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A Walk on the Wild Side – Chapter 10
Bette inserted first one finger into Tina, and then two before thrusting them slowly in and out. She quickly matched the rhythm that Tinas hips were making as they raised then lowered themselves, faster and faster, as Tina let out a series of moans.
Tina realised she was almost there, and unconsciously moved her right leg to rest it foot flat on the floor, knee bent, and her thigh, rubbing into Bettes centre. Tina could feel how wet Bette was against her, and as her hips rose from the floor, her thigh rubbed back and forth against Bettes by now uncomfortably sensitive *****.
They kissed feverishly, their tongues snaking in and out of each others mouth, their collective groans being swallowed up before they had chance to escape.
Bette could feel her ***** building up, higher and higher she went, until she felt that she was levitating, completely off the floor. She suddenly realised with fear that if Tina didnt come soon, she may not be able to hold off any longer. She inserted a third finger into Tina and thrusted more forcefully now, her thumb wreaking havoc on Tinas *****. She felt Tinas walls start to tighten, and as they did so she curled her fingers upwards over and over again, until she could feel Tinas body start to quiver, as her ***** overtook her, with a final shudder Tina screamed out..GGGGGGGOOOOOOOOOOOODDDDDDDDD!
Bette watched Tina as she came, her facial expressions and guttural scream the only stimulation Bette needed. She ground her centre into Tinas thigh over and over again, faster, faster, until she reached the point of coming. To her shock she kept building. Her body wasnt ready to climax yet. She felt like she had reached the outer atmosphere, and dully wondered if she would still be able to breath whilst floating at 50,000 feet. She felt her self get closer, closer, closer, oh god, is this what its like, is this what Tina is feeling? God she hoped so, and with a final widening of her eyes in shock she came with such force that she practically threw herself off Tina.
Oh godTIoh.. pleeeaaasssseeee. Teeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!
Tina felt the tremors shudder through Bette, who was now collapsed partially on top of her. Suddenly Bettes eyes shot open as she felt the first of the aftershocks hit her, oh my god, what the ***** was that? She thought.
For the first time in her eventful life she had completely given up control, and it scared her.
The aftermath of their lovemaking was making her body do things it had never done before, each aftershock leaving her more exposed, more vulnerable.
She looked up to find Tinas face just inches from her own, her eyes bright with fulfilment. Tina kissed Bettes forehead tenderly, just as another aftershock hit.
Hold me Bette begged, hold me tight
Tina lovingly wrapped her arms around the emotionally exhausted Brunette and held her, rocking her gently.
Tina allowed her warm breath to caress Bettes ear, before whispering teasingly So my name is T now huh?
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(64 votes, average: 4.13 out of 5)
yay finally! lol. excellent as always…
Whew my eyes actually watered at the intensity of that. Wow. Gotta love it. Can’t wait for the next chapter!
Holy Mother of God!!!!!! That was…gulp…gorgeous; breathtaking; just plain old, f*#kin HOT!!!!
As I read this I let you take me there. So I read slowly and well it’s almost as if you consum me with your feelings as you wrote this.. It was beautiful. Just as you showed me the land, you showed me their love. Thank you for taking me there I truly enjoyed the tenderness.
Holy fucking shit TB you need to stop kidding when you say you have never written NC-17. Fucking awesome!! Where’s the beast in Tina, she hasn’t had sex in 5 years?? Shit Bette would have been taken down and strip in 15 sec’s flat. Tina needs to become 1 with her intermost lioness.When you bring the beast out there has to be finger nails in the back and marks left everywhere on the bodies. So real funny about your dog, you know they never do anything when they should, just kidding. Scar twins?? for now NO but maybe if I have the plastic surgeon do something. Since I’m not paying for any of this it’s cool with whatever. Damm your story kicks ass, So now I have to wait until Sunday! kinda pissed about that but what can I do?? So when is tina going to start howling at the moon and making midnight kills?. It would of been tight if they used some of the lion’s skin. Or maybe just werid. I loved the idea of tina taking pictures and then painting. ok now I’m just starting to run on, but your story does this to me, and is there drama coming, can’t wait to see where you going, or maybe i should just rub my scar and see if any ideas come into mind? i might post again after i read it a 2nd time which doesn’t happen that often.
amazing chapter, seriously hot. please post soon.
WOW!! That was incredible…I love this story! Cold showers all around!
tb, this was amazing for your first time!!! I’m glad Bette and Tina are feeling things on the same level. Thank you! :)
Oh My that was Great! So this is a two parter?
Megga- WOW! That was crazy intense! I love how almost all of the authors on this site say that their chapters are too long so they split them in half. . .do you think that we care if a chapter is too long? THE LONGER THE BETTER! Hahah, please keep it up. This story is so beautiful and I can’t wait to read more.
“A wimoweh, a-wimoweh a-wimoweh, a wimoweh…”
Bette Porter – good to go on any continent! She shoots, she scores! Yessssssssss!!!!
Whoa! I’m sweating here. that was f**king HOT! Thanks for not making me wait to long and thanks for……..writing this…….whew.
OMFG, that was incredible. Can’t wait for Tina to unleash her inner beast on Bette. Love it!!!!
OMG…WOW. Amazing. First the beauty of Kenya, and now the beauty of their love. WOW…
That was awesome. I just caught up with all your chapters and this is an amazing story. I have been to Zimbabwe, Zaire and Uganda and your story brought me right back to that beautiful country. Thank you.
*THUD* Oh My F*ing God TB !!!! Now That , was absof*ingly Sizzling HOT !!!!!! woooohoooo !! ;))
Another amazingly “HOT” update !!!! :D
Hey where’s the 2nd part ?? Come on now, don’t be such a Tease !!!! ;)hehe
I can’t wait to read the next post !!!
post sooooooooon… pwease pweaty pweaseee =)
Ur writing is so beautiful . I could feel the emotions , the intense love between these two . It was so tender and touching that it moved me to tears :) . I swear B&TEE are made for each other , period !!!!!! :D
Thank you for bringing out that sincerity and intensity thro your writing which goes along with their emotions :D I felt it go straight to my heart . It overwhelms me :)
I LOVE This Story !!!!!! *happy sigh*
* sends u sweet sweet kisses * ;)
Eagerly Awaiting ur Next post Mate . Hurryyyyyyyy !!!! LOL ;))
Gazillion x 100 stars to u all the wayyyyy !!!!! :D
Thanx =)
Unbelievably hot!! If Bette feels vulnerable now how is she going to feel when its Tina’s turn? Look out Bette! Thank you and more soon please. lol
TB that was beautiful and hot..now Tina hasn’t been with anyone for 5 years…oh god, the animal is going to be released from her cage….LUCKY, LUCKY Bette…..
Thank you.
K
WOW, that was so hot, sweet and sexy! Loved the emotions in this chapter. Just love this story. Can’t wait for the next one, hope it’s soon!!!!!
WOW….OMG…. this is definately HOT and also different and yes we want MORE…. it’s Sunday and were are chapters 11 & 12????? MORE SOON PLEASE!!!!!
Damn that was so fucking hot and amazing, love it. Post soon, thanks!
All I can say is, “What the fuck was that!” I was there!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!