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A Thin Line – Chpt 20
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“What have you been drinking?” she asked.
“The last of the Châteauneuf-du-Pape that you brought the other evening. Why? Would you like a drink?” I asked.
“Please,” Bette answered.
I crawled off of her and stood, reaching out my hand to her.
“Come. Follow me to the kitchen,” I said, tugging Bette’s hand.
When we reached the kitchen, I opened the wine chiller. Then I opened the adjacent, fully-stocked bar.
“What would you like, darling?” I asked, standing aside to allow Bette to make her selection.
She spied a bottle of Dalmore Scotch.
“The Dalmore, please,” Bette said.
“You have good taste,” I replied.
“That’s why I like you, Sweetheart,” Bette said, moving in to take me in her arms.
“Rough day?” I asked, clasping Bette tightly around her waist. “Your choice of strong drink suggests as much.”
Bette stared at me. Then she smiled.
“I had a wonderful day. With you. At lunch,” Bette said, stroking my face tenderly. “It only got bad when I found out you were upset about Tina.” Bette leaned in and kissed me gently. “Helena, you’re not a rebound. And you’re not a distraction,” she said reassuringly. “And I don’t think it’s going to take me long to catch up to your feelings.”
I stared into her eyes as Bette slipped her hand inside my gown, caressing my nipples. My eyes closed and I savored her touch as she gently fondled my breasts. Bette dipped her head down and pressed her lips to the flesh of my chest. My head lay back. I was enraptured. She licked upwards toward my neck and nibbled her way back to my ear, sucking on my lobe and inserting her tongue.
As I returned my head to an upright position, Bette pulled away and smiled. “You’re not a temporary distraction, but you are distracting.”
“As are you,” I replied, turning away and pulling out the bottle of Scotch. “I was supposed to be preparing a drink for you.”
I pulled out two glasses and poured two drinks, a neat Scotch for myself, as well as one for Bette. When I handed Bette her glass, I ran my fingers up and down her forearm softly.
“May we drink to us?” Bette asked softly, smiling.
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I second Helena’s “Damn, bloody phones” even if I’m not British and never say ‘bloody’ unless I actually mean something is bloody. She ought to be feeling reassured now. But who and what is waiting on the other end of the line?
Zheese, That was intense!! Absolutely fabulous to get Bette and most importantly Helena talking about their emotions again. This was so sadly lacking from Bette and Tina’s relationship in the end so it is refreshing to see how Bette has grown. And to be so near to that mind blowing moment then be robbed by the phone. Unjust I say. Means that I want double helpings in the next installment. Pretty please. Thnak you so much for this wondrous writing and terrific tale. Your Loyal Fan.
I can see the drama coming soon…These ladies are HOT together! Post Soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Great writing! Phonus Interruptus!
Again another great chapter Zheese. Well done and B & H really belong together. Please let it be Peggy on the phone. Post soon thankx
I think it would be quite fitting if it was, indeed, Tina on the phone. Funny, too. I just wanted to let you know this is the only Belena story I follow. Just fyi. So it must be good, cause I’m a Tibetter!
Phones suck! and apparently so does Helena!!;) hehehe great chapter glad to see Bette talking to Helena. Can’t wait to see Bette and Peggy interact AND how the hell is on the bloody phone!!
you are so wrong for that…the ringing phone…that is cold blooded…lol. nicely done bette, reassuring helena; and helena’s fears are so genuine…good job zheese…feels real…can’t wait for the next post.
You have done it again! Bloody phone call-cliffhanger! Geez zheese! You’re great and I love how B&H are learning how great and expressive love can be. Please keep this story going:)
Love this. I’m setting on the fence tho. Love Tand Bette. but I beginning to love B and H I feel like Tina is going to give the some shit. Drama is the name of the game. thanks
Oh damn the phone! LOL! Thanks zheese for the great update.
“Damn…Bloody Phones!” is right! UGH so frustrating!! Zheese your writing is just marvellous! I so hope Peggy is at the Art exhibit, she is so fab! I really can’t wait to see Tina’s reaction, bring on the drama!!
these 2 are so fucking hot!!! i hope Tina can act like a grown up when she see Bette and Helena together.
phones always get in the way, i can vouch for that, another trimuph of belena history, naked on the porch, what’s next? the roof? lol great chapter as always
I retrieve my jaw from the floor! Great chapter, it’s very hot! You’ve a very good writing style, combining sex and love into something that is so magical! I eagerly anticipate your next chapter!:D Thank you for writing Zheese, you’re a genius!
I’d like to see a follow-up to this chapter…SOOOOON!
1st – Thanks for allowing them to talk openly with one another regarding their fears and desires. 2nd – More importantly, I thank you for allowing them to LISTEN to and UNDERSTAND what the other is feeling. 3rd – Thank you one last time for allowing their feelings for each other to be purely genuine and NOT based on the “rebound” factor. QQ’g 4ward 2 the Art Exhibit and Tina being there…………bring the drama!! Let’s see how our girls really act in a tight situation. Will they stand behind the words that they’ve shared? And whoever is on that phone better have one hell of a terrific reason for interrupting me………..I mean them!! LOL
sorry zheese, just picking my tongue up off the floor. These two are so hot together! I can’t wait to see how things go at the art exhibit. I hope Peggy is there b/c she is simply magnificent and I always felt like she had a little crush on Bette (not that she would ever act on it) so i’m sure she is pretty damn pleased that her little girl is w/ such a spectacular lady. Tina’s reaction to seeing Bette and Helena out in public as a couple is going to be priceless. So who is on the phone? Damn these interruptions. i hope all the kids are ok, Bette’s and Helena’s. Post soon please.
oh come on now that wasnt fair. dumb phone and it better not be tina. Because she’s probably spying on them still
Great chapter. Stupid phone..hope it’s not Tina interrupting
Hot hot hotness. I love those two, and I can’t wait to see Tina’s reactoin. Great update.
Youre a God for writing this story it rules:)
Zheese, Wow, it feels like months (probably because it has been). Not going to bore you with all the details of why I haven’t been keeping up with this, but, I’ve spent the last 45 minutes or so catching up. WHAT A STORY! You’ve got such tact, such a gift! The way you paint the picture of Helena and Bette is enchanting, like I’m watching it unfold on the big screen. You’re even amazing writing Alice and Tina. When you become a famous writer, do send it to me. I’ve loved this thoroughly, and added you to my favorite author list. Amazing. I can’t focus in on one thing…I can’t single my brain down to one thing, but WOW! -Ms. Bp.s. Thanks for reading my story