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After the storm.. the rainbow ch 02
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Tina: honey I know you’re in pain you’re complaining now but when you see her you will forget everything about the pain, remember when we had john? he looked so much like you that all the pain I was feeling simply disappeared
From the beginning they agreed that by insemination Tina would be the one caring Bette’s child and Bette Tina’s. That way they would be more legally protected by DNA and hospital documents and feeling more connected with their children
Bette: why doesn’t she want to come out? Ahhhhh She is your child for sure
Dr Wilson: its time Bette, your 100% dilated
Bette: where are the drugs? I want more drugs
Dr. Wilson: sorry, you can have nothing more for now on ok nowgive me a big push
Bette: ahhhh god (pushing). I’m paying for all of my sins
Tina: (laughing quietly) go on honey
Bette: oh please, tell what is so funny ohhhhhhhh
Tina: sorry baby you’re doing just great it won’t be much longer now, you’re amazing for doing this for us I love you
Tina is rubbing Bette’s back and breathing with her
Dr Wilson: one big push now Bette you can do it
Bette: (sweating and crying) ohh i can’t! i can’t take it anymore!
Tina: yes you can babe our little girl is almost here
Dr Wilson: ok Bette, now stop pushing
Bette: what??? I can’t hold i have to push ahhhh I have to push
Tina: babe stop pushing
Bette: I cant, I have to get this girl out of me ahhhhh
Tina: you’re doing great babe, you’re amazing
In seconds they heard a small cry going louder and louder
Dr Wilson: congratulations! You now have a beautiful and healthy baby girl
Tina: OMG..(Tina’s eyes full of tears) baby you did it!
Bette: (crying) we did it! Tee we did it!
Dr Wilson: Tina do you want to cut the cord?
Tina: yes (wiping the tears)
A few minutes later someone knocked the door
Tina: bring him to us
John entered the room
Tina: cmom here baby do you want to meet your sister?
John: yep
Tina lifted John in her arms. The nurse is cleaning the baby while Dr Wilson works on Bette
Tina: say hi to your little sister
John: hi gross “litti” sister
Tina: let’s say hi to your brave mom and kiss her?
John: hi mamma (bending to kiss Bette)
Bette: hi baby you were given a hard time to your aunt Alice?
John: aunt
Tina: (laughing) for your silence she would promised take you to
The nurse: here we go (handing the baby to Bette)
Bette: hi Eve we’re so happy you’re here (looking at Tina)
Tina: she is beautiful (kissing Bette and the baby on the forehead)
Bette: just like you
Tina: just like us
TBC? (If you want me to)
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Another great chapter. I enjoyed the humor and familiar interaction here. Who could say that one of the most loyal and supportive person to make coments on the site was such a good writer and was hiding her gift from us until now? TBC? Of course!!!
yayyy eve is finally here !! Good job girl !! :D loved it very much , it was light and funnn read .keep up the gr8 job , i cant wait to read more , u should definitely continue the story , i am all for it :Dthanx :)10 bright shiny stars u to !!
OMG that was one hell of a chapter, i had tears running down my face while LMAO.. I don’t know if it was supposed to be funny but it made my day.. Thank you.. If you give me one more as fun as this chapter tomorrow i’ll pay for your wedding reciption.. LOL
Really nice story, do please continue, so John is definitely Bette’s son, as he is so stubborn. Look forward to your next chapter.
This is great…a little painfull but still great. Bette had a good point there. We don’t want to get the saab all dirty and gross..noway.
Oh, I’m connected to this site all day, and for some unknown reason, your story has slipped away from my eyes. But now I “found” it, and let me tell you I love it. So keep it up, you’re doing a great job, Please post again soon.
Great story. Yes, please continue. Thanks!
Wonderful chapter and please I want more more more. Ok post soon please, thanks!
great moments in time for me. thanks.
Pandora… that was so good… i laughed… and thanks for the trip down memory lane… john is a little devil.. i know i have a john to and he was so bad growing up… but now that hes 23… all is good… love this and yes i want you to continue..
Of course we want you to. What kinda question is that?=)
Of Course, we want you to continue. We love this story and this chapter was great. The Great Bette Porter giving birth, art imitates life. Just lovely. Thanks for the post.
This was funny…And yes you must continue like tonight or tomorrow…sound familiar?….LOL…Post Soon!
Indeed you should continue, it’s a good story. Good Job.
your so good now keep going of course
HA HA HA HA HA LMAO! with Bette she tell Tina unless I have a pool between my leg LOL! that was so funny OMG! Whoa! great I Love it it’s good to read some funny Tebette story I’m mean sometimes too much sad story it’s get me STRESS LOL! but you’re Story it’s Wonderful… Funny… and Whoa!…Loving…Hey pandora it’s Amazing that you have a great talent to write Bravo pandora Thanks that was Awesome!!!!!!!!
wow, why you were hinding that talent from me?, lol, that was so damn good baby im totally in love with John he is so cute and really is Bettes kid handful like her mother, lol that was great hope see more soon XX
Please continue. Bette giving birth funny as hell…post soon.
Congratulations my dear friend, you made me been there the whole story i wish you can write the next season, lol, please!!! and what about the sex it was awesome, you need to continue
just a wish come true, if i could have that life, thanks for the experience and the joy of reading your story my friend
i like this story especially because bette had the baby,and tina was a great coach and john is really funny.
that was fantastic – cant believe you were so nervous about posting when your so good and funny. why the question marks you totally have to continue!!!
pand good story babe u had me in stitches, u must continue, speak to ya soon.. mwah.
Wow that was so sweet. It sounds like John know just how to manipulate all the woman in his life. Nice story.