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A Walk on the Wild Side – Chapter 9
So you see my arrogance and stupidity killed not only her but her young too.
I was holed up here for 2 months, before I was considered ok to travel back to the states.
My partner lived in San Diego at the time so I went back there to recover. Ironically enough she left me a few weeks after I got home to the states. Apparently I had changed. I wasnt the same person I had been before.
No ***** Sherlock! Tina exclaimed. I had my back almost tore off by the very animal I loved more than anything, and I wind up responsible for her death! Why on earth would she think I had changed!!!
Tina sighed sadly. Apparently we had grown apart!!! But I saw the look Bette, I saw the look on her face every time she came near me. She couldnt touch me Bette, I disgusted her, and just like that, she walked away from me.
Thats terrible Bette said, her anger rising how could anyone be that inconsiderate she thoughtWait a minute, did Tina say She? Oh my god she said she Bette thought.
When the silence continued for more than a few seconds, Tina looked around hesitantly to gauge Bettes reaction, her heart broke when she saw the hurt and anger on Bettes face. Oh god, she thought, please dont let her reject me too. I dont think I could stand it.
Bette once more looked into the eyes of the woman she had come to care about more than any other in the last 3 short days.
You said she?
What? asked Tina
You said your partner was a she! Bette said.
Oh great thought Tina, not only does she know Im deformed in the worst possible way, and Im ***** too!
Is that a problem? asked Tina warily.
God no, its great, I mean its ok.um, you know thats fine, its not a problem.
Its ok Bette, its not like Im going to jump you or anything Tina exclaimed impatiently. God now shell tell me she doesnt have a problem with it, and she even knows some ***** people Tina thought disconsolately
Bette realised that Tina had completely misunderstood the reason for her nervousness. God she thinks Im worried or something thought Bette, when in fact now that she knew that Tina was ***** meant she didnt have to hide her feeling anymore.
She needed to do something to prove to Tina that she did not have a problem, either with her sexuality or her injuries, so Bette did the only thing she knew.
Tina?
Yes Bette
Would you let me see your scars?
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(54 votes, average: 3.67 out of 5)
TB wow! 2 chapters that was a treat, awesome loved them both great writing, looking forward to next post.
Thank you.
TB FUCKING AWESOME!!! So how long will I have to wait because at this moment I have a whole shit load of time sitting around doing not. All I have to say is the joy of working with animals is gone when they bite you. I have the next week to think about what i could have done to prevent it. It’s like we have some connection with this story. Rule # 1 never look a dog in the eyes. So why did I walk into the room and look directly into the germen shepherds eyes??? Now I have to go spend my day with a orthopedic surgeon. I hope my left hand is not that fucked up, I already know that my pinky and ring finger are broke, not really worried about them it’s if there is any other damage. I’m a second year vet student at UC davis so this is the last thing I wanted to happen. Oh and I was the 2nd person on that dogs list of people he had bit that day. He was there to be put down. OH and thank god for morphine. Ok about your story, I LOVE IT, I don’t think I can say anything else, Take your time, and don’t rush the story, I glad it took this long to get to the nc-17, you should make people wait for something good.
K
Wonderful as always. They just keep getting better and better. I just love this. Can’t wait for the next one. I really hope you post SOON :).
Don’t make us wait too long. God this is getting really good……please next chapter soon. I want Bette to see her scars.
tbsaver…don’t be cruel to a heart that’s true!! Please post the next chapter!!
maridadi
I saved these two chapters to read last…and just like I thought, they were wonderful…absolutely wonderful. Thank you.
This story is certainly taking me where I haven’t been before!
Thanks for posting another chapter!
Megga- OH WOW! Poor Tina, that’s so sad. I can’t imagine the amount of pain one would go through being attacked by a lion. I love this story, please post again soon!
Woo-hoo, Tina’s gay!!! Great chapter, tbsaver. I love your story, it’s definitely the only one of its kind!
So that’s why Tina stoppe exhibiting her paintings. Thanks for the 2 chaps today.
Yay chapter 10 next :-)
Great chapter and story CAN’T wait for the next one. A different spin on the girls. Please post SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!
well, all i can say is; BRING ON THE NEXT GOOD NC-17 CHAPTER!!
*wink wink* … just as long as they’re NOT being watched by some rangers or anything… LOL
anyways, i love how you pay attention to all the details to capture us in the adventure… keep it up gal!! =D
Oh Yippy Skippy. Sooo looking forward to the next installment!!!
Hey i got my wish !!! u posted the next chapter !! wooohooo !!!! * does a Happy Dance * LMAO ;)
Hey , now my deal applies to ur next post okay ? I mean now u have to post chap. 10 REAL SOOOOON like right now , and i will post my chap. by end of the week , whatdya say huh ? Deal !! ? * shake hands * :D
Totally LOVED the chapter Babe !! It was Awesome !! Now Bring on Chapter 10 *wink* *wink* ;)
I find it so amusing , that Tina has not yet caught on to the fact that Bette is Gay TOO !! LMAO :D TIna honey , u have got no Gaydar !!!! LMAO How can u miss it !! The way Bette looks at u should be the dead giveaway that She is Definitely Interested in U , Tee . ;)) But don’t worry T , u will figure it out sooooon i am sure . thehee LOL ;)) .
Have u posted the next chapter yet huh ? post soooooooon okay . Don’t make me wait too long ok cuz well I am a pretty impatient person LOL . :D
pretty sugar sweet plssssssss :))
Gazillion stars to u all the wayyyyy !!!
Thanx :D
omg NO you didn’t…Pwease. Look at me down on my knees begging you. See the pleading in my eyes. I wanna see her scars. Their first gentle kiss. Please take me there. I want…. I want more… soon please.
GOOD CHAPTER AND LET SEE THE HOT SCENE COMING. POST SOON, THANKS!