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After the storm the rainbow ch 06
John: nooo
John: let’s go to the park aunt Alice, you promised
John: what’s bucks?
John: (smiling) oh ok!
John: ok
Later on the
Tina: hi babe I’m back, hi Kit (leaning to kiss Bette and then Eve)
Kit: hi Tina I started lunch
Bette: hi tee how was your day at work
Tina: stressful but we had a lot of work done that means I will have 2 more days free just for be with my 2 princesses and my little king(smiling)
Bette: I’m glad you’re home we missed you (kissing Tina)
Tina: me too, are you hungry? I’m going to help Kit finish making lunch
Bette: did
Tina: no, and she was going to take John to cut his hair
Kit: oh good luck to
At the barber
Barber Tom: OMG! look who is coming!
Barber Jose: oh no God, not him
John: hi Tommy (entering)
Alice: hi for the look on your faces you already know him (smiling) his mother wants the usual for him
Back to Bette and Tina’s kingdom
Bette feels a little dizzy
Tina: Babe are you ok?
Bette: yeah, I’m ok. just feel something, like a bad feeling
Tina: you’re just tired honey, cmom lets go back inside John will be here by lunch time
30 minutes later outside the barber
John: look aunt Alice, a bird, can I have it?
John: Aunt Alice can I have ice cream? You promised
John: yep
John: I want the bird
And didn’t notice a car coming untilPOW
TBC
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(69 votes, average: 4.33 out of 5)
ahhh !!!! — okay that was great but you SO better have the next chapter 99% written ….
AHHHHH NO YOu didn’t. Pandora…. Please… Okay, maybe Tina won’t make it in my story…. LOL Please let him be okay, he has to. Please post really soon, like right now, please?
No, not John. He is the comic relief of the story. He has to be okay—-Okay???
You will let us hagging like that? I hope everything turn out okay to John and Alice… Bette will want to kill Alice. Thanks.
please let the car swirl and hit a tree not john.
Pandora… you devil… and poor alice… she will never have her own kids after this with john… ok just make him ok..not hurt to bad… and lauren25…if your reading this.. you better not kill off tina…
oh no !!!! John must survive ….Please please please …anxiously awaiting your next post that John is ok … irt sua namorada, isn’t it wonderful to be in love…
Oh no!!!!!! Please let John be ok…..Im awaiting your next post like in an hour?
no kids being hurt. nuh uh no way. *waves* at ally.
Shit this is bad and hope John is ok. Bette and Tina will going crazy if someting have happen to John and Alice is did lol. Post soon please, thanks!
Woo that was heavy. I’m with everyone please let John be ok..let someone jump in-front of the car and push him away..please. What I noticed was that Bette was feeling weird at the same time when it happened. A special mother power? or something like that?
Hope John is ok…if not Alice is in big trouble…post soon
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!! leave us hanging like that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
My baby kept telling me how funny this story is, and since my boss is out today, I decided now was a fine time to read it. Succ, you could have told me about John & the car!!!! (*_*)……..Please post again soon and here’s hoping that nothing happened to the little terror….I mean, that precious little boy!!
pandora…I just read all of your chapters and I am enjoying your story. Of course, I did not like the last chapter I read to have John getting hit by a car. please post very soon