Fan Fiction
This story has been set to a rating of R. Age verification is required to proceed.
After the storm.. the rainbow ch 07
Login to add story to favorites
(62 votes, average: 4.24 out of 5)You need to be a registered member to rate this post.
Loading ...
30 minutes later outside the barber
John: look aunt Alice, a bird, can I have it?
John: Aunt Alice can I have ice cream? You promised
John: yep
John: I want the bird
And didn’t notice a car coming untilPOW
After the storm.. the rainbow ch 07
911 attendant: 911 what’s your emergency?
911 attendant: calm down maam, tell me what’s wrong?
911 attendant: maam tell me where you are, some address so I can send you help
The ambulance showed up and gave John the first attendance and head to the ER of
Bette: where’s my son? where’s he Alice? (Shaking her)
Bette:
Tina: Bette, calm down this will not going to help, let’s try to find out something
In that time a young doctor come to talk to
Dr. Carter: Ms Pieszecki? I have some news about( reading the file) John Gabriel Kennard Porter
Bette: please tell me he is ok
Dr Carter: and who you are maam?
Bette: I am his mother
Dr Carter: ok he had a concussion and he is still not awake we agreed that it would be better to put him on induced coma to prevent any further brain damage due a possible intra-cranial hemorrhage but his vital signal are ok, we are going to make a CT to evaluate the extension of his injurious and if he had any hemorrhage in his brain
Comments
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.
You and Lauren are on a contest about who post more lately? At least your drama ended here. Another great chapter. Thanks.
btw Dr. Carter? You are seeing a lot of ER, huh? lol. Good job with the medical drama.
Great as always, thank heavens that John made it through. As for me being mean? I doubt it… LOL I’m just taking the story where it wants to go… post soon LOL ;)
Thanks for not letting anything happen to John. Tina nor Bette would be able to handle something like that. Thanks for the post.
Great chapter, thankyou, for keeping John alive, it is nice to see, as everyone seems to be killing someone off. Looking forward to your next chapter.
ok pandora… all is forgiven… i still love you and your story… so now he wants a puppy… get him one of those virtual puppies… you don’t have to walk it.. feed it… or clean up after it… my kind of pet… later baby
Thank you, thank you, thank you……if anything had happened to John I would have stopped reading right here! I am glad in he mentioned that all of this was his fault for not obeying Alice! Kudos to you Pan!!
you know pandora…i think all of you fanfic authors have it in you to kill us. : ) thanks for the post and can’t wait for the next.
Love that John. Thanks for keeping his sense of humor in tact ;-)
Thank god Jonh is ok and thank you for not killing him. Well this is just an accident and no one want that had happen right, and hope Bette will talk to Alice. Ok post soon please, thanks! Oh I have 1 question is Tina, Jonh birth mother or Bette?
kovac and carter, eh? lol. thx 4 not killing john… hehe alices fate on the other hand im not too sure abt :P
thanks for not killing the little man,bette needs to go apoligize to alice she is hurting right know.
I am so lovin you right now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! great post!!!!!!!!!!!
God I felt bad for Alice…I am glad John is ok and Bette is going to forgiv Alice…Always like a little drama, please post soon…thanks a bunch
hey baby, why you said he was dead? i didnt deserve this, youre going to pay, lol, great baby as always
i was so worried about john that i missed the carter and kovac references — thank you for not being as mean as lauren25…
aaawww poor Al.. but i understand Bette’s fear too.. gimmie more ;)
Glad to see that John is ok…..Now big him home along with the puppy…LOL…Post soon!
hey you – am reading this while on msn to you as well i love your story its so funny and sweet i see you took the sdvise about the drama must add tho that i dont advocate hitting children with cars lol glad little john is alive post soon hun