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“I love you and I want us to stay together. We both need to be with Angelica. That will be the best for us and her. But right now I need something outside our relationship. I was going to tell you.”
“Outside our relationship?” Bette frowned. “What are we supposed to be, college roommates?”
“Do you plan to fuck thissingle father? Or are you already fucking him?” Bette continued icily. “Do I watch Angie while you go out to fuck him?”
Tina looked down, not knowing how she should answer the angry woman munching the apple. She had never before thought that eating an apple could look dangerous, but it did now.
This tense silence was broken when the phone rang and Bette picked it up. It was the car detailer telling her that her sports car was ready and they were coming to deliver it to her house.
“If this is some kind of payback, it’s working.” Bette said quietly after hanging up the phone. “This hurts me far more than when you were fucking
“In fact,” Bette continued after she swallowed another bite of apple, “since I fucked up, our whole relationship has been about payback. You fucked
Tina knew by this point that she shouldn’t say anything. All questions were rhetorical.
“You brought me some stuff at the hospital which I appreciated very much and I asked if you were going to be able to come by the next day. And you saidthat you were going to the Gay Pride parade with
Bette looked away, remembering the scene. “Imagine that! My father is dying and you are acting all Tina-pissy. And I took it, meekly.”
“And now,” Bette continued quietly, “there’s no more
Bette finished the apple and gently put it in the trash. As she walked out of the kitchen she carefully turned her body so she wouldn’t brush against Tina.
She waited outside for her car and when it arrived, drove off. She had said one last thing to Tina before she left.
“Well, no more.”
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damn again…and how is this going to help us to survive s3? LOL… i think it only put me in a worse mood than i was before…i’m trying to be strong but you have to promise happy ending then
I like this story…….this is what happens when one partner fucks around!
normally – just a reader. I like how you allow bette to express her anger w/o screaming but getting her point across. I like she is not going to take any more of tina’ its your fault behavior.
i dont know how i will survive to that story and season 3..lol..you see that Tina act like she is right she have no regret and she think in her mind that Bette have to accept..i know Bette did wrong first but she was desperate, lost but Tina is doing for her want..totally free will..and what she said that they have to stay together for Angie..tststs kids do not save marriege..i hope Bette be brave and let Tina go after her..damn pancha your kiling me..:o(
Lovely, I love it. Beautifully written pancha, really. I love this Bette… I can imagine her onscreen… I can even imagine Tina being stupid enough to say “I need something outside the relationship.” Do I live in a parallel universe where “something outside the relationship” is really not ok? Cause where I’m from, it so isn’t ok. And I love how Bette slams her for the payback — cause I think that’s alot of what this is, childish, immature, nasty, unforgiving payback.Whew. Long comment, sorry. Again – kudos, what a nicely written story.
It’s true that words alone cut deeper than any sharp object. But when they are projected from a deadpan face, it’s even scarier. That scene was crafted so well that it was easy to forget Tina was in the same room. By the way, I’m not sure if you meant it, but I loved how you mentioned that Tina thought Bette eating that apple looked dangerous. It made me think of Eve eating the apple and that a little knowledge is a dangerous thing.
I agree I like this Bette, I want her to have backbone. She is a strong and determined woman, who was gutted in S2, some for the good, most for the bad. If T can’t take it…go, and leave bette for someone who can really complete her. I love B&T together, but not one a doormat, and the other a ever blaming shrew.
I love Bette’s simmering anger. So glad she’s not gonna take this crap from Tina! Tina giving so much attitude – she needs spanked but she would enjoy it too much! Great story!
if season three is going to hurt as much as your story is, i’m not watching it! lol but i’m still hooked to your story even when i don’t like where this is going, but you know i can’t stop reading this! well post as soon as you can!
Damn this is so good and we all ready to see this on S3 lol. Ok post soon please, thanks!
whoa dang… deep drama. I like it!I know bette is pissed but I hope that she will just go for a drive instead of trying to do something stupid as a payback for a payback to tina…
This is great! And I love Tibette. You have portrayed Bette’s seething anger so accurately that it’s uncanny. Tina is so cavalier by telling Bette “I want something outside our relationship. And then the killer, “I was going to tell you.” Boy, Tina-Queena has brass ones, doesn’t she? I love the tension.
omg i can picture this whole thing in my head even them taking more please
I really didn’t see Tina’s relationship with Helena as a payback on the show as much as an attempt at moving on.. But so far I’m liking this.. I think Bette will come back, she just went to calm and let out some of that anger se’s holding somewhere else..
