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A Walk on the Wild Side – Chapter 17
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Bette paused her exploration, expecting a reply. Waiting for Tina to take her cue and release the clasp capturing her long shiny hair.
She remembered her delight when Tina had confessed that the thought of Bette’s long flowing locks, brushing against her body, like a fine sable brush across a canvas, was the biggest turn on she had ever experienced. Since that conversation, It had been like an unspoken request between them, Bette knowing that on the occasions that Tina had released her hair, gently smoothing it down to it’s full length, that amazing love making was sure to follow.
“Baby?” Bette asked, her mouth slowly tantalisingly travelling up Tina’s body, coming to rest at the base of her neck. She nuzzled gently, tasting Tina’s scent on her lips. “Are you really, really, sure there is nothing I can do to make you change your mind?” she teased, her hand running up the full length of tuna’s arm, reaching her shoulder, before bestowing a feather like touch across Tina’s collar bone, making Tina shiver with desire.
“No baby,” Tina replied thickly, need flowing through to every part of her body. “But there is something you can give me to remember you by on those dark lonely nights while we are apart!” She agreed enthusiastically, pulling Bette’s face away from her body so that she could look at her.
“But I have to survive a whole month without you T! Bette said. “How can it take a whole month for you to be ready to join me?” Bette grabbed Tina’s hand and playfully started counting with her fingers, “4 whole weeks” “28 days” “672 long lonely hours”
Tina pulled her hand away from Bette’s and rested her finger against her lips hushing her.
“I have to sort things out here before I join you” she explained patiently. “There are people I have to say goodbye to Bette, and then there is the art work. Do you really expect me to trust anyone else to arrange the packing and shipment while I am sunning myself on a beach somewhere in LA?!” Tina removed her hand from Bette’s face, deliberately grazing her bottom lip as she reluctantly dragged her finger away.
Tina slowly let her eyes travel the length of Bette’s body, hungrily taking in the sight before her. As her gaze roamed the toned body she craved, she licked her lips as her eyes reached Bette’s pert *****, straining to be released from the confines of her khaki shirt, finally rested her eyes at the full soft lips that had bought her more pleasure than she ever thought imaginable.
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Just caught up. WOnderful chapters. Love your story. Can’t wait for more.
Hey there mate !!!! :D
I absolutely LOVE ur story !!!!!! :D God !! I can’t ever seem to get enough of it . U r a Briliant writer and ur story is totally Amazing :) I am ur Biggest fan !! keep up the gr8 work and pls post soooooooooon . Cuz Like I told u I can’t sit quietly in my seat . I have been twisting and turning waiting impatiently for ur next post and neither can I sleep :) ur story’s on my mind :D so hurry plsssss pretty plssss with sugar on top :D lol.
I couldn’t comment earlier about the other chapters so I am gonna do it now . I hope its okay :D
Wow !! the Nc-17s u wrote mmm they were Sizziling Hot !!! and u wrote for the first time u say , I can’t beleive it . They definitely kick assssssssss !!!! LoL AbsofuckingBrilliant !!!! :D
I am glad that Tina could bring out her passion for her art again from within her heart where she had kept it locked for so long . and I am really glad that Bette was there with her thro all of it and helped her thro . It was so touching when they developed the pictures together .
The part where Bette was locked up in the dark room developing pics was so funny LOL , her fumbling , her clumsiness , her muttering curse words LOL , u brought out her stubbornness and the ‘I can do it no matter what ‘ attitude perfectly & brilliantly :D Totally loved it mate !!
Gosh !! when Bette asked Tina to come along with her to LA I did a little happy dance , threw up my hands in air and cried out loud YESSSSSSSSSSS !!! U go Bette :D
and This chapter too was amazing just the earlier ones . I loved how Bette is all childlike and innocent and vulnerable with Tina .
God a whole month without Tee !!!!! Bette u need to wipe off the CAC’s schedule like right now !!! and make it available for Tee’s art . U wouldn’t want Tina to be staying away from u for that long now would u huh ?? Yea I thought so too :D hehehe hurrryyyyy make those calls right this minute !!
Have I told u i love ur story yet ummm ?? LOL I LOVE IT LOVE IT !!!!! :D
Now where’s ur next post ??? Have u posted it yet ???? pls post sooooooon okay :) Don’t make me wait for too long :)
Gazillion stars to u all the wayyyyy Mate !!!!!! :D
Thanx for writing this wonderful story . Keep up the good work :D
Talk to u soon :D
* sends lots of warm hugs and sweet kisses ur way * :D
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humm, well I haven’t driven a land rover, but very found of land cruisers, love to go 4x4ing, over rocks rivers and that good shit. Poor bette they don’t have any of that shit in LA, although I think the land rover dealership has this course where you can take the truck over it in your test drive. And a month damm is that going to be a sex free month or should they do an open don’t ask relationship??
Well understand the way your going with this cause if tina was to go with bette right away just proves my point that she is pussy whiped.
OMG ok I can’t help but feel like this chapter described their soon to be lives together. Love, trust, adventure, romance, fear anger and love…. Holy Cow T… That was AWESOME!!!!!
Can´t tell you how much I really enjoy your story and I simply can´t wait to see what happens when T & B enter the real world instead of spending time solely in their own bubble of joy. I´m allready starting to imagine the turmoil and the evnts that I believe you´ll present to us in the upcmoing cahpters. Hopefully everything will be okay in the end.
I loved the playful, yet pleading banter between Bette and Tina. Tina makes sense, Bette just wants to get her way. OK, I guess she did when Tina took out her hair clip.
Your description of Bette driving over the rocks was so perfect that I actually found myself tilting my head to the side as I read your description of how that Rover was on its side. Tina is a calming factor for Bette. Let’s hope that continues once she comes to LA and that it’s reciprocated by Bette as well.
nice!!!!!!!! bette misses her car funny!!!!
Nice chapter, let see what’s next.
nice chapter. You love to make us wait..don’t you?
I am so addicted to this story. You still have my attention.
oh yeah, having experienced a manual right hand driven car before shifting to the automatic left hand driven, i can empathise with bette! great update!
*Crosses fingers that the chapters will keep flowing from your fingertips*
If they can help each other down a mountain, they can certainly help each other through anything, let alone a month apart!! ;) Thanks, tbsaver!
what a wonderful treat for my saturday morning. some twists and turns coming. ok, ill be brave. ive named all my cars also. some of the work i have done has entailed some diffucult moments and my autos have never failed to protect. im looking forward to you describing this new vista before b/t. but a whole month apart, whew. bette better start making plans for the art center. thanks this was great. cant wait for the next one.