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A Walk on the Wild Side – Chapter 17
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She slowly moved her hand to the nape of Bette’s neck, releasing her hair clip, and pulling Bette toward her in one smooth movement.
“Now,” she continued, Might I suggest a little less talking and a little more loving might be in order her Porter!” she said, slowly unbuttoning the buttons of Bette’s top as she leaned in to taste those sweet lips on her own.
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Tina looked again at the knuckles, clenched so tightly around the steering wheel that they were white with strain. “Are you sure you want to do this?” she asked concerned.
Bette turned her head to face Tina, a hint of fear evident on her face. “Can’t we just go round the mountains T?”
No baby, we don’t have time for that. Besides, we are not going over them, we are just travelling through them! Look I know that drop looks a little intimidating” Tina said, looking at the narrow trail ahead of them that drops off suddenly into nothing. “But it’s only a 30 foot drop, and this section is only metres long. I have travelled this road hundreds of times, and Beau Brummy here has never let me down yet” Tina said patting her trusty Land Rover on the dashboard lovingly.”
“Road?” Bette said incredulously, “ROAD?!” What ever this is, Tina a road it certainly isn’t. A road is flat, it has tarmac and markings to show you where to go!” Bette looked once more at the rugged terrain in front of them. “This isn’t a road T, it’s more like a demolition site!” She looked at the jagged rocks before them rising out of the ground, some of them protruding as much as a foot in the air.
“Yes, and we are in the great outdoors, where we are free to travel what ever path we choose, without the restrictions of someone telling us where we can and can’t go!” Tina responded patiently. “would you prefer me to drive?” She asked.
Bette straightened her hunched up shoulders, and relaxed her hands slightly. “No, if you tell me it’s safe, then I trust you.” The brunette said with a little more conviction than she felt.
Bette flicked the 4 wheel drive switch into place and released the handbrake. She put the gear lever into 1st gear, and slowly lifted her left foot off the clutch, feeling the car lurch forward. She reached out her right hand to change into 2nd gear, only to come into contact with the door handle of the vehicle, as once again her brain forgot that she was sat on the “wrong” side of the vehicle.
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Just caught up. WOnderful chapters. Love your story. Can’t wait for more.
Hey there mate !!!! :D
I absolutely LOVE ur story !!!!!! :D God !! I can’t ever seem to get enough of it . U r a Briliant writer and ur story is totally Amazing :) I am ur Biggest fan !! keep up the gr8 work and pls post soooooooooon . Cuz Like I told u I can’t sit quietly in my seat . I have been twisting and turning waiting impatiently for ur next post and neither can I sleep :) ur story’s on my mind :D so hurry plsssss pretty plssss with sugar on top :D lol.
I couldn’t comment earlier about the other chapters so I am gonna do it now . I hope its okay :D
Wow !! the Nc-17s u wrote mmm they were Sizziling Hot !!! and u wrote for the first time u say , I can’t beleive it . They definitely kick assssssssss !!!! LoL AbsofuckingBrilliant !!!! :D
I am glad that Tina could bring out her passion for her art again from within her heart where she had kept it locked for so long . and I am really glad that Bette was there with her thro all of it and helped her thro . It was so touching when they developed the pictures together .
The part where Bette was locked up in the dark room developing pics was so funny LOL , her fumbling , her clumsiness , her muttering curse words LOL , u brought out her stubbornness and the ‘I can do it no matter what ‘ attitude perfectly & brilliantly :D Totally loved it mate !!
Gosh !! when Bette asked Tina to come along with her to LA I did a little happy dance , threw up my hands in air and cried out loud YESSSSSSSSSSS !!! U go Bette :D
and This chapter too was amazing just the earlier ones . I loved how Bette is all childlike and innocent and vulnerable with Tina .
God a whole month without Tee !!!!! Bette u need to wipe off the CAC’s schedule like right now !!! and make it available for Tee’s art . U wouldn’t want Tina to be staying away from u for that long now would u huh ?? Yea I thought so too :D hehehe hurrryyyyy make those calls right this minute !!
Have I told u i love ur story yet ummm ?? LOL I LOVE IT LOVE IT !!!!! :D
Now where’s ur next post ??? Have u posted it yet ???? pls post sooooooon okay :) Don’t make me wait for too long :)
Gazillion stars to u all the wayyyyy Mate !!!!!! :D
Thanx for writing this wonderful story . Keep up the good work :D
Talk to u soon :D
* sends lots of warm hugs and sweet kisses ur way * :D
beau brummy is a mascot??
humm, well I haven’t driven a land rover, but very found of land cruisers, love to go 4x4ing, over rocks rivers and that good shit. Poor bette they don’t have any of that shit in LA, although I think the land rover dealership has this course where you can take the truck over it in your test drive. And a month damm is that going to be a sex free month or should they do an open don’t ask relationship??
Well understand the way your going with this cause if tina was to go with bette right away just proves my point that she is pussy whiped.
OMG ok I can’t help but feel like this chapter described their soon to be lives together. Love, trust, adventure, romance, fear anger and love…. Holy Cow T… That was AWESOME!!!!!
Can´t tell you how much I really enjoy your story and I simply can´t wait to see what happens when T & B enter the real world instead of spending time solely in their own bubble of joy. I´m allready starting to imagine the turmoil and the evnts that I believe you´ll present to us in the upcmoing cahpters. Hopefully everything will be okay in the end.
I loved the playful, yet pleading banter between Bette and Tina. Tina makes sense, Bette just wants to get her way. OK, I guess she did when Tina took out her hair clip.
Your description of Bette driving over the rocks was so perfect that I actually found myself tilting my head to the side as I read your description of how that Rover was on its side. Tina is a calming factor for Bette. Let’s hope that continues once she comes to LA and that it’s reciprocated by Bette as well.
nice!!!!!!!! bette misses her car funny!!!!
Nice chapter, let see what’s next.
nice chapter. You love to make us wait..don’t you?
I am so addicted to this story. You still have my attention.
oh yeah, having experienced a manual right hand driven car before shifting to the automatic left hand driven, i can empathise with bette! great update!
*Crosses fingers that the chapters will keep flowing from your fingertips*
If they can help each other down a mountain, they can certainly help each other through anything, let alone a month apart!! ;) Thanks, tbsaver!
what a wonderful treat for my saturday morning. some twists and turns coming. ok, ill be brave. ive named all my cars also. some of the work i have done has entailed some diffucult moments and my autos have never failed to protect. im looking forward to you describing this new vista before b/t. but a whole month apart, whew. bette better start making plans for the art center. thanks this was great. cant wait for the next one.