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A Walk on the Wild Side – Chapter 27
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“Yeah, Isn’t that what I said?” Shane said, her eyes glinting with mischief
“Well it’s been fun Porter” Alice said rising from her seat quickly and
grabbing Dana’s hand “But we really must be off.you know, things to
do, People to see”
“Nonsense” Bette said smiling as she laid a hand firmly on each of
their shoulders, pushing them forcibly back into their seats.
Bette leaned down until her face was level with them. “After all we
have so much to catch up on, and I know that you always want to hear
everything don’t you Alice?” Bette whispered menacingly “and Dana, I
can’t possibly let you go training right after that heavy breakfast”
She continued “You will end up hurting yourself, and it would be such a
shame if I was the cause of any injury you might receive!”
Dana’s eyes widened as she looked at Alice for support, but Alice was
far too busy watching Bette’s feet which were now only inches away from
the offending phone on the floor.
Bette watched Alice’s gaze, and bent down to pick the phone up off the
floor. “I wondered where that had got to!” she said to no-one in
particular. “I must have used it out here earlier this morning, and
forgot to put it back”
“Yeah, you would forget your head if it was loose” Alice stated feeling slightly more confident now.
“And that wouldn’t do would it Alice?” Bette asked, “Do you think it would hurt?” Bette asked as she stared at Alice
“What?” Alice replied confused
“Losing your head Alice” Bette replied in a low tone “Do you think it
would hurt if you lost your head..or had it removed for you?” She
asked, moving her hand across her neck in a slicing motion.
Alice gulped as she looked up at her friend leaning over her, Bette was
smiling, a cold calculated smile, as her dark eyes burned into Alice.
Alice needed to distract attention as she desperately thought of
something to say, so she bent and lifted up her bag, looking for her
lipstick to reapply. Her shaking fingers lifted her lipstick up
to her lips as she felt Bette’s hand grip her wrist.
“Really Alice, do you need to re-apply?” she asked as she took the
lipstick from Alices clammy hand. “I thought you always used the
waterproof variety that never comes off?” She asked as she put her hand
under Alice’s chin to lift her face upwards.
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I adore you T.
And it’s about time you posted this chapter!! As you well know, I have been waiting along with everyone else to read what Bette was going to do to Alice…and once again, you have shown us just how sharp your sense of humor is…and that you are a trouble maker as well…bringing Helena into this perfectly lovely story!!! Thanks!
IM GLAD YOURE BACK I TO LOVE THIS STORY
IVE MISSED IT BADLY TOO.YOURE SOOOO BAD TO BRING HELL INTO THIS!LOL PLEASE POST SOON. ADORE THIS STORY
Nice to see your story here again.I liked what you had Bette do to Alice.What is a B and T story without Helena.
well pick me up off the floor and slap me silly. can it be the elusive T. gawd, its ok to email friends every once in a while *wink* so very happy for you and sea. hope your hols was very enjoyable on lots of levels.
enjoyed the chappy. but i did just spew my water at my monitor with the mention of hellno. the places garbage pops up. hahahaha. hopefully your back and your other story also. thanks. and yes of course, your forgiven. i dont think any girl here would begrudge you happiness. *smile*
hurrah you’re back – love this story and your sense of humour in your writing is wonderful. Good to see helenas around to stir things a little. Glad you had a good time meeting Sea and for that reason its totally worht the wait between chapters.
i’m happy for you guys and thanks for posting again…i hope things will work for you and we’ll continue to read this wonderful story…bringing helena in, what a shame, i mean drama, i hope she’s just a friend and won’t cause any problems for B&T…great update, bette was great with alice…glad you are back
tb,
I have missed you so much ( obviously not as much as seahurst — hope that goes well ). You made an old woman ( 41 yesterday ) very happy when i checked the stories before bed time.
You are SO back and right on form. Bette in fine form dealing with Alice.
And as for bring Hell-no into it — hasn’t Tina suffered enough from cats with sharp claws ??
i love this story so much — welcome back
Glad your back really funny with alice please post again soon!!!!
Good to see you back Tb. This chapter is so funny, like what Bette did to Alice and that will give her a lesson and next time she not do it again. Ok now Helena coming in the story and let see what’s next, thanks!
love is in the air
and what better place for it to happen then on the l word love site
so many find that second best person and miss out on so much in life
it’s nice to know some find the real deal
sorry i’m ramblin
i’m more of a silent reader then a speaker
nice that as in your stories love always come thru
buggs666
FINALLY YOU’RE BACK! Thanks for posting, I look forward to the next chapter! Mile high club with Bitchbody. . .hmmmm. . .rutro.
