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A Thin Line – Chpt 3
“I do. But one of the cleaning crew brought to my attention yesterday that the lock didn’t seem to be fastening properly. And besides,†she said reluctantly under her breath, “I gave Alice a key.â€
“Kit! For God’s sake! Are you fucking crazy? Why? Why would you do that?â€
“Now, don’t try to bully me, Bette Porter. I had my reasons,†Kit asserted.
“I’m sure you did,†I consented, calming myself. “I’m not blaming you. I’m just a little excited. It’s okay.â€
Helena had been sitting back quietly taking in our sisterly squabble. I leaned back on the sofa, arms folded, and looked at her, and then at Kit, contemplating how I wanted to deal with the developments at hand. They both waited patiently, watching my wheels turn.
At last, I leaned forward and spoke, “If Alice wants gossip, I’m going to give her a show that’ll blow her mind. That is, if I can I count on some assistance from you two.â€
“Oh, girl! What kinda meanness do you have cookin’ in that brain of yours?†Kit agreed inquisitively.
And Helena asked sportingly, “Are you proposing some fun, Bette?â€
In order to hasten the story along, I’ll spare you the details. Let’s just say, for now, I expeditiously armed Kit with her instructions and sent her back to the club area with the admonition, “And no matter what, don’t let Alice know you caught her hiding out in the restroom.â€
I then set to briefing Helena on the outline of my plan.
At the end of our discussion, she observed, “You’re very mischievous, Bette.â€
“Do you think you can do this convincingly? Can you carry this off?†I asked her.
Helena paused before answering, “If you’re able, then I am as well.†For some reason, I ignored the slight hesitation in her voice.
I looked at her and smiled, appreciating her comradeship, “Then if you’re ready, let’s go. And just follow my lead.â€
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Helena and I made our way back to the table and seated ourselves next to each other.
“What took you guys so long?†Alice inquired. “Did you make nice?â€
“Sorry, Alice. We had a lot to thrash out,†I apologized. “And yes, we made nice.â€
I immediately turned my attention to Helena. As we smiled and gazed into each other’s eyes, I asked, “Where are our drinks, Alice?â€
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(24 votes, average: 4.04 out of 5)
Hell or HellBette do continue
yeh!!! go girl
PLEASE continue!!! This is the way it should be: Belena!
OH…..this is so good! I love this pairing and you are definitely doing it justice. Looking forward to the next post.
this is great, please keep it coming… soon! thanx
YES PLEASE :-D !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Excellent zheese! This pairing definately has my interest piqued – lord knows we need some interest returned to Bette’s love life, and they really have a history together that propels this story along. As a staunch B&T fan, I have come to the conclusion that it is finally time for Bette to achieve some happiness in life and for Tina to see it and realize exactly what she has lost!!! Please continue!
PLEASE CONTINUE!!!
Tease! Why the Cliffy? Come back!
Yes, I like something new. Please continue
This is great fun – please go on.
That was a great part. Please continue.
Go after that woman Bette and make her yours thanks
Wonderful change of POV. I can’t wait to hear what Helena thought of the “dance.”
Love it! Getting a bit hotter then both of them were ready for I think.
I could so hear Kit fussing…funny! This is heating up…like it, love it, want so more of it…soon…Please!!!
Really loving this story! Please post again soon!
Nice turn of events and of voices. Liked the interior monologues as well. Looking forward.
Ohhhhhhhhh I like that, Belena..sounds like one of my favorite drinks, a belini ;] That dance got me all excited!! Thank you for your writing I appreciate every word!!
awww Helena dont go..Bette won’t hurt u, will u Bette?Nice one Z (*sniff* I’m just a bit..*sniff* emotional right now)..Helena’s imploring look really tugged at my heart *sigh* Hope B doesnt leave Helena hanging for too long…thanks Z, and post soon please.
Well, that’s great! I absolutely loved that, and the transition between the two characters was funny. I must say again that you write these characters so well. Great! Pleaseeee continue. :)
Helena come back. Don’t go.
Very funny …poor Alice….But whats more is how sexy these 2 were…i could feel the tension…and it was good too…lol
Hoho, could Bette be more clueless? By now, for Bette, it’s kind of more physical attraction than mental. Hope they could find some common interests or something like that soon.
I’m enjoying this story very much. Please post soon.
please do continue… bravo on ur writing!