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Abyss
This is my story.
I really miss what was our relationship. It was undeniably the best relationship I had ever experienced. Our love was the greatest epic love story in all of West Hollywood. Ask anyone in the neighborhood and they would tell you about Bette & Tina, eternally connected and so sexy in love. No one would have guessed that we would end up here, in this place.
Where are we? Well, now, it’s hard to describe what our relationship has become. From the outside looking in; it probably doesn’t look that bad. However, from the inside it feels like a catastrophic failure. Now, don’t get me wrong Bette and I are still good friends. We talk, laugh, joke. We genuinely enjoy each other’s company. It’s the rest of our relationship that’s missing. We’ve lost the intimacy that we once had. I’m not simply talking sex, I m talking about the closeness, the early morning conversations, sweet whispers, tender touches. I miss it. I yearn for it. I crave those times. I have to say that being in this relationship now is the loneliest place I have ever been. I am completely and utterly depressed about the whole thing. Our disintegration as a couple consumes my thoughts, every waking moment. I am lost and I have no idea if we can save it. It may be too late and quite frankly, that hurts.
To give you some sense of how far gone we are, well there are so many things. I don’t even know where to start. We don’t sleep in the same room. I guess it’s been almost a year now that we haven’t shared a bed. I often share my bed with papers from work. Bette’s new lover is her laptop.
I can’t remember the last time I felt her touch. Sometimes we’re near each other and I just want my hand held; I want her to run her hand along my back, a hug or something, I’d like some indication that she loves me, that she wants me. In the past I never questioned Bette’s desire for me. It was apparent to anyone and everyone. Our friends, our acquaintances, our co-workers, all that crossed our path had a chance to experience the love that surrounded us, engulfed us, and emanated from our very pores; but no more.
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(18 votes, average: 4.61 out of 5)
I like this story. Good effort for your first time. You have the mechanics down (spelling, grammar,etc.) which is really a good thing. Now just expand on your story. I am waiting to read Bette’s POV.
So sad to read this…but so very well written. You drew me in immediately and kept my attention to the very last word. Thank you.
That was rough. This is definitely not boring so please continue soon!
I think this story is great! Very well written, expresses the pain and uncertainty so clearly. I really liked it and I am not a Tibetter!! Very very good first chapter.
You’ve got me hooked! post soon!
this is so incredibly sad, i hope we’ll get bette’s POV on that situation and i also hope that they will work it out because i’m a tibetter…thank you
wow… it was painful to read… and i can’t wait to read what bette thinks…
I don’t want to say anything unseemly about losing your virginity. Let’s just say, I savored the moment and the earth definitely moved for me. Hope we can do it again, soon!
Well, it was good for me. Sad, rough, but I love it. Can’t wait to see more. Hopefully there’s a happy Tibette ending in all of this…
Wow…that was very moving. So this is your first huh? Well I can’t tell it…awesome writing. Keepo posting.
send them on a holiday soon…
Wow, for your first time that was awesome. I’m sad and depressed but thats exactly how it should have made me feel. Gotta say it is probably something all of us could relate to at one time or another. I await Bette’s side of the story with great aprehension, but with hope that our two girls will resolve they’re issues.
I am hooked on this story already. Very well done for your frist time. Thank you Please keep it going. PPS