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A TiBette Love Story: After The Massage {24}
First just off centre, then one corner, then the other, then back to the centre. Then she slightly opened her mouth, harkening Bette to part her own lips to accept Tina’s lips. Tina then lied her head back down on the pillow, her hands going to the back of Bette’s soft, long curls pulling her down slightly. Tina wet her own lips with her tongue in one motion that made Bette’s mouth go dry. She then captured Bette’s upper lip with her own full lips, slowly tugging on it before releasing it again. She was overcome with the feeling of kissing Bette. Never before had kissing been so erotic, so sweet and so fulfilling. She knew she could spend the rest of the nighttime hours just kissing those soft lips and never tire.
“May I?” Bette whispered as her finger touched the corner of Tina’s mouth. She then slowly leaned down and started to pepper Tina’s lips in much the same fashion as Tina had done to hers. Soft, only slightly moist, but all encompassing. Bette was quickly becoming completely aroused, and wondered (if not feared) what Tina was feeling; if she was feeling as she was or if she was more guarded. Bette tried not to forget for a moment that this was Tina’s first relationship with a woman, and she knew the initial power, and yes the fear, that came with those revealing feelings. She wanted to love Tina, to engulf her but she also didn’t want her to get scared off by the power of her feelings.
But there was something there – something real, something tangible that existed there in the soft light of Tina’s feminine bedroom that made Bette throw her cautionary notes to wind. She somehow instinctually knew that Tina could handle a bit more; more promises of bodily pleasures to come. And with that thought, she pulled herself further up in the bed, still resting her weight on her own arm.
She was now slightly higher than Tina, hovering above her beautiful face. She then turned her face to the side, so that her lips were now sideways of Tina’s waiting mouth. She then lowered her mouth to Tina’s and began kissing her slowly, again, closed mouthed, almost pouty. She kissed the top of her mouth, for Tina the corner, and then kissed her way down the expanse of the full mouth, finishing at the bottom, the other corner, and she felt Tina purr into her lips. The slight release of air almost tickling her own mouth. She then got lost in her own arousal and boldly, yet slowly, dragged her flattened tongue all the way up Tina’s lips. Not once, but again, and one more time after that. With each pass Tina whimpered which only fueled Bette’s desires even more.
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(50 votes, average: 3.76 out of 5)
Great story. Looking forward to more.
Steamy and erotic, if that’s what you’re going for. LOL.
Very hot…Thanks for the update.
Wow! That was hot. But also cute. I loved the whole “painting” bit. From the beginning, with Bette’s reasoning on why she has to paint Tina, to the finger painting part. So cute. And then… well, you hit us with the hotness. I tend to skim over NC-17s, there’s really only so many ways in which you can describe these things, but I’m glad I didn’t skip over a word of yours. Maybe because of the R rating :) PPS!
can i just say wow erotic and they haven’t even gotten to the “soft tissue vein” yet LOL…this truly is a slow burn…i just have this feeling that when it finally happens it will render me commentless. LOL LOL
Alrighty then.That went well. Reallyreallyreally well.
Love IT!!! Very HOT!!! Thanks PPS
Erotic and sweet.
I have, like M. Poirot, “a little idea” re: the identity of your ghostie, Luv… but I’m keeping schtum. Anyway, the chapter… That painting scene… Gosh. Loved it, loving the story. Thanks, Luv (and the ghost)! :)
So sensual, erotic, amazingly sweet and darn that is just the foreplay. What would happen to the reader when they do finally engage in a full night of passion and pleasure?
That was great, they are hot!
I think that was an incredible chapter! I love the imagery of Bette painting Tina’s face. And the kissing … I don’t even know what to say about that. :) I loved this chapter. And I’m still loving the pace. It adds so much depth. Thank you for posting!
i so love tina’s comment that made bette blush so bad…erotic, sweet, romantic…rolled into one wonderful update…now, has the third date really begun??? :)
waooooooo that was. some more please lol. they are getting there…. PPVS
this chapter made my heart flutter for the things that are to come for Bette and Tina.. Great update!!!
What can I say??? Soooo hot!!!!
That was awesome! I actually had a hot flash reading that chapter, it was so well written :) You know how much I love a slow burn, tension, teasing…and this is a perfect example of how to do it right. It’s those glow stars I tell you, real chick magnet :P Loved it.
HAWT HAWT…….those two know how to drive it home…..that painting scene was great….
I’m in the same state! My feet on the floor, head in the clouds. Umm… Clouds? I hope so will not fall the rain. :o) I would melt than because of your story. Hahaha!
omg this is such sweet torture! I love the way you describe the things so detailed. Bette should defenitly try to paint tina! With her knowledge of art, and tina’s beauty, it will become gorgeous! Thanx, i love it. Pps!
You did it again! Amazing chapter. You really know how to describe a great kiss! Thanks for being my escape from my own story-I promise I will make it right in the end!! PPS!!
I like the slowdown in pace, the energetic giddiness (and mini-heart attacks?) of previous chappies is definitely toned down here, but it’s fantastic to see them take their relationship one level up and the burner turned up two notches hotter…:p It is romantic, sensual, expressive. Wonderful, BRAVO! mz dear Luv ( and to your ghostie whoever she is). — greetings from London this time. LOS
Ok Roomie – I almost passed out as well – talk about eroticism, sensuality – oh man! That was extremely hot!…now not only can you write, you cook fabulous meals for me and now you can massage … oh man! Now how did i get so lucky to get a roomie like you. Thanks Roomie – love this story! Thank you to your “ghost” writer as well. Lovely!
WOW! This chapter was AMAZING. A chin-on-the-floor kind of chapter. Sooooo beautiful. I loved the painting part and the oral sex mimic part. So romantic, erotic and sensual. So Bette and Tina! You should be writing as a living, you are really talented. That’s why I wait a whole week to read you. I have to admit that reading it was such a pleasure that I did it twice! I guess I got much more than I whished… thank you very much. By the way, I didn’t buy any glow-in-the-dark stars yet… but I asked my mom if she knows where I can buy it. =] She doesn’t… =[ (I’m not gonna say “please post soon” this time because after a chapter like that you deserve a whole week to rest and think about another one!)