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A Thin Line – Chpt 28
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“Do you mind?” she asked, wiggling her toes against my midriff.
With my hands I began to gently massage her foot. Smiling, I answered, “Of course I don’t mind.”
Helena lay her head back. “That feels good,” she said, followed by a long pause. She raised her head and looked at me. “To answer your question, or observation, about my relationship with my mother, we were never what I’d call close. But in my youth, I did see her during the summers and on holidays. But those were short intervals. I loved her. As a daughter should love her mother. But what I didn’t love was that she was rarely around. And I resented that I didn’t have a home like so many of my schoolmates. We get along much better now.” Helena hesitated for a few moments before continuing. “Especially since the Dylan debacle a few months back. That brought us closer together. And she adores you, Bette. Absolutely adores you. She appreciates your passion for art.” Helena paused again. I continued, kneading her foot and caressing her toes, just listening. “You know, I actually spent quite a stint painting at one time. Just to impress Mummy. Because she so appreciates art. Another failure on my part, I’m afraid,” Helena added ruefully.
Totally surprised, I stopped rubbing Helena’s foot.
“You’re an artist, Helena?” I asked in astonishment.
A half-grin accompanied her shaking head.
“I said I painted for a while. I didn’t say I was an artist,” she replied modestly.
“I want to see your work,” I said excitedly. “Do you have any around?”
Helena laughed. “Oh, please!”
“I’m serious, Sweetheart. I want to see what you’ve done. When was this?” I pressed.
“In my late teenage years,” Helena said.
“After Avril?” I asked, smiling.
“Yes, after Avril,” she answered. “And it’s not good.”
“Let me be the judge of that,” I replied. “Where is it?”
“Some of it is in my apartment in New York. I have a few pieces here,” she said, finishing her glass of wine and reaching for the bottle to replenish her glass. “It’s all stored away.”
“Well, it must mean something to you if you’ve kept it, and if you’ve brought some of it with you to California,” I opined.
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great updat zheese. Waw Helena and Bette have more and more in common and all this shows us how much they are made for each other. please don’t wait so long next time before you post again. Thx
Zheese! I’m sooo addicted to your writing. Its the whole flow.. I’m glad you’re bring their relationship into a higher level – something deeper than just sexual attraction. :D please continue!
Helena’s got more skills than we know. I can’t wait to see the surprise.Post soon. I need my nightly Belena fix
I knew Bette was passionate about art, but I didn’t think it was literal. Get out those brushes, Helena. And use them creatively!
wherever your writing takes you…let it…yet again, that was real good. looking forward to your next post. THANKS!
ahh…that’s it? That’s all you’re giving us? Well I guess I have to take! I love the fact that Helena paints and also how you added in there about Bette AND Peggy both stated they liked her stuff out of not wanting to embrass Helena. Can’t wait for more!
Zheese, It may have been awhile since your last post but it has been worth it as this chapter rocks! The counter balance between Helena’s and Bette’s thoughts and points of view are awesome. Can’t wait to find out Helena’s real surprise. Will this surpass her culinery talents and painting? Am sure that you have some real romance up your sleeve. Thank you so much for this afternoon delight. Your Loyal Fan.
Bette rubbed her nose against mine playfully. Then she took my lips with a passion I’d never known. ………. To say art really turns Bette on is an understatement. To say its art done by Helena which has stirred Bette’s sensual juices means the next chapter is going to sizzle. Hopefully it wont be too long before you post the next one and believe me, I enjoyed this one as well !! ^_^
Ah zheese. Thanks for another great update. Love your writing. Helena, an artist? wow!
Ooh, what a cute story with Avril and Helena…and how Peggy knowingly-without-saying had her confirmations about Helena’s little fling with the culinary student. I loved how Bette reacted to the paintings! And the fact that Helena had them at all. What a lovely chapter, yet again, can’t wait to read more. And let those characters keep on talking to you- they’re telling you great things!