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A Thin Line – Chpt 24
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“May I watch?” she asked.
I slowly undid each button and removed my blouse, dropping it to the floor. Then I reached behind me to unclasp my bra, never moving my gaze from Bette’s. I slid the straps from my shoulders and discarded the lacy fabric with my top. Bette arose and walked over to me. She caressed my breasts gently with her fingertips and leaned in to kiss me. She unzipped my pants and pulled them down along with my thong over my hips. I wriggled and they fell to the floor. I reached for the hem of Bette’s sweater and pulled it over her head. As she unhooked her bra in the front, I unzipped her pants and dipped my hand down between her legs.
“Oh, God,” she breathed. “What you do to me.” She quickly removed her bra and pants and we stood together naked holding one another, our bodies pressed together and our mouths kissing, as the water continued to fill up the tub.
Bette pulled away and took my hand, taking those few steps to the edge of the tub. She turned off the water and tested it with her hand. Then she started to get in.
“No,” I stopped her. “Let me in first. I want to hold you.”
She looked at me and smiled.
“Alright,” she acquiesced, standing aside.
I sat down in the water and leaned against the end wall of the tub, holding out my arms to her.
Bette stepped in and seated herself in front of me, resting her back against my chest. I wrapped my arms around her, and she slid down nuzzling her head under my chin.
“Are you comfortable?” I asked.
“Mmm. Very.” Bette embraced my arms embracing her, and squeezed tightly.
I kissed the top of her head.
“Did you have a good time tonight at dinner with Mummy,” I inquired.
“Yes, of course,” Bette answered, rubbing my arms.
We soaked in the candlelit tub contentedly and silently for several minutes. And I cherished each moment I held her.
At last Bette spoke.
“Helena?”
“Yes, my darling.”
“There’s something I want to tell you,” Bette said softly.
“Alright. Tell me,” I said squeezing her and kissing the top of her head once again.
“Not here. In bed. Are you ready to get out?” she asked.
“If that’s what you want,” I answered.
Bette leaned forward and unplugged the stopper to allow the water to drain. Then she pulled herself up and got out of the tub. She held out her hand to help me up. Grabbing a towel, she first dried me off and then herself. No words were spoken. She took my hand and grabbed a candle from the vanity top. When we reached her bedside, she placed the candle on the nightstand. Pulling back the bedspread, she smiled at me and we crawled in next to each other. She wrapped her arms around me and looked in my eyes. The candlelight flickered. Her expression became serious.
“Helena, I love you.”
I looked back in her eyes. Astounded. “Bette?” I whispered.
“I do, Helena. I love you. I wanted to be the first to say it.”
I pulled her close and whispered in her ear, “And I love you.” I thought I might cry and burst from happiness as she held me tightly.
We kissed. And then we made love ‘til the wee hours of the morning.
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They love each other and I love Peggy, this woman rocks… awesome chapter, zheese, can’t wait to find out what happens on Thursday
Zheese-More than i love Helena and Bette together, i love that Bette can open up to Peggy and discuss how she is feeling about her daughter. Looks like Bette is already daughter in law material in Peggy’s eyes and wifey material in Helena’s……….smooth sailing ahead (I hope).
I’m with so many others. Love your portrayal of Peggy. I can just see Holland Taylor saying those words and the mannerisms are right on!
Aww. Another remarkable chapter. I do find myself thinking Peggy to be quite capable of all of those words, as I listened to her voice say them in my head. Great great chapter. And the delightful little I love you scene was enough to make me sniffle with happiness. Please keep this up, it’s fantastico.
Peggy is a wise ol’ woman!
so cute! sooooooooo cute!! i love your story and can’t wait to read more! love bette and helena together!!! =)
Your characterization of Peggy is spot on! I’m really enjoying your story.
Awesome. Two young girls in love…No time for Tina drama…Love your story
Zheese this was splendid. I loved Peggy very much and I was glad to see she somehow cares about her daughter. thx for making Bette tell Helena she loved her.
Hey Zheese, Another wonderful and enjoyable chapter. Peggy was a absolute star and acted like Venus in bringing Bette and Helena to a point where they could each declare their truest emotions and admit their love for one another. It was a beautifully written and emotionally tender moment. Thanky you for this wondrous gift. Your Loyal Fan.
Crap, zheese! I’m eating my cereal before heading to the airport! The deed is done. Can’t wait to see how this session turns out. Gotta go.
This was awesome, Zheese! You write Peggy most excellentlly and the fact of Peggy working with Bette as to why she didn’t want to say I love in teh first. Loved it!
Your story of love is so very beautiful. Thank you for sharing it with all of us.
Way to go Bette!!! I just love your story. I really like these two girls together.
Peggy’s comments are perfect and so definitely sound like her…that was real nice…love the way you developed the delivery of the “l” word. this is definitely a dynamic duo…
Zheese, WTF…………you do Peggy TOO DAMN WELL!! I really could see / hear Peggy with her hands in the air and the “Seize It” speech. Almost made me holla AMEN! As always, you continue to outdo yourself. Thanks for Bette’s declaration. After being so wounded, this is a huge step for them both. QQ’g 4ward to the next 1.
WOW!!! This Chapter was just wonderful. The way you had Peggy speek to Bette was right on. Bette telling Helena she loved her was just GREAT. Thank you
Beautiful Zheese, just beautiful! Loved Peggy and you write her so bloody well, it was just her all over, and the dialogue between Bette and Peggy was amazing.
Ah such bliss! Excellent chapter, Zheese. Thanks ^_^