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A Walk on the Wild Side – Chapter 10
Previously
She needed to do something to prove to Tina that she did not have a problem, either with her sexuality or her injuries, so Bette did the only thing she knew.
Tina?
Yes Bette
Would you let me see your scars?
Chapter 10
What?! Exclaimed Tina, looking down at her hands as they fidgeted nervously in her lap.
Bette moved her left hand and lifted Tinas face up gently until she was staring into her big brown eyes.
Do you trust me? Bette asked looking into her eyes for any signs
Yes of course. Tina replied. She looked intently into Bettes eyes, and saw only concern and tenderness there. You really want to see them? she questioned brokenly.
Yes Bette replied, tenderly stroking Tinas cheek
Tina looked once more into Bettes eyes for confirmation and slowly turned back round in Bettes lap until her back was facing her. She took a long deep breath and leaned forward as she slowly and nervously undid the buttons on her safari top. She was so glad she didnt have to watch Bettes face as she took in the ugly red scars that travelled from her left shoulder right down to the small of her back. At least she wouldnt have to see the revulsion she knew Bette would feel as she saw her disfigurement for the first time.
Bette held her breath as Tina slowly dropped the shirt from her shoulder blades, and let it slide gently down her back, before reaching behind her to undo her bra. After all if Bette was going to get to see the scars she may as well see them in all their glory thought Tina.
Bette gently moved her hand to slide Tinas bra strap away from her left shoulder before resting her fingertips in the 4 angry purple grooves she could see clearly. She felt Tina tremble against her, and couldnt contain her feelings any longer. God she wanted to touch her so bad. She wanted to kiss the pain and suffering away, to hold her in her arms and protect her from ever being hurt again.
Bette slowly bought her head forward until her forehead was resting on the top of Tinas shoulder her lips almost touching the point where the lions claws first punctured Tinas soft delicate skin. Gently and with no thought of the consequences Bette bought her lips onto the scars and rested them there for a moment before kissing them gently.
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(64 votes, average: 4.13 out of 5)
yay finally! lol. excellent as always…
Whew my eyes actually watered at the intensity of that. Wow. Gotta love it. Can’t wait for the next chapter!
Holy Mother of God!!!!!! That was…gulp…gorgeous; breathtaking; just plain old, f*#kin HOT!!!!
As I read this I let you take me there. So I read slowly and well it’s almost as if you consum me with your feelings as you wrote this.. It was beautiful. Just as you showed me the land, you showed me their love. Thank you for taking me there I truly enjoyed the tenderness.
Holy fucking shit TB you need to stop kidding when you say you have never written NC-17. Fucking awesome!! Where’s the beast in Tina, she hasn’t had sex in 5 years?? Shit Bette would have been taken down and strip in 15 sec’s flat. Tina needs to become 1 with her intermost lioness.When you bring the beast out there has to be finger nails in the back and marks left everywhere on the bodies. So real funny about your dog, you know they never do anything when they should, just kidding. Scar twins?? for now NO but maybe if I have the plastic surgeon do something. Since I’m not paying for any of this it’s cool with whatever. Damm your story kicks ass, So now I have to wait until Sunday! kinda pissed about that but what can I do?? So when is tina going to start howling at the moon and making midnight kills?. It would of been tight if they used some of the lion’s skin. Or maybe just werid. I loved the idea of tina taking pictures and then painting. ok now I’m just starting to run on, but your story does this to me, and is there drama coming, can’t wait to see where you going, or maybe i should just rub my scar and see if any ideas come into mind? i might post again after i read it a 2nd time which doesn’t happen that often.
amazing chapter, seriously hot. please post soon.
WOW!! That was incredible…I love this story! Cold showers all around!
tb, this was amazing for your first time!!! I’m glad Bette and Tina are feeling things on the same level. Thank you! :)
Oh My that was Great! So this is a two parter?
Megga- WOW! That was crazy intense! I love how almost all of the authors on this site say that their chapters are too long so they split them in half. . .do you think that we care if a chapter is too long? THE LONGER THE BETTER! Hahah, please keep it up. This story is so beautiful and I can’t wait to read more.
“A wimoweh, a-wimoweh a-wimoweh, a wimoweh…”
Bette Porter – good to go on any continent! She shoots, she scores! Yessssssssss!!!!
Whoa! I’m sweating here. that was f**king HOT! Thanks for not making me wait to long and thanks for……..writing this…….whew.
OMFG, that was incredible. Can’t wait for Tina to unleash her inner beast on Bette. Love it!!!!
OMG…WOW. Amazing. First the beauty of Kenya, and now the beauty of their love. WOW…
That was awesome. I just caught up with all your chapters and this is an amazing story. I have been to Zimbabwe, Zaire and Uganda and your story brought me right back to that beautiful country. Thank you.
*THUD* Oh My F*ing God TB !!!! Now That , was absof*ingly Sizzling HOT !!!!!! woooohoooo !! ;))
Another amazingly “HOT” update !!!! :D
Hey where’s the 2nd part ?? Come on now, don’t be such a Tease !!!! ;)hehe
I can’t wait to read the next post !!!
post sooooooooon… pwease pweaty pweaseee =)
Ur writing is so beautiful . I could feel the emotions , the intense love between these two . It was so tender and touching that it moved me to tears :) . I swear B&TEE are made for each other , period !!!!!! :D
Thank you for bringing out that sincerity and intensity thro your writing which goes along with their emotions :D I felt it go straight to my heart . It overwhelms me :)
I LOVE This Story !!!!!! *happy sigh*
* sends u sweet sweet kisses * ;)
Eagerly Awaiting ur Next post Mate . Hurryyyyyyyy !!!! LOL ;))
Gazillion x 100 stars to u all the wayyyyy !!!!! :D
Thanx =)
Unbelievably hot!! If Bette feels vulnerable now how is she going to feel when its Tina’s turn? Look out Bette! Thank you and more soon please. lol
TB that was beautiful and hot..now Tina hasn’t been with anyone for 5 years…oh god, the animal is going to be released from her cage….LUCKY, LUCKY Bette…..
Thank you.
K
WOW, that was so hot, sweet and sexy! Loved the emotions in this chapter. Just love this story. Can’t wait for the next one, hope it’s soon!!!!!
WOW….OMG…. this is definately HOT and also different and yes we want MORE…. it’s Sunday and were are chapters 11 & 12????? MORE SOON PLEASE!!!!!
Damn that was so fucking hot and amazing, love it. Post soon, thanks!
All I can say is, “What the fuck was that!” I was there!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!