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” A View From A Tower”
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Blake: Very nice. I have actually never been there but i’d like to. Maybe you could give me a tour.
Bette: It would be my pleasure. Just stop in.
Blake: Can we do lunch too?
Bette: Anything you like.
Monica: I happen to be a big fan of that museum. I go in all the time.
Bette: Really?
Monica: Yup.
Bette: And what keeps you coming back?
Monica: There is this painting, hidden all the way in the back. Something about it has always touched me and no one even knows about it.
Bette: I know exactly which one you are talking about. " View from A tower"?
Monica: Yes, that’s it!
Bette: That’s my favorite too.
Monica caught Bette’s eye and smiled shyly.
Bette: Well, if you’ll excuse me, I need to use the restroom.
Margaret: Oh sure sweetie. If you go in the double doors, make a right, down the hall, and to the left.
Bette: Thank you.
Blake: If you get lost just call. We’ll send the search party out for you.
Bette giggled as she made her way inside. Quickly she navigated the long hallway and entered the bathroom. As she closed the door she let out a huge breath. How was she pulling this off? Was she actually fooling anyone. She turned the faucet on and splashed the cold water on her face. How long could she keep this up? She closed her eyes and tried to find her balance again. The gorgeous brunette jumped when she felt two lips on her neck. She kept her eyes closed and drew a sigh of relief.
Bette: You almost got us busted with that wine. I never said I wanted Merlot.
Monica: I know what my girl likes and I plan to make sure she always has it.
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Alice: So wait, you were dating siblings?
Bette: I’m not proud of it Al!
Alice: How did it even happen?
Bette thought back in time.
Bette: Monica came into the museum. I didn’t know who she was. She was standing in the back looking at that painting I mentioned. I was standing behind her. I guess she didn’t notice, so when she turned around and saw me, she jumped. I thought she was beautiful. We stood there and talked about the painting for what seemed like an hour. I asked her to have coffee with me.
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Great story! Good to see you posting again.
This is incredible! WOW!
DAMN that was good! But so sad. :(
Oh, you could so keep going with this!
you kill me, no matter what you write, you hook us all in!!!!!!!!
I need to know if she tries to find her. Keep going. I know you have that scene in your head; Monica and Bette in a cafe, it’s New York, it’s raining…
Great story! And don’t forget to update your other story. We’ve been waiting for so long…
Loved it!
awesome!!! Ok, now post on the other saga that we know and love pls!!!!
that was awesome, i’m glad you showed up, i miss your story
Incredible; simply incredible. I realize that this story is for the fantasy challenge; so once you’ve won, I hope you consider continuing it.
I did a happy dance when I saw your name…that was great! Post anything soon..
Brilliant but kind of sad. Thanks for sharing
WOW! Why is life so damn complicated? You think that you found your true love and something or someone steps in and tears everything apart. Great story or post.
I am still a fan of your writing and your amazing story. I am glad your back and I hope you will continue. Please post again.
I like it…I would be interested in a follow up…
Damn this is amazing and love it!!!!!!!
This is so fucking good, I hope this is not the end, please go on with this story luv.
That was so very sad,I just wonder, If only. that was great thanks
Wow! You sure know how to pack a punch! Your stories always deliver! You have a distinctive style that is all yours – very literal, very literate and very entertaining. Thanks for taking time out to meet (and conquer) this challenge.
That was brilliant and what a great twist at the end.
i just clicked on you name from my list of fav. FF authors cause i wanted to see if you posted recently and this is what came up. I am glad i couldn’t sleep tonight cause i may have missed this post. Ty and i hope you will continue this story as well as “no good deed…” i always love your stories