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Accommodations: Chapter 12
Carmen laughs and agrees, pulling her friend with her towards the nearest sales-man.
The Planet
Shane, Jenny and Tina sit having coffee in silence. Shane flips through a skateboard magazine, bending the corners of the pages that interest her. Jenny stares blankly at her computer screen and Tina is stirring her herbal tea with a spoon in a trance. Jenny slams her laptop shut in frustration and puts her head against the table. Shane and Tina look at her with shock. “Everything ok there, Jen?” Shane asks, as casual as possible.
“No, I can’t seem to focus on anything,” Jenny says in frustration. “I have no idea what to write about.”
“Why don’t you just take a break?” Tina suggests. “Go for a walk or something, I’m sure if you give yourself time, something will come to mind.”
Jenny sighs and rubs her head. “I feel like all the stories I’ve ever had in me, all my experiences, everything is just – gone. Like nothing matters, I’m just empty.”
“We all have those days,” Shane says, placing a supportive hand on her shoulder. Jenny looks up at her. “You just need to cut lose, do something stupid,” she laughs. “Have more experiences. Once you get started things will just pour out of you, like they always do.”
Jenny nods. “Getting started is always the hardest part…”
“Yeah,” Tina agrees. “Don’t be so hard on yourself.”
Shane’s cell starts to vibrate on the table. She picks it up. “Hello? Oh hey… What? The beach?” she laughs. “You know me and bathing suits.” Shane continues to laugh at the person on the other end as Carmen and Alice walk in and join them, greeting the others. Shane adverts her eyes. “No, I’ll pass, but thanks.” She looks at Carmen and mouths ‘hey’ to her; Carmen smiles back. “Yeah for sure, I work ‘til 3 today, so just come in before then. I’ll see ya later.” She hangs up. “Sorry guys,” she apologizes.
“Don’t worry about it,” Tina says, drinking her tea.
“Who was that?” Jenny asks.
“Kel,” Shane answers hesitantly. “She wanted me to go to the beach to hang out with her.” The rest of them laugh.
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(22 votes, average: 3.32 out of 5)
this kelli chick seems pretty kewl but she needs to stay the hell away from shane. carmen’s obviously hotter anyway right? ;)
hahaha lovedddddddddd it… shane shane shane you never learnd do you?…. well lets wait untli she tries Carmens new bed hahaha
im so with you dre2006 i mean… if i was shane the only thing i could think of iss helping carmen… bed… Carmen’s new bed… bed from heaven…. me and her in heaven!!! jajaja
What’s this about Shane checking out Kelli’s goods, hmm? I reeeally don’t think Shane and Kelli were just “best friends back in the day.” And I can’t help but wonder what would happen if the shoe was on the other foot, if Carmen was the one getting chummy with an old “best friend.” I don’t think Shane would be too happy about it. Well, I can’t wait to see what unfolds with this trio. The drama has me seriously addicted to this story! And Alice and Carmen’s friendship is super cute. :D
pretty cool water party, huh? Yeah, I really enjoy reading this story. It’s just great. Just what will happen between Kelli and Shane? I hate to admit ’cause it’s quite nasty but I agree with lindsaydada. So thanks for updating and keep going!!
ok i loved the water fight but wtf shane , you have carmen and a bed from heaven waiting forget keli omg… shane better not mess this up .
great, i love sharmen drama with shane cheating on carmen. continue