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A Thin Line – Chpt 25
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Her mother had been right. Those three words were indeed ‘important to say, and perhaps even more important to hear.’ They made me feel as if I belonged again. Belonged to a world not so frightening and empty, to a world of happiness, to a life worth living with Helena.
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Thursday at work passed quickly. And before I knew it, I was parked in front of Bette’s house, waiting for our driver to escort her to the car.
I was more than pleased that Bette was totally taken aback at the sight of the dress I wore that evening. It was a form-fitting, flesh tone gown with an intricate lace bodice and a neckline that plunged in a vee down to my navel. I’d wanted to stun her. And so I did.
“Fuck, Helena! Oh my God, you look gorgeous,” was her initial response when she slid into the seat next to me in the limousine. It was quickly followed by, “I can’t keep my mouth or my hands off of you.” And I was entertained immediately with the touch of Bette’s thumbs caressing my nipples over the lace, as well as pleasured with a plethora of kisses on my mouth and my neck, and down my front. Bette was so aroused that I’d had to massage between her legs and bring her to climax before we even reached the gallery. She jestingly chastised me for my choice of provocative attire. And when we pulled up in front of the gallery, her words were, “You realize, of course, that we’re not finished yet, and can’t possibly stay long. You are much too alluring this evening. And what I want to do to you is not for public consumption.”
“As you wish,” I smiled demurely. Then as we walked to the door hand-in-hand, I leaned into Bette’s ear and whispered, “I can’t wait until we fuck tonight. You’re going to be a tiger.”
Bette looked at me and growled softly as we entered through the door laughing.
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No doubt about it. Bette and Helena were in their element. Tina and I, standing a ways back, and off in a corner, spied them making their entrance. They were completely happy and at ease, and Edouard Pince, who I’d learned was the gallery owner, quickly made his way over to greet them with kisses to their cheeks. Others quickly followed suit.
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Well, Peggy DID have a point.
What a gathering. What a story. More please.
Fantastic!!!!!Don’t stop now you’ve got me hooked!!
Drama!! I love it.
Hahahahaha! I just LOVE Peggy! LMAO!
rotflmfao…that was so funny!!! you so have peggy down…she is priceless…and tina with the “i can tell she’s been f***”…and then alice’s comments about tina’s discomfort….oh man zheese, this was priceless and certainly worth the wait. looking forward to the next post…the “i f**** bette porter fan club” …priceless. thank you!
As soon as you had TIna join the the circle, I just knew something was coming out of Peggy’s mouth!! oh my god!! I laugh so hard, i almost peed!
Peggy’s a pistol! When you’ve got money and say something inappropriate you’re deemed eccentric or outspoken but when you’re of ordinary means then you thought of as trashy or low class. But very funny!
Yes Peggy is a pistol, but why rag on Bette here, and embarrass the woman to death!! I love your story, love Bette and Helena but I could live very comfortably NEVER hearing Alice go on about how Bette wronged her, broke her heart, ruined her life and so on, again!! they dated a few weeks…PERIOD! She has always had this bitterness and is why she is first in line to stand by Tina, no matter what tina does. Tina and alice make me nuts..and not in a good way. must calm down..I think I need another drink!! Gumby? Where are ya gumby!!
hahaha….I fucked Bette Porter club….you’re so bad….can I join this club??
ah zheese. I laughed out loud a few times with this chapter…don’t apologize for the snail’s pace – sometimes a slower pace is exactly what is required in order to tell a story properly. Well done.
zheese, another good one! I have been strangely busier than ever, which has prevented me from commenting and pm’g as I have in the past. Great chapter and the great story continues. I’m still thoroughly enjoying!
Peggy has such a way with words and Tina too “So what’s new?” Indeed. Fun chapter in every way.
Damn, I missed this post! I’m deeply sorry. Quite a hilarious chapter. I could feel how freaking AWKWARD that would be and this line certainly had me laughing: “My, God, what is this?” Peggy exclaimed in astonishment. “Isn’t this an Edouard Pince Gallery Opening? Or have I mistaken it for a chapter meeting of the ‘I-Fucked-Bette Porter’ Club?”Hahaha! Great work, going to read the next.
Or have I mistaken it for a chapter meeting of the ‘I-Fucked-Bette Porter’ Club?”Best line ever–and Peggy was dead on….LOL!
lol…I have been in exactly that situation, with my present gf, our (we had both been with her) ex and her exs…5 in all!!!!! it was harder for the Bette Porter in the group than us exs!!!
Haha Zheese this was hilarious. Peggy really doesn’t know when to quit does she. She’s so crazy but I love her. Please continue the good work girl.
rotflmfao LOL LOL LOLPeggy is always the best… I didn’t realize the Club fact until she said it LOL :D She is sooo funny and she can be so embarassing and Helena is so subject to her LOL My God, zheese, I laughed a lot at this chapter. Nice work :D Keep it up, I will ship these two and your story as long as it goes on.
Now could that have been any more uncomfortable?? Wow, nice choice of women to assemble. I guess they really could compare notes about Bette. OK, enough chatter, lets get these two love birds home.
Peggt is too much she had me rolln on the ground laughin. At the same time though she was right
Excellent! …. This line was the best! …” Or have I mistaken it for a chapter meeting of the ‘I-Fucked-Bette Porter’ Club?” You are a very clever writer. I am really enjoying this story. Thank you.
lol…that was funny…Peggy is like a 3 year old…you never know what’s coming out her mouth…I bet you could have heard a pen drop…even though the ladies probably could compare notes…love this story please continue.
lol, Leave it to Peggy to state what everyone else KNOWS they were thinking, lol. Great update. But I need to add…. I hate Tina. She hasn’t even DONE anything yet, but she’s going to offer false niceties or just be, and yeah.. grrr. lol. Great update though
“My, God, what is this?” …have I mistaken it for a chapter meeting of the ‘I-Fucked-Bette Porter’ Club?” OUCH – THAT WAS HARSH…love my Peggy P GREAT chapter!
Zheese, I love the sense of desire, heat and lust that you create in this story. The way in which Bette and Helena can’t physically keep their hands off each other is wonderful. I am sure the rest of the gals can smell the scent of longing on them. Ansd wasn’t Candace gracefully and restrained while perfect Peggy cam e up with an awesome line “Or have I mistaken it for a chapter meeting of the ‘I-Fucked-Bette Porter’ Club?” You had me rolling in the aisles with that one. It just seemed so true to Peggy’s character and volcabuary. You have such a talent for balance all of these characters and their dialouge that it genuinely astounds me. Can’t wait to see where it leads. Thank you for sharing it with me. Your Loyal Fan.
That was to funny. Peggy and her way of getting right to the truth. Just Great!!! Please post soon
Ha ha! Love Peggy! That was fun. Thanks zheese ^_^