Glad your back…Missed this story and hope you can post more often…. Helena! Why Why…My tibette heart is in for it now. Nothing good can come from Helena but I can’t wait to see where you take this. Thanks a bunch tb
Glad to have you back, and glad things are going well with Seahurst.
Cute payback to Alice…photographic blackmail is always useful. Hmm…Helena, eh? This should be interesting.
It is good to have you back but, the better news is your budding relationship with Sea. I sincerely hope that this is the beginning of a very long relationship, in whatever form you both deem is best. Best wishes for you both.
Welcome back!! Best of luck to you and Seahurst. Instead of writing a story together create a long lasting love.
Back from Holidays and I find out that my favorite story is there !! What a surprise to find Helena there but I think it is a good idea…maybe her appearance is a bit soon ’cause you could give B&T some time alone before the hard times appear…But !! I also like the vengeance given by Bette, clean and deserved !!! Post soon !!! Merci !!
Nice to see you back TB and best of luck to you and Seahurst, hope everything works out for you guys.LMAO at coco the clown very nice indeed, payback is a bitch…lol..like how Helena is now in your story, wasn’t expecting that..should always expect the unexpected as they say…looking forward to more. Thank you.
I CR00 would like to announce I’m done with my strike!!!!!I feel that the author of this wonderful story has gotten my point. Therefore there is no need to continue.Ok now that’s out of the way lets get on with some commentsSo all I have to do is go on vacation and I will find the love of my life???Fuck let me start planning this right now!!!But truly am so very happy and I expect to be getting updates no matter what.Oh and am I the only one who thinks you guys should be working on that story!! ya that’s right get to work.Now since Alice is ready why doesn’t Bette hire her out to do the neighborhood birthday parties?? shit Alice gets made fun of and still gets paid, just a thought.
ok for the next topic of discussion:CAN WE SAY FF AWARD??hmm think I should start a campaign??
I have really been missing this story and I was’t dissapointed with the update – loved how Bette took care of Alice :o)) But I’m not so crazy about Helena and hopefully Tina feels the same way as I do….
I’m happy for you guys and totally understands the lack of writing. Thanks again for posting.
TBSaver,
As a recent convert to your marvellous story, I must take this moment to mention how much I have enjoyed it.
I admire this very personal twist on the B&T relationship.
Good to see that Bette still has the measure of Alice while Shane and Dana look on.
As for Helena, I do feel somewhat trepedious as to where this juicy morsel will lead.
Please post whenever you can as I will be waiting and watching.
On a personal note, Woo Who for you and Seahurst. Taking chances is what life is all about so go girl, go.
A Loyal Fan.
welcome back! methinx i mite hv been a silent reader b4 (cant rememba, was so long ago…grr.) but i jst wana say… ROTFLMAO!!!
ahh. payback is a bitch and her name is bette porter :P (sorri amanda, i no i thiefed it frm u :D)
am happy for you two…*do a happy dance* hee..~ and am glad u are back with this chappy,tbsaver.
OK..I am doing my happy dance. Mostly for you and Sea!! God..so exciting! I have missed this story so much. Thank you for coming back to us even if you bring the bitch into the story. OH..and Alice and Bette that was some funny shit! Best wishes to you and Sea.
Glad you are back Take care of Seahaurt,she is one of my favorite writer. Where did ,or wht did Tina ask Helene for a favor? Bette could have done that. Mile hi club with Helene NO No No. only for Bette. take care Thanks
FINALLY a new chapter… I thought there was a rumor that 2 chapers were ready before holiday….hmh?????
I think Alice as a clown and then in the pool is almost as funny as …. I’m blind from the beginning of this WONDERFUL story … and what’s this mess with Helena????
Post when you can … oh by the way I think this chapter one was posted at a reasonable hour on your side of the pond!!
Hope your new journey turns into everything you and Sea want it to be!!!
I’m happy for you and Seahurst. If she’s anything like her writing, then you two have found something deep and meaningful. Enjoy each other!
I’m elated that you’re back! But deflated that you brought Helena with you. Couldn’t you have left her for a rhino to hit or something?
I’d love to know how Helena and Tina know each other…but ofcourse all these questions and future chappies do not take priority over your q-time with Sea. So if time permits, drop us a line if not, live your life! It’s much more fun when you live your own rather than create someone else’s, right?!
A hardy welcome back … you know, i was wondering . a Lear Jet with leather seats – how did Tina end up in this thing – and there was the answer … Helena. Very funny. I hope the collective “we” do not have to wait so long for your next post. Good luck with writing and better luck with love.
Bette’s revenge on Alice was just too funny!