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A Thin Line – Chpt 3
I was pretty sure Kit didn’t mind that Bette was borrowing her office. She was just trying to extricate herself from the discomfort that her interruption had unfortunately caused.
At that moment, I detected the distinct squeaking of Kit’s chair as she stood. “Speaking of business,†I heard her say, “I just came in to use the bathroom. You ladies carry on. Take all time you need.â€
Oh, shit, oh shit, oh shit, oh shit! About to be caught, I shot out that door like lightening and made my way down the hall as fast as my legs could carry me.
What happened next Bette would have to tell you. I was busy running for my life.
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No sooner than Kit had slid back the pocket door to the bathroom and stepped in, she returned. I looked up to see her leaning against the door jamb, arms crossed. She was shaking her head and wearing a peculiar expression. It was a mixture of minor outrage and mild amusement.
“What is it, Kit?†I asked, perplexed.
“Bette, I don’t know what’s been going on in here, but it seems you two have become the unsuspecting victims of a Peeping Tom. Or should I say, a Peeping Alice?†Kit answered. “Well, I actually don’t know if she was peeping, I just know you can hear everything that goes on in this office from the bathroom.â€
Helena and I looked at each other, exclaiming at once, “What?â€
It was no revelation to me that Alice was meddlesome. I’ll never forget the time that she, along with Shane and Dana, called a meeting with Tina and I to discuss the growing complacency of our life together. She called us “boring.†At any rate, I was well aware of the lengths she would go to impose herself where not welcome. This latest invasion to my privacy, however, warranted some action.
Addressing Kit, I inquired what she had witnessed.
“When I pulled this door back,†Kit explained, indicating where she was standing, “I saw the hall door ajar. When I went to close it, I looked out into the hallway and saw Little Miss Nosy fleeing like a scared jackrabbit.â€
“I thought you kept that door locked, Kit,†I reasoned, still slightly horrified.
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(24 votes, average: 4.04 out of 5)
Hell or HellBette do continue
yeh!!! go girl
PLEASE continue!!! This is the way it should be: Belena!
OH…..this is so good! I love this pairing and you are definitely doing it justice. Looking forward to the next post.
this is great, please keep it coming… soon! thanx
YES PLEASE :-D !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Excellent zheese! This pairing definately has my interest piqued – lord knows we need some interest returned to Bette’s love life, and they really have a history together that propels this story along. As a staunch B&T fan, I have come to the conclusion that it is finally time for Bette to achieve some happiness in life and for Tina to see it and realize exactly what she has lost!!! Please continue!
PLEASE CONTINUE!!!
Tease! Why the Cliffy? Come back!
Yes, I like something new. Please continue
This is great fun – please go on.
That was a great part. Please continue.
Go after that woman Bette and make her yours thanks
Wonderful change of POV. I can’t wait to hear what Helena thought of the “dance.”
Love it! Getting a bit hotter then both of them were ready for I think.
I could so hear Kit fussing…funny! This is heating up…like it, love it, want so more of it…soon…Please!!!
Really loving this story! Please post again soon!
Nice turn of events and of voices. Liked the interior monologues as well. Looking forward.
Ohhhhhhhhh I like that, Belena..sounds like one of my favorite drinks, a belini ;] That dance got me all excited!! Thank you for your writing I appreciate every word!!
awww Helena dont go..Bette won’t hurt u, will u Bette?Nice one Z (*sniff* I’m just a bit..*sniff* emotional right now)..Helena’s imploring look really tugged at my heart *sigh* Hope B doesnt leave Helena hanging for too long…thanks Z, and post soon please.
Well, that’s great! I absolutely loved that, and the transition between the two characters was funny. I must say again that you write these characters so well. Great! Pleaseeee continue. :)
Helena come back. Don’t go.
Very funny …poor Alice….But whats more is how sexy these 2 were…i could feel the tension…and it was good too…lol
Hoho, could Bette be more clueless? By now, for Bette, it’s kind of more physical attraction than mental. Hope they could find some common interests or something like that soon.
I’m enjoying this story very much. Please post soon.
please do continue… bravo on ur writing!