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A Walk on the Wild Side – Chapter 27
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“errwwellI have eaten” Alice stated her nerves now reaching a fever
pitch as she could feel the beads of sweat form on her forehead
“Let me do that for you” Bette replied pushing the tip against Alice’s
bottom lip. “You know” Bette stated “I have always thought that
you needed to be more generous with your application” She said “You
could make your lips look so much fuller if you would only go just over
your lip line”, and with that Bette swirled Alice’s lipstick carefully
around her mouth, applying the perfect amount for Alice’s lips.
Alice breathed a sigh of relief as Bette leant back to survey her
handiwork. She relaxed her shoulders slightly as the danger was
over.
Bette looked at Alice’s lips long and hard, her head tilted to the side
as if deep in thought. “you know” she said, “we could probably
use a little more just here, she stated, running the lipstick over
Alice’s upper chin right up to her nose, and around her chin.
“Now that’s so much better!” She said a satisfied grin on her
face. Bette reached out and took Alice’s bag from her. “You
know while we are here, why don’t I just give you a full makeover?” She
asked the by now wide eyed Alice.
Bette quickly found Alice’s small makeup bag and emptied the contents
onto the table. “Now let me see” she said rubbing her chin.
“eye makeup, hmmm.well you could do with a little more I suppose. Yes,
more is goodIt will bring out the colour of your eyes more!” Bette
opened up the small eye shadow box that held three shades of brown,
noting that the lightest shade was almost gone, and the darkest
chocolate brown shade was hardly used. She rubbed her finger
generously into the dark powder, and started long strokes along Alice’s
eye’s and toward her hairline.
10 minutes later Bette stepped back to admire her handiwork, she nodded
a satisfied grin on her face, as she studies Alice’s face
intently. She finally nodded her head in satisfaction like an
artist looking at their finished work of art for the first time.
“Perfect!” she said triumphantly, picking her cell phone up from the
table. She took a few steps back lifting up her arms and placing
her thumbs and forefingers together creating a square for her to look
through. She dramatically changed the pitch and angle of the
square until she was satisfied that she had the light and angle she
needed, and quickly took a picture of Alice’s face with her phone.
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I adore you T.
And it’s about time you posted this chapter!! As you well know, I have been waiting along with everyone else to read what Bette was going to do to Alice…and once again, you have shown us just how sharp your sense of humor is…and that you are a trouble maker as well…bringing Helena into this perfectly lovely story!!! Thanks!
IM GLAD YOURE BACK I TO LOVE THIS STORY
IVE MISSED IT BADLY TOO.YOURE SOOOO BAD TO BRING HELL INTO THIS!LOL PLEASE POST SOON. ADORE THIS STORY
Nice to see your story here again.I liked what you had Bette do to Alice.What is a B and T story without Helena.
well pick me up off the floor and slap me silly. can it be the elusive T. gawd, its ok to email friends every once in a while *wink* so very happy for you and sea. hope your hols was very enjoyable on lots of levels.
enjoyed the chappy. but i did just spew my water at my monitor with the mention of hellno. the places garbage pops up. hahahaha. hopefully your back and your other story also. thanks. and yes of course, your forgiven. i dont think any girl here would begrudge you happiness. *smile*
hurrah you’re back – love this story and your sense of humour in your writing is wonderful. Good to see helenas around to stir things a little. Glad you had a good time meeting Sea and for that reason its totally worht the wait between chapters.
i’m happy for you guys and thanks for posting again…i hope things will work for you and we’ll continue to read this wonderful story…bringing helena in, what a shame, i mean drama, i hope she’s just a friend and won’t cause any problems for B&T…great update, bette was great with alice…glad you are back
tb,
I have missed you so much ( obviously not as much as seahurst — hope that goes well ). You made an old woman ( 41 yesterday ) very happy when i checked the stories before bed time.
You are SO back and right on form. Bette in fine form dealing with Alice.
And as for bring Hell-no into it — hasn’t Tina suffered enough from cats with sharp claws ??
i love this story so much — welcome back
Glad your back really funny with alice please post again soon!!!!
Good to see you back Tb. This chapter is so funny, like what Bette did to Alice and that will give her a lesson and next time she not do it again. Ok now Helena coming in the story and let see what’s next, thanks!
love is in the air
and what better place for it to happen then on the l word love site
so many find that second best person and miss out on so much in life
it’s nice to know some find the real deal
sorry i’m ramblin
i’m more of a silent reader then a speaker
nice that as in your stories love always come thru
buggs666
FINALLY YOU’RE BACK! Thanks for posting, I look forward to the next chapter! Mile high club with Bitchbody. . .hmmmm. . .rutro.
