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A Thin Line – Chpt 24
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“I’ll tell you later, Sweetheart,” I replied with a smile.
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Dinner ended soon after my return to the table. Mummy announced that she was exhausted from her flight and had her driver take her back to her suite at the hotel. Bette and I decided I would follow her home since her house was closer to the restaurant.
I pulled into Bette’s driveway behind her. When she exited from her car, she stood and waited for me to join her and took my hand as we walked to the door. Bette was quiet. She appeared to be contemplating something important. Entering the house, Bette kicked off her shoes and headed towards a seat on the couch. As she sat, she looked up at me nearing her, and held out an arm for me to join her.
“Come here,” Bette said, smiling hugely, seductively.
I sat down next to her and she wrapped her arms around me. When she drew back, she caressed my face with her hand and stared into my eyes before kissing me. She took my lips slowly, lovingly. It was a tender kiss and she lay back on the sofa pulling me with her. I moaned in my pleasure.
“Mmm. I’ve waited all evening for that kiss,” I said, stroking Bette’s face. “Did you have a rough day at work, Darling?”
“Yes,” Bette answered, snuggling against me and holding me tight. “You know what sounds so very nice right now?”
“What?” I whispered.
“A nice soak in a bubble bath,” she replied softly.
“Mmm. That does sound nice,” I breathed in her ear, and nibbled at her lobe.
“Would you like to join me?” Bette whispered her invitation.
“Need you ask?” I answered.
Bette laughed, squeezing me tightly before releasing me. “Get up,” she said, patting my behind.
I crawled off of her and stood, taking Bette’s hand to help her up. We walked into the bathroom and Bette turned on the faucet to run the bath water. I spied some candles on the vanity.
“May I light the candles, Bette?” I asked.
“Please. There should be some matches in the drawer on the right,” she said, as she busied herself pouring bubbles under the tap.
Having lit the candles, I turned off the bathroom light and stood with my back leaning against the vanity. I watched Bette swish the water with her hand to stir up the bubbles. When she turned around to look at me, I began unbuttoning my blouse. Bette smiled and sat down on the closed toilet seat.
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They love each other and I love Peggy, this woman rocks… awesome chapter, zheese, can’t wait to find out what happens on Thursday
Zheese-More than i love Helena and Bette together, i love that Bette can open up to Peggy and discuss how she is feeling about her daughter. Looks like Bette is already daughter in law material in Peggy’s eyes and wifey material in Helena’s……….smooth sailing ahead (I hope).
I’m with so many others. Love your portrayal of Peggy. I can just see Holland Taylor saying those words and the mannerisms are right on!
Aww. Another remarkable chapter. I do find myself thinking Peggy to be quite capable of all of those words, as I listened to her voice say them in my head. Great great chapter. And the delightful little I love you scene was enough to make me sniffle with happiness. Please keep this up, it’s fantastico.
Peggy is a wise ol’ woman!
so cute! sooooooooo cute!! i love your story and can’t wait to read more! love bette and helena together!!! =)
Your characterization of Peggy is spot on! I’m really enjoying your story.
Awesome. Two young girls in love…No time for Tina drama…Love your story
Zheese this was splendid. I loved Peggy very much and I was glad to see she somehow cares about her daughter. thx for making Bette tell Helena she loved her.
Hey Zheese, Another wonderful and enjoyable chapter. Peggy was a absolute star and acted like Venus in bringing Bette and Helena to a point where they could each declare their truest emotions and admit their love for one another. It was a beautifully written and emotionally tender moment. Thanky you for this wondrous gift. Your Loyal Fan.
Crap, zheese! I’m eating my cereal before heading to the airport! The deed is done. Can’t wait to see how this session turns out. Gotta go.
This was awesome, Zheese! You write Peggy most excellentlly and the fact of Peggy working with Bette as to why she didn’t want to say I love in teh first. Loved it!
Your story of love is so very beautiful. Thank you for sharing it with all of us.
Way to go Bette!!! I just love your story. I really like these two girls together.
Peggy’s comments are perfect and so definitely sound like her…that was real nice…love the way you developed the delivery of the “l” word. this is definitely a dynamic duo…
Zheese, WTF…………you do Peggy TOO DAMN WELL!! I really could see / hear Peggy with her hands in the air and the “Seize It” speech. Almost made me holla AMEN! As always, you continue to outdo yourself. Thanks for Bette’s declaration. After being so wounded, this is a huge step for them both. QQ’g 4ward to the next 1.
WOW!!! This Chapter was just wonderful. The way you had Peggy speek to Bette was right on. Bette telling Helena she loved her was just GREAT. Thank you
Beautiful Zheese, just beautiful! Loved Peggy and you write her so bloody well, it was just her all over, and the dialogue between Bette and Peggy was amazing.
Ah such bliss! Excellent chapter, Zheese. Thanks ^_^