I hope Bette won’t put up with the way tina is acting towards her. If Tina wanted to see other people she should have told Bette upfront instead of going around her back with that guy.
S-3 I fear is going to be (in my opinion) very much like S-2. I think that we were left to surmise so many situations from S-2 that we are not going to be exposed to the honesty and love that would be necessary to recover from the pain. Nothing against men but I would be much happier (if our worse fears play out) if Tina were to become involved with a woman. They are so insecure around each other after all they have been through that both are probably walking on egg shells. I hope that they are able to reconnect… Am I the only person who feels like I am going to be watching Mel and Lindsay from QAF all over again?
hey lastkid, remember me? still would like to hear froml you.pancha – the compliments still apply. i dont expect pretty. that was s1. no more from IC. but i always know that i will get excellent from you. thanks.
great chapter..bring on the alpha Bette. Although I don’t like the spoilers it still looks like the seaon will be interesting. If Tina goes off and does her own thing so be it. I just don’t want Bette to take it lying down as apart of her punishment for cheating. At some point you have to say enough is enough.
Damn girl…I’m with BTF. How can I survive S3 with this? LOL. Let’s hope my heart can take it…by all means continue. (Really don’t know what the says about me…hmmm, LOL).
Tina is long gone from her marriage. To flirt and kiss a guy in broad day light for all of your neighbors to see is just mean. Even after Shane told her she saw her, she still isn’t trying to be discrete. She doesn’t want Bette, let her go and stop hurting her. Now at least Bette can move on without feeling guilty. I think this Bette has forgiven herself. Bring on the finale(you said 3 chapters, right?)
when the l word first premired i like bette and tina as a couple,bette then cheated after tina lost the baby. i think the only reason why tina is doingthis is because bette isnt working and tina is now the bread winner. hey didntbette take care of both of them and never complained.i agree with 2005fan forever this does sound like melanieand lindsay a lot. but i heard that the senator lady is going to be after betteand that will piss tina off real goodremember last season when the women werearound her at alice and dana’s party andshe asked kit what they want. i hope tina realizes what she has in bette anddont fuck it up.maybe this just wants some from tina and gets it and begonewho knows.
wow loved your illustration of Bette being angry yet controlling it. what will Tina do now?
This is so good I felt compelled to comment again. Everything just fits together, the dialogue, the physical actions, the realism, the economy of words but so powerful. You should send this story to IC. Maybe they can incorporate into TLW.
Oh,wow. This is going to hurt like a mother, the story, I mean. B&T are already hurting like they have a monopoly on pain. But like I said the last time, Pancha, I always look forward to reading your fic. Write as you please, please. Cheers!
ooooooooooooooooooooooh. Great story. I love the drama!
pancha…it is breaking my heart but at least we know you love B & T as much as us. We can’t say the same for IC. I don’t trust her…I do trust you. Thanks!
oh pancha, I feel u on the comment about making season 3 easier to take. I really don’t believe that chaiken cares enough about these 2. if she did, she would treat them better, but we all know this. I love your bette. she should not allow her to continue to punish her. I am no longer as nervous about your story, but in case you are taking a mental tally—please either have our girls together on equal footing or break them up, because this hurting each other shit is for the birds……i mean why the hell would Tina kiss that guy on the street, esp after being confronted by shane! was trying to get caught?! i am starting to not like her character, even on the show she is less lovable than she was in s1.
AWW, STOP IT, STOP IT, STOP IT!!! DON’T DO THIS TO ME!! this chap hurt like hell. DAMN that was as cold as ice. but tina know damn well she was wrong for dat shit. they need to talk damnit!! hopefully they’ll talk before something drastic happens. please post soon. PEACE.
try to remember this is a story it’seal but my heart is breaking into pieces – iam not prepared for season 3 -i agree with everyone elses commits- keep telling self it’s not real maybe it will work between now and the 8th
Yup…just like you said, this is S3, and someone had better start some kind of B/T self help chat line. This is like a car wreck you know you shouldn’t look but you do anyway…(S3 I mean) But thankyou for writing this, I think it will make watching a lot easier..Why, Why, Why…IC better be unlisted…
If S3 will be anything like this story, then God help us all, it will not be good. As Little Monkey said, this is what happens when one partner has an affair whether it is hetero or gay. The level of trust will never be what it was before he affair and the love and affection and attraction is always lessened. And unless we have very strong people involved with a strong ethical code and a lot of forgiveness in their hearts, the marriage will begin to falter. And that is something I do not want to see in S3 or in this story. Alas and alack, I can not control everything. Hmmmmm sounds familiar. Thanks for the story and the post. Post soon please.