Glad your back…Missed this story and hope you can post more often…. Helena! Why Why…My tibette heart is in for it now. Nothing good can come from Helena but I can’t wait to see where you take this. Thanks a bunch tb
Glad to have you back, and glad things are going well with Seahurst.
Cute payback to Alice…photographic blackmail is always useful. Hmm…Helena, eh? This should be interesting.
It is good to have you back but, the better news is your budding relationship with Sea. I sincerely hope that this is the beginning of a very long relationship, in whatever form you both deem is best. Best wishes for you both.
Welcome back!! Best of luck to you and Seahurst. Instead of writing a story together create a long lasting love.
Back from Holidays and I find out that my favorite story is there !! What a surprise to find Helena there but I think it is a good idea…maybe her appearance is a bit soon ’cause you could give B&T some time alone before the hard times appear…But !! I also like the vengeance given by Bette, clean and deserved !!! Post soon !!! Merci !!
Nice to see you back TB and best of luck to you and Seahurst, hope everything works out for you guys.LMAO at coco the clown very nice indeed, payback is a bitch…lol..like how Helena is now in your story, wasn’t expecting that..should always expect the unexpected as they say…looking forward to more. Thank you.
I CR00 would like to announce I’m done with my strike!!!!!I feel that the author of this wonderful story has gotten my point. Therefore there is no need to continue.Ok now that’s out of the way lets get on with some commentsSo all I have to do is go on vacation and I will find the love of my life???Fuck let me start planning this right now!!!But truly am so very happy and I expect to be getting updates no matter what.Oh and am I the only one who thinks you guys should be working on that story!! ya that’s right get to work.Now since Alice is ready why doesn’t Bette hire her out to do the neighborhood birthday parties?? shit Alice gets made fun of and still gets paid, just a thought.
ok for the next topic of discussion:CAN WE SAY FF AWARD??hmm think I should start a campaign??
I have really been missing this story and I was’t dissapointed with the update – loved how Bette took care of Alice :o)) But I’m not so crazy about Helena and hopefully Tina feels the same way as I do….
I’m happy for you guys and totally understands the lack of writing. Thanks again for posting.
TBSaver,
As a recent convert to your marvellous story, I must take this moment to mention how much I have enjoyed it.
I admire this very personal twist on the B&T relationship.
Good to see that Bette still has the measure of Alice while Shane and Dana look on.
As for Helena, I do feel somewhat trepedious as to where this juicy morsel will lead.
Please post whenever you can as I will be waiting and watching.
On a personal note, Woo Who for you and Seahurst. Taking chances is what life is all about so go girl, go.
A Loyal Fan.
welcome back! methinx i mite hv been a silent reader b4 (cant rememba, was so long ago…grr.) but i jst wana say… ROTFLMAO!!!
ahh. payback is a bitch and her name is bette porter :P (sorri amanda, i no i thiefed it frm u :D)
am happy for you two…*do a happy dance* hee..~ and am glad u are back with this chappy,tbsaver.
OK..I am doing my happy dance. Mostly for you and Sea!! God..so exciting! I have missed this story so much. Thank you for coming back to us even if you bring the bitch into the story. OH..and Alice and Bette that was some funny shit! Best wishes to you and Sea.
Glad you are back Take care of Seahaurt,she is one of my favorite writer. Where did ,or wht did Tina ask Helene for a favor? Bette could have done that. Mile hi club with Helene NO No No. only for Bette. take care Thanks
FINALLY a new chapter… I thought there was a rumor that 2 chapers were ready before holiday….hmh?????
I think Alice as a clown and then in the pool is almost as funny as …. I’m blind from the beginning of this WONDERFUL story … and what’s this mess with Helena????
Post when you can … oh by the way I think this chapter one was posted at a reasonable hour on your side of the pond!!
Hope your new journey turns into everything you and Sea want it to be!!!
I’m happy for you and Seahurst. If she’s anything like her writing, then you two have found something deep and meaningful. Enjoy each other!
I’m elated that you’re back! But deflated that you brought Helena with you. Couldn’t you have left her for a rhino to hit or something?
I’d love to know how Helena and Tina know each other…but ofcourse all these questions and future chappies do not take priority over your q-time with Sea. So if time permits, drop us a line if not, live your life! It’s much more fun when you live your own rather than create someone else’s, right?!
A hardy welcome back … you know, i was wondering . a Lear Jet with leather seats – how did Tina end up in this thing – and there was the answer … Helena. Very funny. I hope the collective “we” do not have to wait so long for your next post. Good luck with writing and better luck with love.
Bette’s revenge on Alice was just too funny!