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A Thin Line – Chpt 28
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Helena looked at me with slight embarrassment.
“Occasionally, I like to pull it out and take a look at that time in my life,” she stated, deeply absorbed in thought.
I patted her foot and lifted it off my lap. Helena placed it back under the table as I scooted back my chair. I got up and walked the couple of steps towards her and knelt next to Helena. Reaching up, I placed my hand around Helena’s neck and pulled her in for a kiss.
When I pulled away, I whispered, “Show me your paintings. Please.”
“Bette, no. You’ll make fun of them. You’ll hate them,” she argued softly.
“Please. Pretty, please,” I begged, kissing her again.
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“Fuck!” Bette exclaimed.
“See, I told you. I knew you wouldn’t like them,” I said stubbornly. Quietly.
“Helena! Fuck!” Bette cried out again, strolling across the floor, perusing each painting. “Are you crazy!
There were a couple of portraits. A few paintings of the English countryside. A couple of the Côte d’Azur. Some vineyards in Bordeaux. Islands off Greece.
“All of this is fucking amazing!” Bette protested.
“You’re just saying that so you won’t hurt my feelings like Mummy did,” I argued.
“You are so wrong!” Bette exclaimed again, reaching for me and pulling me into her arms. “My God, you’re talent is astounding. This all makes me want to open another gallery and put your work on grand display for the whole world to see.”
“Bette, please,” I contended.
Bette pulled back and looked me in my eyes, smiling brightly.
“Sweetheart, I’m not kidding. I’m not lying. I’m not feigning adoration. I’ve never seen anything like this! You need to be painting. You need to be showing,” she declared. Bette kissed me passionately. “Was this supposed to be my surprise?” Bette asked, drawing away and rubbing my back.
I laughed uncontrollably. “No, of course not!”
“Well, nevertheless, it is a wonderful one!” Bette announced before kissing me again. She held me tightly and caressed my cheek with hers. “Helena, my beautiful, artistic love,” she whispered in my ear, “make love to me. Now. Please. No wonder I can‘t get enough of you. You are all the masters rolled into one. But with a flair all your own.”
Bette rubbed her nose against mine playfully. Then she took my lips with a passion I’d never known.
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great updat zheese. Waw Helena and Bette have more and more in common and all this shows us how much they are made for each other. please don’t wait so long next time before you post again. Thx
Zheese! I’m sooo addicted to your writing. Its the whole flow.. I’m glad you’re bring their relationship into a higher level – something deeper than just sexual attraction. :D please continue!
Helena’s got more skills than we know. I can’t wait to see the surprise.Post soon. I need my nightly Belena fix
I knew Bette was passionate about art, but I didn’t think it was literal. Get out those brushes, Helena. And use them creatively!
wherever your writing takes you…let it…yet again, that was real good. looking forward to your next post. THANKS!
ahh…that’s it? That’s all you’re giving us? Well I guess I have to take! I love the fact that Helena paints and also how you added in there about Bette AND Peggy both stated they liked her stuff out of not wanting to embrass Helena. Can’t wait for more!
Zheese, It may have been awhile since your last post but it has been worth it as this chapter rocks! The counter balance between Helena’s and Bette’s thoughts and points of view are awesome. Can’t wait to find out Helena’s real surprise. Will this surpass her culinery talents and painting? Am sure that you have some real romance up your sleeve. Thank you so much for this afternoon delight. Your Loyal Fan.
Bette rubbed her nose against mine playfully. Then she took my lips with a passion I’d never known. ………. To say art really turns Bette on is an understatement. To say its art done by Helena which has stirred Bette’s sensual juices means the next chapter is going to sizzle. Hopefully it wont be too long before you post the next one and believe me, I enjoyed this one as well !! ^_^
Ah zheese. Thanks for another great update. Love your writing. Helena, an artist? wow!
Ooh, what a cute story with Avril and Helena…and how Peggy knowingly-without-saying had her confirmations about Helena’s little fling with the culinary student. I loved how Bette reacted to the paintings! And the fact that Helena had them at all. What a lovely chapter, yet again, can’t wait to read more. And let those characters keep on talking to you- they’re telling you great things!