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” A View From A Tower”
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Margaret: There’s my boy!
Drew: Hey ma!
He wrapped his arms around the petite woman, lifting her into the air.
Margaret: I am so happy that you’re home! We all are.
Drew: Mom, this is Bette Porter.
Bette extended her hand but was surprised when the older woman pulled her in for a hug.
Margaret: We hug here Bette!
Bette: Yes I see that now.
Margaret: Please come in.
Bette walked through the foyer, her mouth agape. IT was all Italian marble and hand crafted. The house itself was a work of art. The beautifully framed paintings in the hallway captured Bette’s attention first.
Margaret: Drew tells me you are an artist.
Bette: Oh hardly. I love art, but I’m better at appreciating it then creating it. These paintings are amazing. The detail, the brush strokes, the color.
Drew: My sister actually painted these.
Bette’s eyes grew wide.
Bette: Really? They are incredible!
Margaret: Come inside you two. Everyone is so excited that you’re here.
Bette’s hand was captured by Margaret as she led her into the living room. It looked like a family portrait. Drew’s father sat in the leather chair at the end of the room, while Drew’s other siblings were seated across the couch.
Drew: Ok, let’s take this from the top. Everyone, this is Bette Porter. Bette, this is Michael, Blake, Monica and my father Daniel.
They all waved happily and Bette extended the same.
Bette: It’s a pleasure to meet you all.
Daniel: Come Bette, sit. Can we get you a drink?
Bette looked around. What she wanted was a martini but if no one else was drinking she had planned to pass. Michael was holding a beer,Blake had what looked like a cosmopolitan Monica had a glass of white wine and Daniel was holding what looked like scotch.
Bette: Sure, I’ll have a glass of wine. Thank you.
Monica stood and made her way to the bar at the end of the room. Bette took notice of the way she walked. She watched her wavy blonde hair sway behind her.
Bette: Thank you.
Monica turned back to Bette.
Monica: No problem.
Daniel: So Bette, Drew tells us you are an avid fan of the arts.
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Great story! Good to see you posting again.
This is incredible! WOW!
DAMN that was good! But so sad. :(
Oh, you could so keep going with this!
you kill me, no matter what you write, you hook us all in!!!!!!!!
I need to know if she tries to find her. Keep going. I know you have that scene in your head; Monica and Bette in a cafe, it’s New York, it’s raining…
Great story! And don’t forget to update your other story. We’ve been waiting for so long…
Loved it!
awesome!!! Ok, now post on the other saga that we know and love pls!!!!
that was awesome, i’m glad you showed up, i miss your story
Incredible; simply incredible. I realize that this story is for the fantasy challenge; so once you’ve won, I hope you consider continuing it.
I did a happy dance when I saw your name…that was great! Post anything soon..
Brilliant but kind of sad. Thanks for sharing
WOW! Why is life so damn complicated? You think that you found your true love and something or someone steps in and tears everything apart. Great story or post.
I am still a fan of your writing and your amazing story. I am glad your back and I hope you will continue. Please post again.
I like it…I would be interested in a follow up…
Damn this is amazing and love it!!!!!!!
This is so fucking good, I hope this is not the end, please go on with this story luv.
That was so very sad,I just wonder, If only. that was great thanks
Wow! You sure know how to pack a punch! Your stories always deliver! You have a distinctive style that is all yours – very literal, very literate and very entertaining. Thanks for taking time out to meet (and conquer) this challenge.
That was brilliant and what a great twist at the end.
i just clicked on you name from my list of fav. FF authors cause i wanted to see if you posted recently and this is what came up. I am glad i couldn’t sleep tonight cause i may have missed this post. Ty and i hope you will continue this story as well as “no good deed…” i always love your stories