, of coarse). Anyway, can’t wait for the next update.
oh i hope bette can reach helena
I think just the fact that Bette is more interested in finding Helena and is worrying about her rather than tina is a good indication of where her heart now lies. I have every faith B & H will get through this! I do so love this fic! Thank you!!
You write brillantly! I think it’s time for Bette to confess her love for Helena, and a romantic scene between them. :D Also to resolve issues with Tina! So glad to read your fanfic, it made my day! Thanks so much.
this is great stuff. looking forward to the next chapters!!
OOOOHHHH I love a little drama mixed in with my day!!! Thanks so very much for writing and sharing. Excellent dialogue!
Interesting chapter. I’m looking forwrad to the interactions of these three women. Thanks for writing!
I’m scared…. don’t be hard with the girls… be hard on tina… please….
Tina needs to follow Alice’s advice and leave Bette and Helena alone. And anyway, how can Bette know if she can trust Tina after all that has gone on? Tina’s being jealous may have more to do with not being able to control Bette than really loving her at this point. Just my perspective. . .
Uh oh! Trouble brewing over the horizon … Can’t wait for the update. Thanks zheese.
Zheese, another insightful addition to this fabulous fan fiction. I felt all of Alice’s frentic energy and panic as she tried, unsuccessfully, to placate both Helena and Bette as she tells them that Tina has discovered their blossoming relationship. Now Bette needs to tell both Helena then Tina how she feels. I am sure Helena’s feelings are fully reciprocated by Bette. Now might just be the best time to admit to them. Thank you so much for this terrific tale. Your Loyal Fan.
great chapter Zheese and please let Alice find Helena, don’t let it end hear please please please
I am so hooked on this story!! I have read a few Helena/Bette stories and yours is right up there at the top of the pile!! Please let them be happy together!
I do so love Bette and Helena together! Great story, and who cares what Tina thinks..again it’s all about her, and what she wants..Bette would need to be insane too to even think of going back to her..I think Tina doesn’t want Bette but doesn’t want anyone else to have her either. A means to control was mentioned, I agree.
Awesome chapter. You write each character so well. I hope Bette stays strong about her feelings for Helena. She’s finally happy and deserves to be.