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After the storm.. the rainbow ch 02
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Previously
Bette: Tee?
Tina: yeah honey
Bette: I think John won we’re not going to the barber anymore
John: yesssssss we’re going to the park?
Bette: nope
John: ahh no mama im going to be a good boy
Tina: why not babe?
Bette: I think my water just broken
Tina: WHAT???????
After the storm… a rainbow ch 02
Tina: Bette are you sure? (jumping off the bed)
Bette: unless i have a pool between my legs, yes I’m pretty sure
Tina: ok stay calm everything is perfect no need to panic
Bette: Tee, you’re the one in panic
Tina: ok. I have to call someone to pick up John
John: no no I want to go too (jumping on the bed)
Tina: we re going to the hospital
John: oh needle in the butt hospital?
Tina: yes, that hospital
Bette: Tina, can you please help me?
Tina: oh sorry ok let’s go
Bette: are you going to the hospital naked?
Tina: (looking to herself) *****. Ok I need clothes
John: ohh bad word!
Tina got dressed and dressed John and helped Bette
Bette: I called Dr Wilson. She is on her way but i can’t reach
anyone to pick up John
Tina: I got the keys, the baby bag let’s go we can call someone there
John: mommy im hungry
Tina: you can eat on the way, come on
They were going to the car when Bette stopped
Tina: what?
Bette: let’s go in your car
Tina: yours is easier oh please Bette please tell me you don’t want to go in your precious car because you don’t want to make it dirty ? .
Bette: please?
Tina oh god! help me
Tina moved Bette’s car and they all entered in her car
Bette: oh god is hurting!
Tina: breathe baby breathe everything is going to be fine
Bette: give me your hand
Bette squeezed Tina’s hand
Tina: wow babe! I’m sorry but I need my hand to drive
John: mamma do you want my teddy?
Bette: thanks baby but I don’t want to see you cry when I tear up your bear ohhh Tina
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Another great chapter. I enjoyed the humor and familiar interaction here. Who could say that one of the most loyal and supportive person to make coments on the site was such a good writer and was hiding her gift from us until now? TBC? Of course!!!
yayyy eve is finally here !! Good job girl !! :D loved it very much , it was light and funnn read .keep up the gr8 job , i cant wait to read more , u should definitely continue the story , i am all for it :Dthanx :)10 bright shiny stars u to !!
OMG that was one hell of a chapter, i had tears running down my face while LMAO.. I don’t know if it was supposed to be funny but it made my day.. Thank you.. If you give me one more as fun as this chapter tomorrow i’ll pay for your wedding reciption.. LOL
Really nice story, do please continue, so John is definitely Bette’s son, as he is so stubborn. Look forward to your next chapter.
This is great…a little painfull but still great. Bette had a good point there. We don’t want to get the saab all dirty and gross..noway.
Oh, I’m connected to this site all day, and for some unknown reason, your story has slipped away from my eyes. But now I “found” it, and let me tell you I love it. So keep it up, you’re doing a great job, Please post again soon.
Great story. Yes, please continue. Thanks!
Wonderful chapter and please I want more more more. Ok post soon please, thanks!
great moments in time for me. thanks.
Pandora… that was so good… i laughed… and thanks for the trip down memory lane… john is a little devil.. i know i have a john to and he was so bad growing up… but now that hes 23… all is good… love this and yes i want you to continue..
Of course we want you to. What kinda question is that?=)
Of Course, we want you to continue. We love this story and this chapter was great. The Great Bette Porter giving birth, art imitates life. Just lovely. Thanks for the post.
This was funny…And yes you must continue like tonight or tomorrow…sound familiar?….LOL…Post Soon!
Indeed you should continue, it’s a good story. Good Job.
your so good now keep going of course
HA HA HA HA HA LMAO! with Bette she tell Tina unless I have a pool between my leg LOL! that was so funny OMG! Whoa! great I Love it it’s good to read some funny Tebette story I’m mean sometimes too much sad story it’s get me STRESS LOL! but you’re Story it’s Wonderful… Funny… and Whoa!…Loving…Hey pandora it’s Amazing that you have a great talent to write Bravo pandora Thanks that was Awesome!!!!!!!!
wow, why you were hinding that talent from me?, lol, that was so damn good baby im totally in love with John he is so cute and really is Bettes kid handful like her mother, lol that was great hope see more soon XX
Please continue. Bette giving birth funny as hell…post soon.
Congratulations my dear friend, you made me been there the whole story i wish you can write the next season, lol, please!!! and what about the sex it was awesome, you need to continue
just a wish come true, if i could have that life, thanks for the experience and the joy of reading your story my friend
i like this story especially because bette had the baby,and tina was a great coach and john is really funny.
that was fantastic – cant believe you were so nervous about posting when your so good and funny. why the question marks you totally have to continue!!!
pand good story babe u had me in stitches, u must continue, speak to ya soon.. mwah.
Wow that was so sweet. It sounds like John know just how to manipulate all the woman in his life. Nice story.