Just read both chapters and I’m in shock. I can’t belief Bette could stay that calm. I know she doesn’t want to hurt Tina but damn why not throw something at the wall. Bette is so hurt I just hope T will make it all better sooner then later.. at least try to make it better. If I was Bette I won’t forgive her that soon. She has to learn that some one on the side of there relationship is just stupid. And she has to learn that she can trust Bette and stop hurting her. A relationship isn’t all about sex there is more!
I Love This Story so much. S3 is going to be hard to watch but Bette and Tina should be fun. I Love the way you made Bette anger so clam and tina is so in trouble.
Good for Bette. It does seem like Tina just wants to punish Bette for her minor indescretion; she took Bette back and needs to stop w/ the punishment. I’m not saying that Tina should forget what Bette did but she actively forgave Bette for her mistake so she she needs to let the past stay dead in the past. Everybody boarding the Bette Porter train this way.
Crap. This is gonna be a long winter. Well like U said – U ahve to write it, have to raed it. Excellent asalways. Thanks for tking the time.
how would one always like to be punished for the mistake made?Well done,pancha. Bette should juz leave..till Tina come to her senses.S3 is gonna be one hell of a ride..!!your story prepares me the worst that’s comin!
Partner that was good, really good, high quality BP anger…
The fire came close butI was in Grand Prairie which is about 15 minutes from us. Love this yet hate it, Bette has been used as a door mat for a long time. Get tired of been walked on. She loves the baby, but she can’t make Tina happy. Thanks
Good drama pancha didn’t think you had it in you. Every moment was straining with tension. Love her or let her go Tina by all means fuck whomever you want but don’t tell her you love her and want to be with her, that would kill any mortal being. Well all I can say she seems to have gotten a free pass to explore the Robbie thing.
Tina seem royaliy fuked up s3! Good4Bette! :D she dun wnt2hrm Tina ne physical hrm cuz she still luv the bitch..Tina got2have sum big kahoonah’z makin on sum1 utha then Bette iun frnt of they daughter..Tina is kissing Robert in frnt of both B/T daughter lil Angie! nahh ah that unacceptable&disrespectful..If I was Bette I’d loose mekool2//..I would b pissed – mre then pissed I’d b disgusted..it sik doing that kinda R-Rated shit in frnt of ur child..she got a right2b SO god damn fukin angry..Lets hope Tina aint shagging this guy..THNX4writing, dun stop GRT chapter!!!! Post soon I hope?!
You know I have stayed clear of all spoilers, but at hte weekend came a cross by accident, have avoided them for months then by accident week before the show starts come across the trailers for S3. Is it me or am I sick, I have had a sick feeling in my stomach and have been depressed since I seen the Josh trailer and read the Pam Cole article I sooooo dont want my girls to split up, I will be sooooo depressed. Am I sooooo sad for letting a show do this to me
the writing is excellent..in fact, its too good..everything just seems so real that its heart wrenching to see Bette and Tina going through this….i really hope that there’ll be a happy ending after all the drama that i’m sure you’re gonna put us readers through..post soon=)
My blood is boiling while my hands are cold. I loathe cheating. I hate lying after cheating! BTW, Aberdeen is in northern Scotland, which is in northern UK. So basically it’s a very nortern place. I’m glad TiBette is everywhere. So please give them a happy ending. =D
Until now I’m enjoying this story. I understand Bette’s reaction she’s the brain one and her leaving was the best for the moment.What’s happening to Tina I thought she’s the good one but I guess I was wrong. When she tries to reach Bette… after the kiss… what about that?!!! It makes me throw up. I can’t bear when someone made a mistake and pretends that nothing happens at all…Very nice. Post soon!!!1
This will be my last comment on this story. I won’t be spoiled, although if I were to be, having you do it would be most preferable. Love you! Go Big Red!!!!