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    A Thin Line – Chpt 20

    Story written on June 16, 2006 by zheese.
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    Helebette – Later Tuesday night

    I clinked her glass.

    “To us,” I said. We both sipped our Scotch while gazing into each other’s eyes. Then we gently pressed our lips together. “Bette, let’s go outside. By the pool. And sit together under the stars, in the moonlight. Please?”

    Bette kissed me again and took my hand. “Whatever you want. Lead the way,” she said agreeably.

    As we made our way onto the deck, Bette started to slide the paned door over the screen.

    “You can leave it open, Darling. I like the fresh air circulating through the house at night,” I informed her.

    “Certainly. A good choice,” Bette voiced her approval. “That must be what gives you your healthful glow,” she mused, wrapping her arm around my waist.

    Approaching the row of cushioned lounge chairs, I said, “I want us to sit together. In one chair. Is that alright?”

    “Of course, Sweetheart,” Bette replied.

    I stopped abruptly. “You’re killing me,” I said.

    “What?” Bette asked, looking in my eyes.

    “Every time you call me ‘Sweetheart’ I want to kiss you. And it makes me fucking wet,” I answered, kissing her lips.

    “Is that a problem? Because I can stop calling you ‘Sweetheart’,” she replied.

    “No. Please, don’t stop,” I said.

    “I don’t intend to, Sweetheart.” Bette affirmed. “Sweetheart, Sweetheart, Sweetheart, Sweetheart,” Bette whispered, teasing me.

    We both laughed and I leaned over and kissed her quickly five times as we slowly continued our short stroll to the lounger.

    “Here we are,” I announced, standing next to the chair. “Would you like to hold me, or shall I hold you?”

    “I want to hold you,” Bette answered decisively, sitting in the chair, placing her glass on the side table, and pulling me down to rest between her legs, my back against her chest.

    I handed Bette my glass to set down next to hers, and nuzzled my head under her neck as the stars danced and twinkled in perfect harmony in the sky. The moon was bright and nearly full. Bette squeezed her arms around me tightly.

    “Helena?”

    “Yes?”

    “Did you get my message tonight? To call me?” Bette asked.

    “Yes.”

    “Then why didn’t you call me back?” Bette continued questioning me.

    “Because I was afraid of what you might tell me,” I answered.

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    1. I second Helena’s “Damn, bloody phones” even if I’m not British and never say ‘bloody’ unless I actually mean something is bloody. She ought to be feeling reassured now. But who and what is waiting on the other end of the line?

    2. Zheese, That was intense!! Absolutely fabulous to get Bette and most importantly Helena talking about their emotions again. This was so sadly lacking from Bette and Tina’s relationship in the end so it is refreshing to see how Bette has grown. And to be so near to that mind blowing moment then be robbed by the phone. Unjust I say. Means that I want double helpings in the next installment. Pretty please. Thnak you so much for this wondrous writing and terrific tale. Your Loyal Fan.

    6. I think it would be quite fitting if it was, indeed, Tina on the phone. Funny, too. I just wanted to let you know this is the only Belena story I follow. Just fyi. So it must be good, cause I’m a Tibetter!

    7. Phones suck! and apparently so does Helena!!;) hehehe great chapter glad to see Bette talking to Helena. Can’t wait to see Bette and Peggy interact AND how the hell is on the bloody phone!!

    8. you are so wrong for that…the ringing phone…that is cold blooded…lol. nicely done bette, reassuring helena; and helena’s fears are so genuine…good job zheese…feels real…can’t wait for the next post.

    9. You have done it again! Bloody phone call-cliffhanger! Geez zheese! You’re great and I love how B&H are learning how great and expressive love can be. Please keep this story going:)

    10. Love this. I’m setting on the fence tho. Love Tand Bette. but I beginning to love B and H I feel like Tina is going to give the some shit. Drama is the name of the game. thanks

    12. “Damn…Bloody Phones!” is right! UGH so frustrating!! Zheese your writing is just marvellous! I so hope Peggy is at the Art exhibit, she is so fab! I really can’t wait to see Tina’s reaction, bring on the drama!!

    14. phones always get in the way, i can vouch for that, another trimuph of belena history, naked on the porch, what’s next? the roof? lol great chapter as always

    15. I retrieve my jaw from the floor! Great chapter, it’s very hot! You’ve a very good writing style, combining sex and love into something that is so magical! I eagerly anticipate your next chapter!:D Thank you for writing Zheese, you’re a genius!

    17. 1st – Thanks for allowing them to talk openly with one another regarding their fears and desires. 2nd – More importantly, I thank you for allowing them to LISTEN to and UNDERSTAND what the other is feeling. 3rd – Thank you one last time for allowing their feelings for each other to be purely genuine and NOT based on the “rebound” factor. QQ’g 4ward 2 the Art Exhibit and Tina being there…………bring the drama!! Let’s see how our girls really act in a tight situation. Will they stand behind the words that they’ve shared? And whoever is on that phone better have one hell of a terrific reason for interrupting me………..I mean them!! LOL

    18. sorry zheese, just picking my tongue up off the floor. These two are so hot together! I can’t wait to see how things go at the art exhibit. I hope Peggy is there b/c she is simply magnificent and I always felt like she had a little crush on Bette (not that she would ever act on it) so i’m sure she is pretty damn pleased that her little girl is w/ such a spectacular lady. Tina’s reaction to seeing Bette and Helena out in public as a couple is going to be priceless. So who is on the phone? Damn these interruptions. i hope all the kids are ok, Bette’s and Helena’s. Post soon please.

    23. Zheese, Wow, it feels like months (probably because it has been). Not going to bore you with all the details of why I haven’t been keeping up with this, but, I’ve spent the last 45 minutes or so catching up. WHAT A STORY! You’ve got such tact, such a gift! The way you paint the picture of Helena and Bette is enchanting, like I’m watching it unfold on the big screen. You’re even amazing writing Alice and Tina. When you become a famous writer, do send it to me. I’ve loved this thoroughly, and added you to my favorite author list. Amazing. I can’t focus in on one thing…I can’t single my brain down to one thing, but WOW! -Ms. Bp.s. Thanks for reading my story

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