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A Thin Line – Chpt 20
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I wasn’t prepared for Bette’s reaction. She laughed.
“So, you thought I may reconsider escorting you?” Bette said, when her laughter quieted.
“Well, yes,” I replied. “Why is that so amusing, Bette?”
“Oh, Sweetheart, your fear that I may reconsider being your date isn’t what’s funny,” she said, squeezing my hand. “It’s that Tina is concerned about publicly mingling with her two former girlfriends who are now seeing and fucking each other.”
“I’m so glad you see the humor,” I acknowledged. “I’d actually missed it.”
“Well, we’re going. And we will enjoy ourselves. Tina is not allowed to ruin our evening out together,” Bette asserted.
“I’m so glad you feel that way,” I said. “Oh, and there is someone else who may be there that I think you’ll actually be very pleased to see.”
“And who might that be?” Bette asked, raising her eyebrows.
“Well, I’m not certain yet if she’ll be able to make it, but it’s my mother,” I answered, smiling.
“You’re right. I can’t wait to see your mother again. I adore her,” Bette replied excitedly.
“And she adores you,” I said, kissing Bette’s lips. Caressing my cheek against hers, I whispered into Bette’s ear, “I have something else to tell you.”
“What’s that?” she asked softly.
“You have too many clothes on. I want you naked. Like me,” I breathed.
“But you’re not naked,” Bette observed.
“Let me correct that,” I requested.
I arose and stood before her. Bette stared at me. When I placed my hands on the knot in the sash of my robe, Bette reached for her drink and emptied the glass between her lips. I removed my gown, letting it fall to the ground. My nipples were hard, but only partly due to the cool night air. I took my hand and encased it between my legs. I ran my fingers over my moisture, before offering my hand to Bette’s mouth. She licked my fingers lovingly, and I could feel a trickle on my inner thighs. I pulled my fingers from her mouth and ran my other hand through her hair, all the while staring into her eyes.
“Helena, you are so beautiful.”
“Show me your beauty, Bette,” I said, leaning down and beginning to unbutton her blouse.
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I second Helena’s “Damn, bloody phones” even if I’m not British and never say ‘bloody’ unless I actually mean something is bloody. She ought to be feeling reassured now. But who and what is waiting on the other end of the line?
Zheese, That was intense!! Absolutely fabulous to get Bette and most importantly Helena talking about their emotions again. This was so sadly lacking from Bette and Tina’s relationship in the end so it is refreshing to see how Bette has grown. And to be so near to that mind blowing moment then be robbed by the phone. Unjust I say. Means that I want double helpings in the next installment. Pretty please. Thnak you so much for this wondrous writing and terrific tale. Your Loyal Fan.
I can see the drama coming soon…These ladies are HOT together! Post Soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Great writing! Phonus Interruptus!
Again another great chapter Zheese. Well done and B & H really belong together. Please let it be Peggy on the phone. Post soon thankx
I think it would be quite fitting if it was, indeed, Tina on the phone. Funny, too. I just wanted to let you know this is the only Belena story I follow. Just fyi. So it must be good, cause I’m a Tibetter!
Phones suck! and apparently so does Helena!!;) hehehe great chapter glad to see Bette talking to Helena. Can’t wait to see Bette and Peggy interact AND how the hell is on the bloody phone!!
you are so wrong for that…the ringing phone…that is cold blooded…lol. nicely done bette, reassuring helena; and helena’s fears are so genuine…good job zheese…feels real…can’t wait for the next post.
You have done it again! Bloody phone call-cliffhanger! Geez zheese! You’re great and I love how B&H are learning how great and expressive love can be. Please keep this story going:)
Love this. I’m setting on the fence tho. Love Tand Bette. but I beginning to love B and H I feel like Tina is going to give the some shit. Drama is the name of the game. thanks
Oh damn the phone! LOL! Thanks zheese for the great update.
“Damn…Bloody Phones!” is right! UGH so frustrating!! Zheese your writing is just marvellous! I so hope Peggy is at the Art exhibit, she is so fab! I really can’t wait to see Tina’s reaction, bring on the drama!!
these 2 are so fucking hot!!! i hope Tina can act like a grown up when she see Bette and Helena together.
phones always get in the way, i can vouch for that, another trimuph of belena history, naked on the porch, what’s next? the roof? lol great chapter as always
I retrieve my jaw from the floor! Great chapter, it’s very hot! You’ve a very good writing style, combining sex and love into something that is so magical! I eagerly anticipate your next chapter!:D Thank you for writing Zheese, you’re a genius!
I’d like to see a follow-up to this chapter…SOOOOON!
1st – Thanks for allowing them to talk openly with one another regarding their fears and desires. 2nd – More importantly, I thank you for allowing them to LISTEN to and UNDERSTAND what the other is feeling. 3rd – Thank you one last time for allowing their feelings for each other to be purely genuine and NOT based on the “rebound” factor. QQ’g 4ward 2 the Art Exhibit and Tina being there…………bring the drama!! Let’s see how our girls really act in a tight situation. Will they stand behind the words that they’ve shared? And whoever is on that phone better have one hell of a terrific reason for interrupting me………..I mean them!! LOL
sorry zheese, just picking my tongue up off the floor. These two are so hot together! I can’t wait to see how things go at the art exhibit. I hope Peggy is there b/c she is simply magnificent and I always felt like she had a little crush on Bette (not that she would ever act on it) so i’m sure she is pretty damn pleased that her little girl is w/ such a spectacular lady. Tina’s reaction to seeing Bette and Helena out in public as a couple is going to be priceless. So who is on the phone? Damn these interruptions. i hope all the kids are ok, Bette’s and Helena’s. Post soon please.
oh come on now that wasnt fair. dumb phone and it better not be tina. Because she’s probably spying on them still
Great chapter. Stupid phone..hope it’s not Tina interrupting
Hot hot hotness. I love those two, and I can’t wait to see Tina’s reactoin. Great update.
Youre a God for writing this story it rules:)
Zheese, Wow, it feels like months (probably because it has been). Not going to bore you with all the details of why I haven’t been keeping up with this, but, I’ve spent the last 45 minutes or so catching up. WHAT A STORY! You’ve got such tact, such a gift! The way you paint the picture of Helena and Bette is enchanting, like I’m watching it unfold on the big screen. You’re even amazing writing Alice and Tina. When you become a famous writer, do send it to me. I’ve loved this thoroughly, and added you to my favorite author list. Amazing. I can’t focus in on one thing…I can’t single my brain down to one thing, but WOW! -Ms. Bp.s. Thanks for reading my story